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Night Call - Page 20

I feel the dialogue is a bit schmaltzy, but I had to reassure the more squeamish readers lol

Overall I don't think this comic was popular, and I'm honestly not surprised. I drew it 4 years ago as an exercise, but I think it's too 'harsh' for most tastes (even if it's pretty standard cuck and bdsm stuff). If anything, the reception to this indicates to me what most prefer: Nothing but hand-holding and missionary from now on! j/k ;p

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Night Call - Page 20

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Honestly I don't mind the cheese in the dialogue it is sweet and hits that nice romantic vibe. However with that said I get WHY you felt doing this despite it can be seen as 'a bit off' as some readers don't seem to understand the dynamic of these characters which is, well I can imagine very annoying by now. On the one hand I can see this dialogue being something said back when they started, and maybe once in awhile if Night felt she got a bit heavy with her kink side; but after a bit, like Pat says he's tougher than he looks and understands Night to a T, and knows he's #1 in her heart.

George Humleker Jr.

I had to look up what kayfabe meant, lol. But yeah, I definitely agree. Well said!

Kadath

While it sucks that you felt like this part had to be spelled out for people who somehow cannot conceive of the idea of anyone finding this kind of scenario appealing, even in the context of fictional anthropomorphic animals in a porn comic... I actually really like seeing the softer side of their relationship where they break kayfabe for a page at the end and just do a casual aftercare and wellness check. Like, yeah, it's corny, but it's also relatable, especially given how extreme and boundary-pushing their hijinks can (and did) get. It would be annoying if you did it all the time when depicting their kink, but in this one particular instance where we really see how far they like to take this, it felt like a good denouement in part because we don't see them break kayfabe that often in their other appearances, and this seemed like a good opportunity to show that side as well as their kinkier side.

Mobius Scarf

It'll be interesting if I go for a hotwife kind of angle with them (which I kinda do a lot now) and if people will still think it's a cuck thing or not. Would be curious to see how people would parse out the difference!

Kadath

Yeah I honestly felt like I had to spell it out, literally, since I often get concerned comments/questions with this material.

Kadath

You're not the first to tell me they aren't a furry, they just like a few people's works, including mine. I honestly find that fascinating.

Kadath

Ah no, it feels really genuine, and makes sense coming from Nightshade, who has experience with this sort of thing and wouldn't be shy about explicitly checking in.

F'yacin

Yeah. I tend to agree on both counts. From a storytelling perspective, it is too explanatory, but as someone who’s not a huge fan of cuck stuff, I can see why people would want to hear it.

Thisguy

Yes, while sweet, I did feel the dialogue was a bit much. The stuff on the left, fine, sounds like good aftercare, but I did think the stuff on the right was a bit unusual for you. I mean, I’m not really a fan of cuck stuff either, but I’ve read enough of your stuff and comments to understand, so it doesn’t bother me.

Thisguy

Definitely glad you posted this comic! Yeah cuck stuff isn't for everyone, but you do Night and Pat's relationship extremely well imo. Always good to see more of what they get up to!

Illyrian

I’d love to see that project. 🐎

Vader120

Nah if anything your art got me into cuckolding. I'm not even a furry: Rouge the Bat, Lola Bunny and your art are the only exceptions.

Simpanzee

LMAO that is not at ALL the complaint I was envisioning lol god that gave me a good laugh thank you

Pierre Johnson

It's because Fox wasn't as hung as the Forgetails, so some guys got *really* fixated on that and got angry at me about it. Oddly it was the pages where Fox and Krystal were on the verge of professing their love for each other that these guys had to chime in with 'but his dick isn't 12 inches long', like that matters more than anything XD

Kadath

Fox and Krystal lol okay... well I can wrap my head around their complaint if I put the spin of corrupting their childhood memories. Fiction is fiction though why not have fun with it ;-) As for your kinky characters pffft absolutely have fun with em, some people will disagree but when people stop disagreeing freewill is dead. Perhaps one of their comments of outrage will inspire yet another story lol

Pierre Johnson

And a whip (Cause she smacked a nut sack with said whip in Nightly Tutors)

Ded Otter Man

Sounds exciting I look forward to maybe seeing it one day :D

Patrick Bradley

She's got those claws and fangs at the ready!

Kadath

I think I meant schmaltzy as in the way I wrote the dialogue. I felt it was maybe too explanatory, but I think perhaps it's what some needed to hear ;p

Kadath

Glad to hear it! I think I meant schmaltzy as in the way I wrote the dialogue. I felt it was maybe too explanatory, but I think perhaps it's what some needed to hear ;p

Kadath

It honestly does surprise me how I get criticized for how I depict my kinkier characters. Even my Krystal comic had people crying about how I depicted Fox and Krystal in that, despite it being a very sweet story. If I wanted to be super mean, I'd do a hardcore NTR story or something (which is what I think folks like that have convinced themselves I am XD)

Kadath

If anything, this girl knows *deep* XD

Kadath

I have an idea for that, which I call the 'Horse Club' project. Pat and Night get to have fun with a bunch of horses, with the stallions teaming up on Night, and the mares with Pat :B

Kadath

WHEW yeah communication is key!

Kadath

Checking in is an important part of aftercare, especially when one of the parties is less experienced. Not schmaltzy, *healthy*!

panpolypuff

I don't think the dialogue is schmaltzy at all. It's really healthy example of kink play. I really enjoyed this comic ^=^

F'yacin

"squeamish readers" lmao they aren't going to make it this far......

Pierre Johnson

Some things are deeper than sex. 😉

Vader120

A nice way to end it and while I agree it's not for most it is interesting to see different kinks now and again I'd be interested in seeing some swinger stuff with em like you did with the puzzle BDSM club comic

Patrick Bradley

Communication is what happens when people do this , I had a friend that his wife tried this and just assumed he as OK with it, they got a divorce so fast

Khalandar

She can abliterate a nut sack if she wanted to. Only to those that deserve it. Her true strength is kept at bay until it's required.

Ded Otter Man


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