Ghost in the City: Early Chapter 200
Added 2024-07-16 17:17:11 +0000 UTCI considered going out and using it right away, but I needed to test it first, and I had perfectly good guinea pigs.
I mean friends!
Ichi and Malcolm were summoned!
The little food place I had called them too was nice enough, but I wasn’t inside. Instead I was on a roof across the way watching the two boys arrive, look around not seeing me, and slide into a booth.
I quickly hacked into both of them and slipped in the Daemon , making sure to set it to the lowest setting.
I didn’t want to give them a heart attack after all! This was just some minor fuckery-Teasing. Just minor teasing! Between chooms!
Watching the two it didn’t take long before Ichi jerked in his seat and looked around as if searching for something.
Malcolm asked him a question and Ichi just shook his head and they went back to their discussion. Then Malcolm jumped nearly out of the booth as he patted at his legs and then ducked under the booth but came up looking confused.
The two boys settled back in, and then it just kept happening. Odd twitches, or slight movement.
Closing my eyes I opened it again, connecting to the Daemons so they’d send the data to me as well.
I thought about the Laughing Man a lot when it comes to hacking. The ability to just remove yourself from someone's vision, or change how you look in real time is incredibly powerful in a world where everyone has cyberware vision.
I wasn’t at that point yet. Altering someone's vision in real time was insanely resource intensive, at least as far as I understood it. Of course that understanding could change as I leveled up more and more.
But that didn’t mean I couldn’t touch on that sort of Hack.
Onryo was very simple. Slowly over time the user's vision would have flashes of something, in the corner of their eye, or in the shadows of a table below them.
A ghostly shadowed version of me with white hair and glowing red eyes, and claws and fangs.
I had gone all out.
If the Tyger Claws wanted to call me Onryo, then I was going to scare the shit out of my enemies.
So I watched as a faint version appeared over Malcolm’s shoulder, a hand reaching out, not in Malcolms vision, but in Ichi’s. He twitched and called out, Malcolm reacted, his hand slapping his own shoulder right through the image making it vanish. Not that Malcolm saw it… Hmm.
Both boys looked at each other and then spoke.
Then I got a call.
Oops. I think they figured it out.
I leapt off the building without answering and crossed the street before entering the diner.
“Motoko! Was this you?” Malcolm demanded and I raised my hands in surrender.
“Sorry! Sorry! I’ll pay for lunch so forgive me okay?” I pleaded giving the boys a cute look.
“You were already going to pay for lunch!” Ichi joined in as I joined them and slumped.
“Dinner?”
“And snacks!” Malcolm added and I nodded in surrender. I had been fucking with them after all.
“So what was that?”
“My new quick hack! Version 1, anyways. While watching you all react, I realize it has some weaknesses. Shared network alterations are a must if this is going to work on a group of people, and I need something to induce a physical feeling.” I muttered, already my vision was covered by the code as I started fiddling with it.
“Jeeze. That scared the shit out of me. Why make a quick hack that just makes you look like a ghost?”
“Mostly to terrify my enemies. It’s an Onryo.” I explained and both boys nodded. They had heard that nickname for me before. “Basically I don’t even have to attack a group. I can just hack them, and if they don’t have a netrunner capable of realizing what’s going on. They’ll be too busy chasing ghosts to stop me from doing whatever I want.”
The boys both nodded along as I spoke, but then I revealed the truth. “Of course an Optic Reboot would be more efficient. Just blind them and get to whatever I need to do, but sometimes you just want to scare the shit out of a group of assholes.”
“Hear hear!” Ichi cheered and the boys clinked their glasses together.
Great, I was forgiven.
—--
“Ah, there you are.” Jun greeted me as I got home. I threw my jacket over the back of the couch as I leapt over to flop into the cushions beside him.
“Sup, Jun?”
“Those fuckers that were trying to mess with you? Don’t worry about it. Fujimura-Sama made sure that it won’t happen again.”
“Yeah? The fuck did they want anyways?”
“Nothing. Just… Stupid shit.”
“Blackmail?” I asked, because it had felt like I was about to be blackmailed.
“Not, exactly. I think he wanted to try and weaken Fujimura-Sama by stealing you away. I think he was trying to recruit you.”
“What? Why? I’m pretty sure he hates me.”
“Motoko, Moritaka isn’t the sort of man that would allow his feelings to get in the way of his goals.” Jun said and I frowned a bit at that.
He didn’t seem that way when I met him.
Jun noticed my disbelieving look and just rolled his eyes at me.
“Don’t worry about it. I took care of it and Moritaka is getting talked to by Nakagawa-Sama. He overstepped a bit this time. Especially since they started a fight with you.” Jun said idly, and then threw me a wink.
