Arthur! Went from some guy, to lovable by two great girls! Good job man!
Daisuke Hanata
2016-11-25 14:51:57 +0000 UTC
Hey, just wanted to say two things: first, very sweet thing of Arthur to say something that sweet, probably without even noticing his own gesture. Second, on the second word balloon, while saying "like this" isn't technically correct, I think saying "this way" instead of "like this" makes the line feel more natural, I believe. Other than that, great work. :)
your right, "that way" is the better wording here.
jo holloway
2016-11-24 21:25:40 +0000 UTC
I think not... People like him don't know how to be smooth, just it is... Aaaand I think he doesn't realize it...
2016-11-24 18:19:15 +0000 UTC
dayum artur, when have you ever been that smooth, you actually made sophie blush
Joshua Markiewicz
2016-11-24 17:34:12 +0000 UTC
I just ask myself: Was Arthur this smooth on purpose or by "accident"?
And: Does he even realize HOW smooth he was?
Darkfirephoenix
2016-11-24 16:58:57 +0000 UTC
Smooth af!
Jago, try to change "like this" to "That way", I think that fit better...
If someone who's native can correct me, I'll appreciate it.
Keep up tha good work!