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She Is Being Targeted Continued Episode 2 Initial Draft Complete!

Hey everyone,

I’ve finished the initial draft of the latest chapter. It’s hard to believe it’s been a year since I started this journey with all of you. Thank you for all your support!

So, a few thoughts about this chapter. Honestly, I'm not sure where the story is headed right now. It seems like NNT is recycling some old themes again, like the hickeys and Hinako refusing to kiss. And I don’t know about you, but it seems like NNT is slacking off with the drawings. The final scene with the camera “accidentally” pointing at the floor didn’t feel like an artistic choice to me—it felt like he just didn’t want to draw the scenes.

In this month’s caption, NNT is hinting at creating a new series alongside SIBT. But man, there are still so many loose ends in the current series that I'd hate to see NNT wrap it up in a way that leaves us all unsatisfied. Let's hope for the best!

Wishing you all a Happy New Year as well! Thank you for being part of this journey with me!

She Is Being Targeted Continued Episode 2 Initial Draft Complete!

Comments

Camera missing that last scene was lame and now that you pointed it out, it might just be laziness. There is a limit to hiding the scenes and once you go past that it’s no longer exciting

Thomas

Obviously the story is FAR from perfect. But this has been my favorite chapter in a while.

S○UL

Ty for the fast translation! And I personally think this chapter was pretty great. The images felt dragged out, but I think that's because of length of the chapter, not laziness. like I think he drew the average amount of images, but had like 400 pages of dialog lol

S○UL

Lightning McQueen speed holy shii. Thank you 🙏

Narwhalzz

🤜🤛

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