Ghost in the City: Early Chapter 243
Added 2026-03-20 00:46:44 +0000 UTCComments
> be Motorola > hired to make music for Bushido XI > Hiromi persuades you to visit the set with her for "inspiration" (read: excuse for Corpo networking) > see stunt actors waving swords around > pfft, scrubs > oh, "you'd like to see me do as well"? > CHALLENGE: ACCEPTED > why yes, I did just triple backflip out of a window and cut a bullet out of the air > ...you want me to star in _what_? > Hiromi, halp m... why are there eddie signs in your eyes? Is that a new kiroshi setting? It's notable to me that the new Perk is for performance in general, not just music. Another opportunity for motoko to fail upward, methinks.
Apeljohn
2026-03-20 12:52:08 +0000 UTCProbably need some timeskips to get more towards edgerunners considering she already has connections to multiple characters and is planning on getting the sandy.
Kirvin
2026-03-20 12:37:32 +0000 UTCSome constructive criticism: I read all the Ghost in the City chapters. Their great. Motoko is fun and crazy, but the good kind of crazy, mostly. The problem is the story doesn't feel like it's headed in any particular direction. Very slice of life. A bit too slice of life I think. You need a foil. You should make Mr Blue Eyes that foil where all the problems she faces in the future stem from him, like a Moriarty. It would link you with much of V's story but would allow you to expand the world without having to rely on the game plot. You could take the story in so many directions this way, and it would feel like Motoko has more stakes to fight against instead of just silly fun with a gun or silly fun with a guitar.
Overclocked
2026-03-20 12:23:27 +0000 UTCWell, there were only three girls in that room and Motoko doesn’t wear lipstick…
Dwayne Parker
2026-03-20 02:57:24 +0000 UTCAlex is so fucking dead. How is this dude so stupid 🤦. Did he meth himself into retarded land? Cause im betting he did at this point 😆 🤣
Fortunis
2026-03-20 02:47:19 +0000 UTCHmmmmmmmm. Me thinks they gonna try and pirate her song.
PseudoSim
2026-03-20 01:40:30 +0000 UTCThanks Choom. Keep it up
Marcus Jorgensen
2026-03-20 01:40:04 +0000 UTCThe blessed chapters keep appearing!
ReclusiveTony
2026-03-20 01:34:53 +0000 UTCI've been having a tough week, but I'm still smiling like a loon over here thanks to you. I love this story so much. Thanks for the chapters, you are spoiling us.
Gilgamesh Archer
2026-03-20 01:34:42 +0000 UTCIs the trick here that Hiromi is gonna get hit by falling debris on the movie set?
Perf
2026-03-20 01:34:04 +0000 UTCNice! This and PTV are my favorites so it’s good to see some updates. I wonder how much longer it’ll be before she kills her annoying ‘manager’.
Fayen
2026-03-20 01:28:26 +0000 UTCSeems like a wild night lol. Who'd she kiss I wonder? Maybe all? 🤣
Mark James Reyes
2026-03-20 01:27:28 +0000 UTCI hope we get an alternative POV that explains what happened. I am annoyed.
TheOne320
2026-03-20 01:26:32 +0000 UTCI never thought about it but David and Jun are both chromed up himbos with a good heart. David is much smarter than Jun but I don't think Becca was attracted to his intelligence anyway. Her being into Jun makes a lot of sense
W Maxwell Cassity-Guilliom
2026-03-20 01:26:07 +0000 UTCOne more time doesn't feel like a complete song. Probably better for film.
Meaning Yellow
2026-03-20 01:19:45 +0000 UTC
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