TIED Chapter 1 (page 1-5)
Added 2018-03-13 13:12:03 +0000 UTC
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Yayyy! just finished up the first 5 pages.
Sorry English isnt my first language and if you happened to find some errors, please tell me.
All criticisms are welcome and would help make this comic the best it could be.
And the vote for the FanArt poll of March is officially over and I think I know the winner base on the number of who already voted.
Expect to see the sketch a week from now and the final piece at the end of the month.
Comments
thanks guys! this is what Patreon is all about everyone pitching in to make great Art.
Ryner-E
2018-03-13 15:11:37 +0000 UTCLooks great Ryner! Let me know if I can help too ;)
FurryBound
2018-03-13 15:03:28 +0000 UTCSure, I'll be happy to look it over :)
Team Husman
2018-03-13 13:52:45 +0000 UTCWow really thanks, Yeah I think the dialogue is a bit forced... hehe. Im just making page by page with no real script to follow only a story in my head and a layout. I can send you a note in a few days on the whole dialogue as planned. it would be a big help.
Ryner-E
2018-03-13 13:42:58 +0000 UTCEio from Semla here. Great layout and story flow in the comic. Good ol' Cold Open never fails. If you want, I could take a look at your script and tidy up the dialogue flow just a little bit :)
Team Husman
2018-03-13 13:35:22 +0000 UTC
