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She Is Being Targeted ~Continued~ Initial Draft

Hey everyone,

I finally finished the initial draft of the latest chapter. Sorry for the delay. I’ve just been busy with a ton of other stuff. Anyway, NNT said they’re going to decide next month if they want to keep the series going or not. Seems like the criticism really hit hard for NNT to think about ending the series (I feel kinda bad).

If NNT chooses to wrap up the series, I could see him reusing the ending from his previous work, “7 Days of Cuckolding Report.” A bit predictable... But I guess it’s still better than leaving us hanging.

Anyway, hope you enjoy reading!

She Is Being Targeted ~Continued~ Initial Draft

Comments

Hmm.... so fans didn't like the "jk, I'm still yours" ending (which was cringe I'll admit), so NNT is figuratively going in a time machine where Hinako warns Yuichi about possibly falling for Genki so he can write a consensual NTR ending? This shit is lame. The only panel that was 10/10 were Hinako's outfit pre date and when she got caught masturbating alone. Feels like Yuichi is already 100% committed to being a pussy-free cuck. All his doubts and reservations seem forced and fake as fuck (like they're only in there for the sake of creating artificial tension).

Timmy

I can agree with that, the series does has its flaws and hopefully NNT can see what ppl are asking for and put it into his work instead of just quitting, cause his art is fuckin awesome and people should be praising his art a lot more.

Narwhalzz

I think people’s issue is repetitively using the same story troupe over and over again, when the thing they’re doing now isn’t even wat drew most of us to the series. While I agree the hate the author gets over a fictional work is crazy, maybe giving some type of closure to how Hinako had felt throughout the entire plot with genki would help. I mean we’re all asking that question.

Brennan Jackson

I love You, thanks for the translations

User_97

Amazing work thank you for awesome translation. People need to stop being so fuckin negative it's porn it's made to get your rocks off not change your life or be a master class novel, NNT has the best art and OC I've seen I really hope he continues the series even if he needs another break cause of stupid ppls negativity

Narwhalzz


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