SSS 3: A New Dawn
Added 2025-11-29 14:34:49 +0000 UTCComments
The art being the graphics of the System we saw in the first two chapters. They are made by me in photoshop and take a different mindset to put together than sometimes feels very different from writing!
Keene
2026-02-07 21:47:19 +0000 UTCWhat art?
Fdrugc
2026-02-07 21:15:34 +0000 UTCMmm good point! At the end of the day the prose is what matters most ^.^ Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for reading! <3
Keene
2025-12-01 18:46:36 +0000 UTCYay ^.^ Thank you, and thanks for reading! <3
Keene
2025-12-01 18:46:07 +0000 UTCI'll keep it in mind, thank you! And thanks for reading <3
Keene
2025-12-01 18:45:53 +0000 UTCI have high hopes for it ^.^ Thanks for reading! <3
Keene
2025-12-01 18:43:28 +0000 UTCGlad you're enjoying it :) And thanks for reading! <3
Keene
2025-12-01 18:43:16 +0000 UTCI finally started to read this new series... and I liked it! I am curirous of where it will go
Federico
2025-12-01 07:37:30 +0000 UTCI really love the story! Can’t wait for more chappies
nvurhdeht
2025-12-01 04:30:53 +0000 UTCThe story's back! I really like the art, but what's most important is the prose, so I dont think you should let that get in the way of telling the story.
Eridor
2025-11-30 12:40:01 +0000 UTCEnjoying this so far!
Ornery Walrus
2025-11-30 06:48:39 +0000 UTCI think the art can be used as just embellishment when changing texture for a row or two or perhaps as a full status once a book for embellishment. What truly matters is the prose.
Adurna
2025-11-30 01:38:15 +0000 UTCThanks for reading! <3
Keene
2025-11-29 14:40:35 +0000 UTCthank you for the chapter <3
pix
2025-11-29 14:35:41 +0000 UTC