Ah. I see. “Yep. They started the fight. Definitely.” I assured him having picked up the context.
He smiled and that was that.
I relaxed the irritation of it all sliding off my shoulders. I knew that I wasn’t done with Tyger Claw nonsense again, but at least I could kick it down the road a bit more.
That was the goal. Just keep pushing the things I can’t deal with safely now until later, until I could deal with them.
The fact lit a fire under me again and I hurried to my room.
Time to get some work done.
I scooped up the Tachikoma that was practicing something with its blocks and shut it down for a bit. I needed to do an upgrade. Luckily I had the parts from when I made the directional mics.
I popped off the out shell with a few screws and looked at the internals.
Flashed my eyes at my laptop and accessed it remotely pulling up the CAD software. As I worked I rolled around my room grabbing the parts from different places. A spare mic that had rolled under my dresser.
Some wires in the top drawer right next to my underwear. The soldering iron was somewhere, and it took a minute to find it in my closet hidden under some clothes.
Grabbing everything I rolled back to my work desk as I finished up the design.
I really just had to make sure it had some room, everything else was already in place. An hour later I was done.
The Tachikoma now had access to a microphone. Able to pick up sounds, so it wouldn’t be deaf. A few holes drilled into the case would let it hear, and it was done. Put back together. I set it on the table and started programming.
Just because it had the hardware didn’t mean it knew how to use it.
Luckily I didn’t even really need to program the whole thing. Microphone software to let a program ‘hear’ was old code.
I ripped it from a few different devices just in the apartment, including the TV and my radio. Fiddled with the code so it was actually functional to my needs, and not full of garbage and then updated the Tachikoma.
I accepted the alerts that popped up over the little project.
100 Engineering XP Gained.
100 Crafting XP Gained.
100 Technical Ability XP Gained
I got a few alerts for each one. But no level ups.
That was fine. It was an easy project, and the system always liked when I finished something, but it wasn’t exactly complicated.
Just a minor update to the Tachikoma Chassis.
I wish I had the hardware upgrades for its mind. I hadn’t heard anything from Hiromi about it since I brought it up a while back.
Sure, the Tachikoma were functional as scouting drones right now, but if I wanted a scout drone, I’d have bought some off the shelf garbage. The Tachikoma were more than that.
Shaking it off, I made a note to bring it up with Hiromi sometime soon, and instead rolled over to my programming laptop.
I turned on the Tachikoma, and basically pushed it through some tests for its new mic. While I went to work on the Onryo Hack.
Like I had told the boys it wasn’t really that efficient. Blinding people would work better than just fucking with their vision. But efficiency wasn’t always the right path in every situation.
Now I had to figure out how to craft a hack that had another sense involved. Touch was… Difficult.
Sure, if they had Real Skinn, or other similar products, it would be easier. Real Skinn had sensors to transmit touch, but tapping into that and keeping it all in sync with the visual changes…
No wait. I didn’t need to have it actually interact with Real Skinn.
The flash of inspiration had me cackling as I checked my own hardware to make sure it was functional.
Funny thing about Neural Links, and Agents. Agents had silent alerts and notifications integral to the system.
Guess what it could do? It could make a buzzing, or a shock feeling on a palm, or something like that, but it wasn’t really doing anything to that part of your body, it was just sending an electrical signal to the brain.
I could co opt that. Agents were touted as being pretty difficult to get into, but it just wasn’t the case. The on board AI wasn’t really great. They were good at learning habits and behaviors, and assisting their user, but they weren’t intelligent enough to counter a foreign install.
I went to work. Watching over the Tachikoma with one eye as it ran around exploring sounds and registering them into its system.
I winced as I noticed the file growing exponentially, and had to take a break to stop it and work with the Tachikoma, to register an easier way to process sounds.
I couldn’t have it create a file library of every sound it heard. If the Tachikoma did that, it would bloat so large the Tachikoma’s mind would break under the weight of its own memories.
Well. It would crash until I fixed it, but the point remained.
So instead, I needed it to process sounds not as a copy pasted registry, but as an inquisitive module.
Take in the sound, Look to register what it was and process accordingly. Except for speech, which would be in a registry library.
Those were pretty small though. People were more than capable of fitting an entire language software in their agents alone…
I should probably get more languages myself actually.
It almost made me stop working, but I shook it off. I’ll make a note to pick up a few of the common ones. Japanese would probably help a lot when dealing with the Weebs.
—-
“Hey, Motoko! Your song is on!” Jun called out suddenly and I looked away from my programming to faintly hear my own voice coming from the living room. Rising up I stepped outside and indeed it was true.
This Fffire was playing. And Jun was doing his proud older brother thing as he looked from the radio to me.
