Sex Edition After Story Initial Draft
Added 2024-09-01 01:31:36 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
I’ve finished the initial draft of the afterstory. I might do a little cleaning and typesetting before uploading it to e-hentai.
I think NNT did a decent job of balancing the elements of NTS and NTR in this month's finale. It wasn’t purely NTS because Hinako admitted she enjoyed the pleasure of being fucked by Goda and had a strong, animalistic attraction to him. At the same time, it wasn’t entirely NTR either, since Hinako is still deeply in love with Yuichi.
However, I wasn’t fan of how everything wrapped up so easily. Goda will face his punishment because Hinako has decided to stop fucking him, but I feel like Hinako didn’t face any real consequences for the pain she caused Yuichi. She really crossed the line this time. Even if it was all an act, the hurt and betrayal Yuichi felt were genuine. It’s frustrating that all she had to do was say sorry, and he forgave her so easily.
From what I can tell, Yuichi isn’t completely a masocuck. He still has that masculine urge to dominate and please Hinako, but he just lacks confidence as a man. I really think NNT should have made him a bit more assertive, at least one last time. It would've been interesting to see Yuichi enact some petty revenge against Hinako instead of letting her off the hook so easily. For example, he could have set a condition that she couldn’t have sex with Goda or any other man until the number of times she slept with him equaled the number of times she slept with Goda. Or maybe Yuichi could tease Hinako this time and give her a taste of her own medicine!
Overall, the story felt a bit flat for me. I didn’t even fap to the finale because it was just too vanilla.
I heard NNT is set to release another Hinako chapter this month, featuring the necklace that Goda gave her. I’m curious to see how they’ll weave that into the story. Maybe Hinako will end up sleeping with Goda one last time? I could totally see Goda apologizing to Yuichi and begging him to let him have sex with Hinako one last time. Who knows? Maybe this time, Yuichi will really take a seat in the cuck chair in that love hotel lol.
Anyway, that’s all I have for now! I’d love to hear your thoughts on this too! And as always, thanks for your support!
Comments
I'm fine with the vanilla tbh. I feel that with this chapter NNT could have a somewhat blank slate to work on the next chapters. A lot of possibilities to be had now that Hinako knows she's not truly harming Yuichi. Harsh degradation, sex orgies, possibly adding Yukino and Akiho to the mix. I just hope the scenes are more fleshed out.
Skyline
2024-09-01 03:19:25 +0000 UTCI don't really care about Yuichi to be honest, he's just the dude getting cucked for my entertainment so that's why a NTR ending would've been boring and I'm fine with the two of them staying as a couple, for future chapters. About this last chapter too much sweet, I don't like vanilla shit. Of course I'm looking forward to seeing the necklace chapter but I expect for future chapters seeing Hinako having sex with different guys some hidden/exhibitionism sex like in a public bath or something but please it was enough of the fucking Goda. I'm hyped for the next chapters I believe NNT can do a better job this time with new releases.
Waifu Sommelier
2024-09-01 02:16:48 +0000 UTCI wasn't expecting this chapter to be that vanilla. That was way too sweet lol. Yeah, it should've been at least some sort of consequence on Hinako's end, but the whole she worked hard for Yuichi counteracts it I guess. For a few months we might just get extra Goda chapters that should've been shown like the hot springs trip and stuff. The afterword said that this was just the end of part 1 and they plan on continuing with different chapters and parts like this one so I guess they can now freely have her with other partners without worrying about their relationship.
Konata Aoi
2024-09-01 02:15:15 +0000 UTC
