Wake Up Call - Page 10

I would like to see Pat sorta, gripe? With this newfound kink. Might be a little too high concept but maybe it could help some people who are raised monogamous and having to come to terms about their cuck kink

Shazzy Snazzy

Writing and balancing are indeed tough, I'd say you do well showcasing the relations of your characters and the nuances between them all.

George Humleker Jr.

Is possible for end possible all threesome in shower or picture of Nightshade get double stuff in the shower 🚿 by Markus & Patrick

Robert

I like to see the sequel then the prequel.

MetalMario90

Came, indeed :P I think what's most fun about it is that it'll stir up all kinds of wonder on Pat's part, about Night's past and how she acts around others compared to him.

Kadath

Yeah that can happen sometimes. I think it's like a thing where it's tough to balance dramatic impact and sexy titillation without going too far sometimes. Or some authors just outright lie, I dunno lolol

Kadath

Oh, Fine Dining? That's just a little short story. The sequel is still in the proofreading stages, and will come later this year. It's going to be twice as long as the first ;3

Kadath

Sucks to be them. I'd enjoy it myself, just as long as she isn't too tired when I get home!

PsyMar

Oh boy, I bought the sequel a while ago and I’m starting to get back into rereading the first, looking forward to the sequel even more >:3

Ardyn

Looking forward to it!! As for the kink commentary, I think that maybe why I find an issue with some writers because they seem to mix up the kinks and it becomes something other than what they advertise. I wish I was kidding, but I saw an author once get into a tussle with their whole comment section for 'misunderstanding' their intentions despite pretty much all but the diehard of the author's fans saw the kink on display was not what they claimed.

George Humleker Jr.

It would definitely be interesting to see how Markus "came" into the picture in the first place! Between having a key to their house, the Storeroom Quickie situation, and everything else, he's practically part of their little family. Seeing how that began would be quite the development.

Zhon Lord

Funny how people get uppity about Pat watching Night bang other guys, but they are A-OK with Di watching Puz fuck guys XD Night is playfully mean, but it's teasing. I guess some people just don't like femdom. Oh well XD

Kadath

Ignore the cuck-shamers if you asked me. I get the aversion to NTR hentai tropes where there tends to be a heavy emphasis placed on humiliation and shame, but when it's just "Guy gets off watching his partner fuck around and tease him about it", I really don't see what the big deal is. And if people get uppity about how Patrick is being abused or some nonsense, you could just write a story where Patrick hooks up with Diamond and Nightshade gets surprisingly into it.

Mobius Scarf

It's more a threat than something she'd do. He's a precious cinnamon bun XD

Kadath

Yeah, the kind of thing you're initially describing is NTR or something, but what I go for is more of a dom/sub kink play. So Night is doing this specifically because it has such an effect on Pat. It's her domming him. If he didn't like it, or felt ignored, she'd stop in an instant. It's partly why I get so confused by the hate my stories with them sometimes get, b/c I go out of my way to show it's not a negative relationship like an NTR or corruption/cheating story would be. Funny you mention the latter scenario b/c the upcoming sequel to the Bucking the System novel actually goes into scenarios like that (where Pat is getting his kink on with another lady) so if you check that out, I hope you'll like the scenarios in that book!

Kadath

I'm curious how does Pat think about the claws she used them before

Technoking77

Exactly - let's just say that secretary character comes back in a big way in the sequel ;)

Kadath

I think the only time I 'have issue' with this kind of kink is when the 'supposed' primary lover is almost pushed out of the picture to the point you rarely see them actually being romantic and sexual with the person they're supposed to be date/married/whatever too. Luckily Kadath you do a fine job avoiding that trope; so I don't mind the kink under your writing and artist's thumb. Plus I love Nightshade and seeing her be herself and sexual is a treat be it fan art or a canon story. As I said before it's VERY clear things with Pat and Shade are very mutual so bring it. Though, it would be amusing if for once Pat turned the tables and send Night pics of a time when he was getting royally boned and she was... at the time unable to get her own sexy on, and gets so pent up, by the time she gets home she literally molests Pat in the doorway. Tis' a thought and if you happen to like it, borrow away~

George Humleker Jr.

Yeah I always want to show that it's all fun and games. As much heat as I may get for depicting a kink like this, I try to show that it isn't mean-spirited, it's just fun stuff.

Kadath

I normally end the comics with a chibi image, and while it's not a chibi, I do have a 'what happened after' image for the 'authors notes' page that will depict that ;p

Kadath

In my earliest art of Pat, I drew him a lot more 'punk', with piercings and stuff... and over time I made him more normal. I think of his eventual character arc as going from normal and pretty naive to a real kinkster that even surprises Night!