It still felt weird to hear my own voice.
Jun was quiet as the song played through, just looking all proud that it was on, and only when it was over and Ash came over the air did he turn to me.
“So? What do you think?”
“I think it still sounds awful and I hate it.” I told him, but that was actually lying, and he caught that. Giving me a look.
“C’mon don’t be like that.”
“It’s weird.” I answered truthfully. “I should probably do some more songs soon.”
“Oh!? You have some more ideas?” He asked, sounding interested which made it a bit awkward when they weren’t exactly ‘ideas’ in the creative sense.
“Yeah something like that. I’m sure Hiromi is going to bug me soon about putting out more songs… Or doing more gigs.” I groaned at that idea.
“Heh.” Jun just chuckled at me and stood up throwing an arm over my shoulder pulling me in for a hug. “I think you’ll somehow live.” He teased and I gently elbowed him, but didn’t really pull away.
“Shut up. It’s not like I want to come up with an entire new set list or anything… Even though I have some ideas.” I mumbled, and that was my mistake.
Talking to Jun. That was the mistake.
“Hehe!” He said and suddenly I was lifted up, hands under my armpits as Jun spun me around in the air. “I look forward to hearing it! When are you going to be done? Need any help?”
“Nooo!” I groaned as I kicked a little, but Jun was lifting me up and it wasn’t like I wanted to really dick kick him or something. So I could only really pout and look away from him as he hefted me up like I was a toy.
Stupid light body. I was going to get a full body conversion and weigh a ton or something and laugh as Jun failed to mess with me like this!
Then Jun put me down and sort of looked embarrassed. “I was uh, talking to Alice the other day. She mentioned that she wanted to ask if you wanted to play a song with her band sometime.” He offered and I blinked.
“Really?”
“Really. Her band, Violet Hemorrhage is going through some shit. So she’s looking for people to play with. You know?”
“Violent Hemorrhage.” I corrected him, and shook myself a bit after he put me back down, adjusting my clothes. “And I don’t know Jun. If they are having band trouble. I don’t want to stick my nose in it.”
“Maybe just a jam session then? I bet she’d be happy to help you play some of your songs.”
I narrowed my eyes at him. “You just want me to focus on Rockerboy stuff so I’m not getting into fights.”
“I think you have an amazing talent, and want you to be happy… And I want you to focus on Rockerboy stuff, so you aren’t getting into fights.” He said and I scoffed but couldn’t help but chuckle. I’m pretty sure I had used that one on Jun before.
“Tell her, I don’t mind jamming or maybe doing some stuff together sometime… I guess.”
“Preem. I’ll call her and let her know, but before that. Tell me about this new set!”
“Ugh. I don’t… I haven’t really thought about it.” I said truthfully, but now that I was… I could pull something together… Or I could fuck with Jun. “I’ll write some love songs! All about love and sex and-Urk!”
“No love songs!” Jun demanded grabbing for me which I ducked and dodged, he swiped at me, getting more serious as I started humming a tune as I slipped around, and then jumped flying over his head in a flip.
“You can’t stop me!” I called out, and starting singing. “I’m in love with the shape of you! We push and pull like Magnet do, although my heart is falling too, I’m in love with your body!” I sang running around and struggling not to die laughing as Jun groaned with every line chasing after me, he was far less nimble over the couch.
“Motoko!”
“C’mon Jun. You know I’m not really interested in doing a love song.” I offered, laughing, and Jun sighed out seeming to relax a bit.
“Thank God.”
“But I’ll likely put one out eventually. I mean, love songs are super popular.” I admitted and Jun just glared at me, but I laughed at his look. “Relax Jun. Maybe I’ll get someone else to sing it, and I’ll just give it to someone.”
“No love songs.” He grumbled at me, which made me cackle and I shook my head refusing to accept his demand. Not that I had much interest in them.
“Alright. I’m getting back to work. Talk to you later Jun.” I waved him off laughing at our little rough housing as I headed back into my room.
—--
I pulled up to the parking area near the Straight Lane Apartments, and hummed the first few bars of a random song.
I had spoken with Hiromi about formalizing stuff, so here it was.
The first official gig day of Section 9.
Grabbing some gear I headed down the street humming all along as I reached the entrance, and noticed some familiar faces hanging around. The girls that tried to get overly protective of their gang leader. They noticed me and sort of looked away.
Preem, not dealing with that today.
I walked past and to the elevator heading down not surprised to see Hiromi already there, along with someone that did surprise me. Rebecca.
“Hey Becca.” I greeted happily and she looked up from where she was sort of looking over Hiromi’s shoulder at the laptop she was working on to wave. Hiromi quickly looked up and smiled.
