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Chapter 106: Training Equipment

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I hear the clergy is already saying Jolly Saint Amelia is commercializing Christmas.

Mark

Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Thanks for reading! ^.^

Keene

Oh that's happened a lot to me! Sometimes brand new characters just appear out of no where and demand to be in the story! It's weird how it happens but it works for now xd Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Thanks for reading! ^.^

Keene

Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Mmm! That's what I hoped, to help bring the characters to life and give them more distinct slots in people's minds ^.^ Thanks for the kind words, and thanks for reading! <3

Keene

That's a relief! It was fun to learn about it myself ^.^ Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Thanks for reading! :)

Keene

Yup ^.^ Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

You're not the first American to invite me to come shoot in the US! I'd love to visit one day, all my friends who have worked or travelled there loved it! Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Thanks for the chapter! :)

Bast

thank you for the chapter !

Freex Moreau

Oh, I really enjoying this slice of life Amelia giving out presents arc! It really builds up the various characters and brings them more to life. And it's Amelia being Amelia, what is there not to like! ;) As for the characters guiding the scene, when I wrote fan fiction many years ago, I had a totally different character show up when a door was answered than I had planned. Actually had to pause writing to figure out what was going on.

Puppy Piranha Forever

Thanks for the chap

Annora D.

thank you for the chapter <3

pix

"While Arin explained in great detail how magnesium fluoride anti-glare coating was applied to her audience, who were too polite to tell her they didn’t care to know how magnesium fluoride anti-glare coating was applied" - what a great sentence! :D It's indeed a mini-arc of sorts, but it's Amelia, so what did anybody expect, really ;) Seriously though, it feels like a slice-of-life mini arc which shows the characters in their daily life, which helps me immerse myself inside the world and the ship, learn more about them and make me actually care for them as individuals.

Oliver

As a gun toting American i dont see any gun related issues.

Midnight Harbinger

Yippee chapter!

Chris Wong

Hurrah for presents and Amelia cuteness! The best is yet to come though!

Ben Lockwood

great chapter and if u ever come to texas we can visit a shooting range and have some professionals teach us and shoot some guns

Garrett Cannon

Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Thank you for the chapter!

Kt-x


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