Open discussion thread
Added 2023-02-10 18:57:59 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Hope you've been enjoying the story thus far. As my patrons, your feedback means a great deal to me, and while this is a planned series, I'm always open to shifting things a bit if it makes you all happier :-)
On that note, I wanted to get your feedback on what your favorite elements of the story have been, and what you'd like to see more of in the future/more emphasis on.
Some elements that come to mind: progression(magic, physical combat, or just insights into prana), lore/worldbuilding, action/fight scenes, adventuring to new places, character dynamics(there's always going to be this, since chars drive any story), or anything else that comes to mind. Or even if the current balance is good, that's helpful to know as well.
Feel free to share your thoughts, and if there's a strong pattern here, I'll do what I can to accommodate!
Comments
You have no idea how happy this makes me! XD
Vowron Prime
2023-02-13 02:31:05 +0000 UTCI also am super excited about the story. Why do they want vir to go to the Ashlands so bad? What happened to the old ancient city? What is riyan's plans? Can't wait to find out.
20karatferret
2023-02-13 02:16:30 +0000 UTCI love the progression. The Magic system seem really well thought out and the mystery of it is driving me crazy. I love when vir learns something new about magic.
20karatferret
2023-02-13 02:08:28 +0000 UTCMonstrously strong :D If you want more spoilers, let's chat in DMs!
Vowron Prime
2023-02-11 03:19:41 +0000 UTCThank you, Mav! Means a lot to me hearing that. I absolutely enjoy writing this series. My only worry is that traction is not *quite* what I'd anticipated on RR, but that doesn't impact my writing one bit :-) I can't wait to get us to the later parts of the story. All of this stuff is laying the foundations for what's to come!
Vowron Prime
2023-02-11 03:19:08 +0000 UTCHow strong can the characters actually get indivisually? Even in the prologue, mc didn't seem monstrously strong
Hunter8k
2023-02-11 00:30:08 +0000 UTCI’m very much enjoying the story. I just hope you as the author continue to enjoy it and keep the writing going. I’m eager to learn more about the black and brown prana and what “talents” Vir can utilize. I too would love to see if Maiya will progress and be a compatible companion in Virs journey. I’d love to see some more world building after the time at the Generals place and I personally wouldn’t mind if you chose to have a part in the academy. But I want you to know I’m enjoying the pace and slow burn of the 1.5MM word story you are planning. Have a great weekend.
MavTech
2023-02-11 00:23:25 +0000 UTC