“Motoko! Great timing. We got the work details. This should be something fun. We are retaking some data that some Maelstrom stole.” Hiromi offered and I perked up.
Hey, that sounded like fun. Also fuck Maelstrom.
I walked over and stood behind Hiromi to look over her other shoulder from Rebecca and see. “Hmmm. That’s not a large group either.”
“O-of course! They brought a lot of heat on their heads. So they are hiding out. We can move in and clear them out and make some good eddies.”
“Preem. Who's the Fixer?” I asked and Hiromi went a bit quiet so I looked away from the computer to her. “Hiromi?”
“Regina.” Hiromi finally said and I blinked in surprise.
“Huh, I didn't think she wanted to work with me.”
“I uh, don’t actually know. I didn’t tell her that you were involved.” Hiromi admitted and I shrugged.
“Okay. That’s fine. I don’t like dealing with that part of the gig anyways. I’ll leave it to you.”
“Yeah! You can leave it to me!” Hiromi said with a big dopey smile. I smiled back and heard the elevator start up.
“That’s the boys.” I confirmed it with a quick check of the lobby camera.
“Good, I was about to start puking.” Rebecca said and I shifted to her.
“What? Are you sick?” I asked worried and Rebeeca stilled before looking away.
“Nah, just I’m good. Don’t worry about it. We’re about to kill some gonks, and make some eddies!” Rebecca cheered, sounding normal… She didn’t look sick…
I shook it off as Ichi arrived, with Malcolm in tow, both of them looked ready. Already mostly kitted out.
“Perfect! Everyone suit up. I’ll do an initial sweep of their system before we hit them.”
Comments
No, not really. Grooming would be if Mokoto actively knew Hiromi's crush and fueled the flames. She doesn't and so there is no power imbalance just a one-sided crush. Calling this grooming would be like saying a student crushing on a teacher when the teacher has no clue is grooming. Asinine and ragebait
Pegysussy
2024-07-20 02:01:22 +0000 UTCIsn't that technically grooming...
Beelzy
2024-07-19 20:05:58 +0000 UTCOhhhh actually, the Begging cover by Manskin seems like a perfect Hiromi love song lol
White Neko Knight
2024-07-18 20:17:09 +0000 UTCSpeaking of love songs. How insane do you think Jun would go if Motoko did a rendition of Luis Fonsi's Despacito? Or any of the sexy club songs for that matter.
White Neko Knight
2024-07-18 20:04:08 +0000 UTCAre we gonna see Sasha again at any point? It's been a while and Motoko has unresolved beef
Ozzy117
2024-07-17 20:16:15 +0000 UTCThis was in a conversation thread before but The tatchi drones probably will not have the stealth at the level of the Flathead because it was designed to beat rivaling corporations electronic security measures. But considering It's primary Opponents are scavs, wraiths, And gang members of similar caliber it'll be a terrifying drone system in its own right. Still I hope to see a corpo reaction to a drone made by some underaged brain damaged netrunner, remember there is evidence of Makoto melting her net deck, in night City That's at least half as good as the militech Flathead drone. Made at the cost of a few thousand eddies at most. Because it's implied that the investment of the Flathead drone by militech costs millions of Eurodollars if not billions to ensure its security and development.
runedead56
2024-07-17 19:32:44 +0000 UTCSpider ripperdoc: remember me? You pathetic ghost!? Makoto: actually I completely forgot all about you... However, I thank you for reminding me. I have some... aggression I need to work off. * Revs cut-o-matic with malicious intent*
runedead56
2024-07-17 19:19:52 +0000 UTCI didn't mean import it wholesale, or even fully trust it (the code). I mean, where else is she going to find ai that have self evolved for years? At the very least, she can learn quite a bit from the code (what works, what doesn't). As for integration of the personality cores (using portal terminology for GlaDOS), I'd keep them in non-integrated systems where they can't interact with the rest of the net until they've been thoroughly checked for backdoors etc. This way they're not going to waste, and Del doesn't have to worry about extra (potentially foreign) code being integrated into it's systems.
Sup3r J4k3
2024-07-17 15:26:18 +0000 UTCSeeing how the AI's are past the wall and where the ones to cause del to split and are doing a lot of work in the background towards a big attack on humanity id say keep the Ai's far away from motokos systems. Seriously the Ai stuff in that game got very into cthulhu horror.
That Warden
2024-07-17 14:49:05 +0000 UTCDamn, I completely forgot about that guy. Honestly, he's so far back in Motoko's mind at this point he could actually get away with everything if he dips. Motoko trying to not be obsessed with revenge chasing will mean she will give up for her own sanity. Of course, he won't do that. Unfortunately, he doesn't even know he should be using the generous window of time he has to gtfo.
