Beauty salon 509
Added 2022-10-01 16:53:42 +0000 UTCI did not check the story for any grammar mistakes... Sorry. I still hope it's enjoyable to read. The story is like... 90% background and 10% about bondage? (Good thing we have an image to compensate for that...). Also, The ending is a mixture of bad/good.
Let me know what you think of it all and if you want to read/see more like this in the future!
Find the image (variants) and story in the dropbox 509 folder!
Comments
Is 509 already closed out and if it is where else can i find your work? I absolutely love your work but itโs always a sad day when i realize iโve missed some of it
2022-10-13 22:31:40 +0000 UTCPremium grade pic and story ! It's quite rare to see you write an husband/wife relationship, it could definitely add new dynamics between your characters if you add this to your repertoire. You mentioned in your last post that the 2 next stories could have a follow up, but I guess judging by the end that won't be the case, or am I wrong ?
al11
2022-10-02 13:24:29 +0000 UTCI can see the confusion since (Now that I read/checked it) there isn't a single mention of how he can turn that function on/off at will. He controls the chip of his wife. I guess I should go back and edit the story a bit to clear that up.
Lerra22
2022-10-02 09:36:35 +0000 UTCSPOILER!!!!!!!! it has a bit of a stepford vibe!:P but one thing is odd, if he has a chip too, why then can't she tell him about her "workout"?
ichbendunicht
2022-10-01 20:58:00 +0000 UTCSPOILER!!!!!!!! it has a bit of a stepford vibe!:P
ichbendunicht
2022-10-01 20:56:04 +0000 UTC
