When You Are Needed Chapter 15
Added 2024-08-17 01:45:07 +0000 UTCFirst time in a long time that I will say that this might not be the shape the chapter ends up taking in the end. This chapter, when it fully releases, could be quite different. We'll see though. Not sure how I wanted the convo in this chapter to end. Let me know how you guys feel about it with a comment; I'll make changes depending on overall thoughts.
Comments
Oh I agree with everyone else, I think you've nailed the ending. I figured something like this might happen considering in a prior chapter Yang mentions her suspicions between Summer and Raven and I wasn't sure how I felt about it but you really struck the landing. Good stuff
Qwerty_22
2024-08-20 15:34:45 +0000 UTCThat's pretty consistent with what others have said, so perhaps things will be staying as is! I guess this worked better than I thought it did after all.
Deferonz
2024-08-18 02:15:01 +0000 UTCLoved it. The ending was cute. I wouldn't want to impose any of my own biases in here. I'm here for the surprise.
Claude
2024-08-18 02:13:56 +0000 UTCMore specifically, I like the way Yang and Raven keep giving each other shit while trying to bond; how Raven earnestly tries to make up, having seen the ghost of Christmas future; and that surprise twist ending
Jo Schmeaux
2024-08-17 12:07:03 +0000 UTCOkay. That’s a good perspective!
Deferonz
2024-08-17 11:40:06 +0000 UTCI personally really liked this chapter. I think any changes would have a hard time making it better.
Jo Schmeaux
2024-08-17 11:39:43 +0000 UTCI'm glad to hear it! That was the reaction I was hoping for. Basically Yang's lmao.
Deferonz
2024-08-17 05:34:30 +0000 UTCThis was a curveball to the face I didn’t expect😂 I love it
Redwing641
2024-08-17 05:34:00 +0000 UTCMan tried his best lmao. Qrow was just too resistant to his charms.
Deferonz
2024-08-17 04:11:15 +0000 UTCAhhhh. Taiyang. The man got 2 of 3 smh couldn't pull the hat trick
DocBot200
2024-08-17 04:10:13 +0000 UTC