Kadath

It could make sense since it’s a scene that happens in Bucking the System, where Night and Ezra do it in his office “demanding” Pat to fuck his assistant who’s imagining that she’s getting fucked by Ezra while Pats fucking the assistant.

Ardyn

Well you said other characters, so everybody but Patrick, right? :P :P :P

Kadath

Yeah, Londoners is the main story (all of these smut comics are kind of like side stories haha), but it's a huuuuge undertaking so I'm kinda uncertain when to start on it. I've considered holding off on the Markus/cuck story arc for Londoners, but I'm not sure if it's something the main story should dedicate a lot of time to. I'm kinda unsure what to do XD

Kadath

You'll enjoy the Bucking the System sequel novel, then!

Kadath

That wouldn't make sense for thier relationship but be nice to see some other people maybe even a couple swing with them

Patrick Bradley

I don't mean in this I mean in general, but OFC it's your art and your choice and I'll support it either way

Patrick Bradley

I wouldn’t mind seeing Pat bringing in a new woman in the comic.

Memerk

He's literally in 2 out of 10 pages lol

Kadath

Nice ending! And to that your question: Kadath, what I like about your content so much, is the combination of excellent art, story telling and characters, and I think that every your TRUE fan likes all these parts! 😃Yea, it needs ofcourse the right ratio, but you are great in that too! Also, as I looked, searched and read back all info, stories, etc..., I read that you planned( or maybe still plan) Londoners, which should tell the story about how it all exists in the London part of their universe. So, my opinion is: Yes, ofcourse I would like some further stories, lore, etc..., if its done with effort and love as untill now 😉! PS: I know it might sound overhyped, but thats my real feel and opinion....

Kex cz

Amazing work Kadath!!! I like the others on this board would love to see the origin story of three cucketeers!

Ardyn

Yeah what's funny was I never intended the comic to be 'she's just messing with him' but it seemed to be an idea people latched onto. I guess I'm known for pulling twists, and this is one time where there wasn't one XD I want to do a Dirty Talk 2 (or Dirtier Talk) at some point, but it probably won't be this year. I figure that it'd be a huge project and I don't want to jump into that until I'm comfortable with my workflow on Olivia's comic (which resumes next month!)

Kadath

I enjoy all your stuff but I think Markus has taken the spotlight a little too much lately, be nice to see some other characters get some attention

Patrick Bradley

Ah, gotta love the freak Pat is becoming, or was? Anyway. Always a good thing to see some development.

Ryo

Aiight, another comic done, so it’s review time! This won’t be as long as DDD for obvious reasons, but here we go. -I feel this comic is like a blend of Dirty Talk (cuck themes with Markus as the bull) and Ignorance is Bliss (short Patshade comic that takes place in their bedroom). One’s first inclination would be to ask for a longer comic, but the simple premise was perfect for a short length, and for a short story, 10 pages is still a good length. It’s been stated before that the purpose of this comic was to be a simple, short and sweet breather before the next long project, which makes perfect sense, and we gotta judge the story for what it is rather than what we want it to be, and with that in mind, it does its job very well. Makes for a nice quick read when you want a more bite-sized Kad comic. - What surprised me here is that I was expecting Nightshade to be teasing Pat about having Markus fuck her prior to the comic’s start, as that is something we’d absolutely expect her to do (Dirty Talk establishes this). I was under the assumption that Pat knew his name but hadn’t met him yet, then one of the pages showed Night’s creampie, and Pat hadn’t finished yet, so that pretty much confirmed she was being serious. It was an interesting surprise, and one that I’m not particularly bothered by, because a story about how Markus became involved can always be done later, which leads into my next point. -And to answer the question posed in the description, I would absolutely love to see how Markus got involved. Dirty Talk introduced me to this fetish in a more detailed way and is my favorite Kad comic to date, establishing the beginnings of Pat’s fetish. A story that builds upon that will be more than welcome as far as I’m concerned. So yeah, very solid comic here, and a contender for a favorite among the shorter comics like Ignorance is Bliss and even older pieces like Casual Waggling. Well done!

SketchyBug

Daww, that's a wholesome ending ^-^

Foab30

Her tits in the frame with her pussy dripping is so fucking hot

I'd totally like such a background story!

Holo Wolf

Unf! Fuck, this has been a hot one. I'm so jealous of Pat. I have my fingers crossed for some follow-up scenes of that shower. >:3

Silvador

The drips as she stands is so hot, good lord 🥵

Nethen22

I can say I’d definitely be down for something a little longer! Always enjoy learning more about your characters’ backgrounds.

Illyrian

Love how open their relationship is to be talking about such things without it being all negative and such

Doomslayer69