Alzhan
2024-07-17 11:40:26 +0000 UTCRight but fingers still has it right? Edit: never mind I looked it up, haven't seen edgerunners
Orinari
2024-07-17 10:25:05 +0000 UTCEither Hiromi is going to be incredibly confused that Motoko's singularity suddenly inverts into a white hole when she turns 18 or she's going to finally jump Motoko during her birthday week.
White Neko Knight
2024-07-17 09:16:37 +0000 UTCJust normal ICE. Black ICE isnt' something you can really have as a single person. ICE protects a person against a hack, Black ICE is any form of ICE that attacks back and kills the attacker. Which isn't really a thing for cyberware.
Seras
2024-07-17 06:54:04 +0000 UTCHeh! Shape of You is the only Ed Sheeran song I can even sort of stomach, yeah it's not bad.
Seras
2024-07-17 06:53:00 +0000 UTCShe isn't going to go to Fingers for the Sandy he had. She is waiting to get Davids Sandy because it's a LOT better.
Seras
2024-07-17 06:52:01 +0000 UTCTime to play the waiting game. I'm a patient woman
Pegysussy
2024-07-17 06:51:57 +0000 UTCThe plan is for Motoko/Hiromi but I have to wait for Hiromi to hit 18. So that's gonna be a while.
Seras
2024-07-17 06:47:46 +0000 UTCDang, that's true. Let's add more to the shopping list that Hiromi is working on. Section 9 needs Black ICE eventually, then each of them will be a walking landmine for enemy netrunners
Heidao
2024-07-17 06:37:34 +0000 UTCPoor Hiromi, girl has no luck. Sera please have them get together at some point. They're too cute
Pegysussy
2024-07-17 03:13:24 +0000 UTCI see so you're just being an asshole to be an asshole. One I never said it was impossible YOU did. Two there's never been any indication of slave Biotech in this story and bringing in shit from a different story to "prove a point" makes you look stupid. Lastly while cyberpunk bioware can and sometimes does have limited tech enhancements (mostly via nanotech) the entire reason people prefer it is BECAUSE it's fucking hard to hack. Now begone troll.
Fortunis
2024-07-17 02:59:52 +0000 UTCCongrats on Chapter 200!!! If you do have Motoko do a jam session, I believe you can't go wrong with Paramore.
Urbane_Bomber
2024-07-17 02:28:13 +0000 UTCIf Motoko is making new songs, I definitely recommend Shape of You. Just add a touch of synth and market it to the Animals. Mo fans, baby!
amin johari
2024-07-17 02:09:38 +0000 UTCMaybe spider guy, who cut off her arms. He’s still alive.
MikeL
2024-07-17 01:53:44 +0000 UTCThanks for the new chapter!! Chapter 200!!!
Suls87
2024-07-17 00:29:04 +0000 UTCIv lost the timeline, about when would she get that sandy from fingers
Orinari
2024-07-17 00:19:12 +0000 UTCSame, they all felt so unsatisfying...
Sup3r J4k3
2024-07-16 23:45:17 +0000 UTC200!
White Neko Knight
2024-07-16 23:45:09 +0000 UTCThat's a complicated one. I never really liked any of the choices in their own way.
Seras
2024-07-16 23:41:58 +0000 UTCThank you!
Seras
2024-07-16 23:39:15 +0000 UTCYeah early installment weirdness. I wasn't sure how much carry over there was going to be at the start.
Seras
2024-07-16 23:38:44 +0000 UTCYeah Rebecca calls Hiromi crush even in front of Motoko and Motoko is like. "That's a weird nickname." But no one is explaining. Rebecca is a troll, but she isn't cruel.
Seras
2024-07-16 23:38:10 +0000 UTCYep! That's a level 20 netrunner thing. It nearly killed Nix, and he is one of the best in the city.
Seras
2024-07-16 23:36:36 +0000 UTCCongrats for 200 chapters ! Soon Motoko will have her own Version of the League of Assassin ^^
Vg7
2024-07-16 23:23:57 +0000 UTCCongrats on the 200 Seras ❤️
FuryXanxus
2024-07-16 23:23:56 +0000 UTCI wouldn't do anime openings I would do a montage of all the people she has slain with the song playing in the background with the majority being the maelstrom, and Tigers. Can you imagine the meltdown they would have.
Joe Foreman
2024-07-16 23:20:44 +0000 UTCAhh yeah, you're right, I forgot about it. But man, am I anxious to know what's in there
Vinicius Silva
2024-07-16 23:17:00 +0000 UTCMan, that would be epic! I was imagining Motoko doing a montage XBD of Through the Fire and flames, with a mixture of music clip with anime openings, would be epic!
