Lia the Retcon
Added 2025-08-07 14:40:30 +0000 UTCComments
I had hoped that she would take on the persona of her character in the game. The way she talks about it it sounded really cool.
Edward Ravenbear
2025-08-16 07:48:51 +0000 UTCThat does sound much better. The reaction from the ship was pretty jarring
InLucidReverie
2025-08-14 11:39:23 +0000 UTCoh noooooooooooo, I'll have to reread the story agaaaaaaaaain. how could youuuuuuuuuuuuu. /S :) I am fine with the changes to Amelia's disguise implementation and not having the truth teller, but I always felt that the interaction with Amelia's magic with The Vengeance was properly foreshadowed. I also liked how the code book factored into the encounter with the Indy. I thought it was a good way to show that some bad had happened to the crew of the Indy and that they were communicating with someone who didn't know the correct pass phrases.
Eridor
2025-08-07 23:02:54 +0000 UTCThanks for the info! ^^ I'll do a re-read in the next few days
Bast
2025-08-07 22:09:08 +0000 UTCI concur, big changes can disrupt active reader retention. This breakdown of the introduced changes, including the extensive list of notes per chapter, really smooths this over quite excellently.
hg2b
2025-08-07 20:22:03 +0000 UTCThe one danger of live updating a book is sometimes readers have to be privy to and deal with rewrites like this, happy you figured out a solution and look forward to rereading to catch the changes!
Arcy
2025-08-07 18:41:48 +0000 UTChmm very interesting i didnt find it a big deal but im just a reader.
Garrett Cannon
2025-08-07 16:05:04 +0000 UTCMe, who re-read just reasently, oh well time to do it again.
Veriaura
2025-08-07 15:20:54 +0000 UTCMuch respect for you going back and fixing things! π§
Puppy Piranha Forever
2025-08-07 15:11:54 +0000 UTCThanks! Great job (also at Elladan)!
Mituindal
2025-08-07 15:09:18 +0000 UTCSweet summary! Looking forward to her inevitably breaking that cover :D
Adurna
2025-08-07 14:59:05 +0000 UTCBased plot hole removal
Alice
2025-08-07 14:52:25 +0000 UTCI'll have to do a reread of everything, oh no ... /s
Sean Carter
2025-08-07 14:42:47 +0000 UTC
