Hellion ch 01 - EDITS
Added 2018-01-04 22:55:29 +0000 UTCI've been working hard trying to perfect the first chapter so here are some of the changes I made! This summarizes most of it but feel free to reread the first chapter to get a better grasp~
Most of these edits were made due to my poor planning/writing from the beginning. I hope it makes a lot more sense now! This will definitely be much better for the comic in the long run~
I look forward to starting chapter 2 this month! There will be much more demon action this time around, I promise!;;;;
Comments
it's like "rider" with a hard "I" sound c:
Apalloh
2020-03-31 00:19:34 +0000 UTCHow do you pronounce Reider’s name? I feel like I’m pronouncing it wrong.
Rachel W.
2020-03-29 09:11:48 +0000 UTCPffft that last panel made me laugh XD
Kisarafox
2018-01-09 20:10:51 +0000 UTCExcited for chapter 2!
Anna Faught
2018-01-04 23:03:59 +0000 UTC