Vinicius Silva
2024-07-16 23:14:46 +0000 UTCThe only way to "hack" bioware would be the same way you "hack" regular eyes genius. Genetic manipulation or somebody spraying shit in your face. There's no way to "hack" biology with an outside signal like you can with cybernetics. That's the entire point.
Fortunis
2024-07-16 22:38:20 +0000 UTCThat puts it into perspective, you have a solid point there
FrostyDaHomeboy
2024-07-16 22:00:08 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200!
Jackson Dorsey
2024-07-16 21:56:41 +0000 UTCPretty much right now its something corps have. Once she adds the ai… thats when shit gets real. If she adds on stealth and wall crawling, with the ai… thats kidnap/steal her and the tachi.
Zeroingdark
2024-07-16 21:54:45 +0000 UTC200!!
Michael Olson
2024-07-16 21:41:52 +0000 UTCMy dude is make 9k a month awesome my dude meaning people are loving your shit
Uncensored21
2024-07-16 21:32:38 +0000 UTCI hope that... what's her name, y'know Motoko's biggest fan in maelstrom, isn't in there.
TheDudeAbides
2024-07-16 21:16:36 +0000 UTCI dont think she has talked about her "plan" or whatever she was hinting at a couple chapters ago. Maybe during the celebration after this gig?
Robert Apgar
2024-07-16 21:15:35 +0000 UTCHow about Slumber Party?
Serina Tsukaya
2024-07-16 21:14:27 +0000 UTCOr be a real deviant and make an AI that propogates it to her enemies on a nightly basis.
Robert Apgar
2024-07-16 21:14:07 +0000 UTCRebecca just realized that Motoko is an idiot.
Daniel Quigley
2024-07-16 21:12:06 +0000 UTCAlso, congrats on the 200! Here's to 100 more!
Sup3r J4k3
2024-07-16 20:56:19 +0000 UTCDo you know how many unsomethings there are? Unsinkable? Sunk. Unbreakable? Broken. Etc, etc. Against a determined entity, everything falls. Bioware would be hackable, just in a different way, like having a viral biomist hijack your ware. It's the unending dance of humanity, defenses built only to be broken only for new counters to be built and broken again. While we can end that cycle proving there are no exceptions, fortunately that big red button has never been pushed... although with our current management...
Raven
2024-07-16 20:55:10 +0000 UTCSpeaking of ai, what would she do with the delamaine personality splits? If it were up to me, I would take them and put them into more suitable roles (i.e. 'angry' in the Minotaur, GlaDOS as the Central intelligence for section 9, etc). She could even use data from them to upgrade the tachis.
Sup3r J4k3
2024-07-16 20:54:29 +0000 UTCFair point I just had the thoughts after seeing it improve so much at this point. Sure it is in Alpha, but life hardly let's you get away with making things at your own pace.
FrostyDaHomeboy
2024-07-16 20:42:15 +0000 UTCOh yes, I can see her giving away her ghost code. "Don't worry Fujimura, I already dropped it off for you and yours. I hope you truly enjoy it! *cackles in evil laughter*"
Raven
2024-07-16 20:39:48 +0000 UTCIt's a little early in its prototype stage for death to thieves measures. She's only used it once in a family related emergency, otherwise it's not deployment ready or in use.
Raven
2024-07-16 20:35:20 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200!
Alex
2024-07-16 20:34:01 +0000 UTCLittle Tatchin gets 'napped suddenly a new XBD get released titled "Let The Bodies Hit The Floor.
A Bellator
2024-07-16 20:25:47 +0000 UTCYou know as I read this chapter I had a realization about the poor little drone. So far from what I remember reading, she has only worked on improving her drone. But what about defending her proprietary ideas for the drone use? I could picture in the future a Tachi being captured and reverse engineered if she doesn't put some fail-safes or self destruction. Do a job, corpo notices new impressive drone, stages a capture, and bam Tachi is now everywhere. Just a thought, good chapter and so glad about the program hack payoff. I loved it. There is no price on Psychic damage!
FrostyDaHomeboy
2024-07-16 20:17:14 +0000 UTCCongrats on/ and Thanks for the 200th Chapter~!
silint
2024-07-16 19:57:07 +0000 UTCYou should have her do the song Through the fire, and flames by dragonforce, and Thank you for the chapter. I Can't wait for Saturday.
Joe Foreman
2024-07-16 19:56:34 +0000 UTCYou misspelled Bakarina.
matt
2024-07-16 19:53:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Scary Motoko is about to be unleashed on Maelstrom! Preem!
Arcane
2024-07-16 19:51:29 +0000 UTCGood god Motoko, like come on at least notice when you have an effect 😂
Connor
2024-07-16 19:48:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! 200! Motoko needs to make sure her chooms have some proper ice to make sure they can't be easily quickhacked
SDCard
2024-07-16 19:44:32 +0000 UTC200 chapters of Motoko being denser than a neutron star! Woooot!
Michael Zalesny
2024-07-16 19:43:51 +0000 UTCSeras, please please please look into Battle Tapes. Every single one of their songs would go so well in Cyberpunk. Recommending Feel The Same or Brand New to start with
SirTacitus
2024-07-16 19:43:24 +0000 UTCCongrats on this achievement! Going forward I'm super curious to see if you go full AI level intelligence for Motoko. She's already so damn smart it's kinda awesome. Also that interaction at the end was really funny. Nice stuff 👍
Laharl365
2024-07-16 19:22:14 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200! Now eagerly awaiting 201!
Scarletmenace
2024-07-16 19:15:23 +0000 UTCHuh. I really don’t remember that.
Dwayne Parker
2024-07-16 19:01:55 +0000 UTCThat was the first thing Becca did upon seeing Hiromi and Motoko together though.
White Neko Knight
2024-07-16 19:00:57 +0000 UTCShe’s the fixer for the job when Moto killed ichi’s boss. Then 2nd job failed to kill the guy in the Furries/Exotics bar. Never heard from her again.
MikeL
2024-07-16 18:55:16 +0000 UTCShe beat up and threatened her assistant and wasn't able to get into the exotic club to complete that one gig.
Cody Adam Carroll
2024-07-16 18:52:06 +0000 UTCI don't get it. Why wouldn't Regina want to do gigs with motoko? Do they have history?
Enkelados
2024-07-16 18:49:23 +0000 UTCIf her Onryo hack gains traction from constant use, I wouldn't be surprised if Fujimura will ask her for a pack of similar hacks for his netrunners, so Jun and the rest of the Kamikaze could become a real Hyakki Yako on the battlefield. Finally, the baby is no longer deaf Jun: No love songs! Motoko: You know the rules, and so do I~ Aww, Becca has synergized with the crew, she's so excited to start the mission together.
Heidao
2024-07-16 18:42:44 +0000 UTCWait did they ever have an actual conversation about their standard operating procedures or rules of engagement or whatever she wanted to talk to them about? Did I miss it? I thought it got pushed back cuz she had to do that Hayato job, and she hasn't talked to them yet. Shouldn't that come before this new gig? Why's this the "first official gig day of Section 9"? What makes it different than all their other gigs? Might not be the most action packed scene, but it seems like a good place to squeeze in some characterization for the kids. Two of them are pretty one note (corpo with crush on Motoko and general chill dude who likes cars), and the last doesn't seem to have any personality traits. Although I guess ironically I described two of them with more than "one note".
Gardor
2024-07-16 18:41:22 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200th chapter
Nathan Casteel
2024-07-16 18:39:38 +0000 UTC200!!!!
Hector Gregorio
2024-07-16 18:38:57 +0000 UTCgood job. also congrats on 200.
Austin Thomas Burney
2024-07-16 18:38:04 +0000 UTCIf Motoko keeps missing these hints we'll need to swap her name to Katarina Kusanagi.
Lord JJ
2024-07-16 18:33:43 +0000 UTCShould have her sing uptown girl by billy joel, reckon it’d be fuckin HILARIOUS how hiromi reacts
Happy
2024-07-16 18:31:14 +0000 UTCFor that Jun, I'll sing TITANIC! (My heart will go on). I don't know if it would be a hit. Too sappy and slow for the era.
Petrox
2024-07-16 18:30:52 +0000 UTCHas she called her that around Motoko?
Dwayne Parker
2024-07-16 18:28:22 +0000 UTCIt's Chekhov's Cyberdeck. But considering who it belonged to, it just sits there. Menacingly.
runedead56
2024-07-16 18:26:08 +0000 UTCThe Onryo, IT LIVES!? 😜 Anyway the Tachikoma coming along slowly and surely, hopefully it will get to the GITS level soon. Heh Music gigs can have shootouts since this is Cyberpunk 2077. Pity Rebecca is still having troubles. Congratulations on the 200th chapter!?
Duke of Coffee
2024-07-16 18:23:36 +0000 UTCIt's like you're forgetting about Rebecca the gremlin. She calls hiromi crush regularly.
runedead56
2024-07-16 18:23:20 +0000 UTCNow I want Toko to start singing "I kissed a girl." That'll really drive Jun up the wall
Darkarma
2024-07-16 18:17:35 +0000 UTCCos they know what Hiromi would do to them. Broadly anyway; they don't know the details,and that's _not a good thing_.
Apeljohn
2024-07-16 18:15:30 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, they're a good pick me up on rough days.
Longhaul
2024-07-16 18:14:40 +0000 UTCHappy 200th chapter. When you get to 300 you will have to include the line "This is Night City". TFTC and see you next time.
Michael Hughes
2024-07-16 18:05:32 +0000 UTCAlso id love a continuation of the rockerboy stories. Good to see it.
Ya Boi
2024-07-16 18:02:54 +0000 UTCSeras has said not until she's got the relevant skills at 20, because Rache was THAT good.
Just A Dude
2024-07-16 17:58:04 +0000 UTCgood chappie
Elaine
2024-07-16 17:57:56 +0000 UTCThe very air would warp around them, sucking in all emotion, leaving only confusion.
matt
2024-07-16 17:57:01 +0000 UTCWe don't want to create a new orbital trajectory for the cyberpunk Earth.
runedead56
2024-07-16 17:56:59 +0000 UTCNice. Also, there's a few comments throughout the story about her not speaking Japanese, yet literally in chapter one she understands Jun speaking it flawlessly. Might want to change it since she's definitely bilingual even if she never uses it. Just all kinds of bi 🤣
matt
2024-07-16 17:54:46 +0000 UTCYay! Big #s go up! 200 chappies!
Ya Boi
2024-07-16 17:50:38 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200!!!
Matt
2024-07-16 17:44:19 +0000 UTCGood afternoon night City
runedead56
2024-07-16 17:41:37 +0000 UTCMost unbelievable part of this fic? No one has made the obvious jokes about hiromi’s crush yet. They’re showing amazing restraint for a bunch of kids.
Dwayne Parker
2024-07-16 17:40:38 +0000 UTC[I thought about the Laughing Man a lot when it comes to hacking. The ability to just remove yourself from someone's vision, or change how you look in real time is incredibly powerful in a world where everyone has cyberware vision.] This is exactly why I'd never get cyber optics. Bioware all the way. It's nearly as good and almost unhackable. Great chapter. The scene jumps are great and seeing Motoko doing Motoko things is always fun. Especially when she's just fucking with people 😆 🤣. Juns reaction to love songs was hilarious. Edit: some people just gotta be assholes.
Fortunis
2024-07-16 17:40:30 +0000 UTCWhen motoko sees a big dopey smile everyone else probably sees a lovestruck Hiromi with hearts in her eyes😂
Sweetsugar
2024-07-16 17:39:41 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200!
Gronnr
2024-07-16 17:38:14 +0000 UTCHiromi would never be able to sleep without her love song if Motoko ever sings one.
Alzhan
2024-07-16 17:36:52 +0000 UTCGrats on the 200🎉🎉
Freya
2024-07-16 17:36:45 +0000 UTCCongratulations on the 200th chapter 👏
marce 900
2024-07-16 17:36:09 +0000 UTCMan, that'd be a competition for the ages...
Aaron Greene
2024-07-16 17:35:26 +0000 UTCLol! Rebecca almost spilled the beans! Poor Hiromi.
Aaron Greene
2024-07-16 17:34:27 +0000 UTCCongrats on the 200! One thing Seras, I was rereading everything and right in the first chapters Motoko gets the cyberdeck from Rache Bartmoss, she doesn't look at it because she's afraid of getting fried. When will she open it now? She probably has the technical capability yo do so.
Vinicius Silva
2024-07-16 17:34:14 +0000 UTCMotoko is so oblivious 😂 Thanks for the chapter Seras!
Mr Caine
2024-07-16 17:32:25 +0000 UTCJun and Motoko should have a Dense off.
Paratus
2024-07-16 17:31:46 +0000 UTCGrats on 200 chappies, Seras!
MrDenim
2024-07-16 17:27:49 +0000 UTCFunny note: you can use microphones as speakers, and speakers as microphones Soooo Tachikoma might start making noises soon too lol
Teatime42
2024-07-16 17:25:33 +0000 UTCYesssss! Yay for 200 chapters!
Aaron Greene
2024-07-16 17:24:19 +0000 UTCOh look, I managed to catch the chapter on near release for once. Congrats on 200.
Alzhan
2024-07-16 17:23:09 +0000 UTCYaya! 200 here we go.
Abrissgurke
2024-07-16 17:19:29 +0000 UTCCongrats on 200! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
heh
2024-07-16 17:19:13 +0000 UTCThank you!
Alex C
2024-07-16 17:18:55 +0000 UTCYAY!
Stefan Landshut
2024-07-16 17:18:44 +0000 UTC❤️
Arkam
2024-07-16 17:17:41 +0000 UTC