Sex Edition Ch4 Initial Draft
Added 2024-08-03 07:28:39 +0000 UTCHey everyone, I just finished the initial draft of the latest chapter, and I wanted to share a few of my thoughts on it.
First off, I found the timeskip in this chapter to be a bit underwhelming. NNT could've shown us more of Hinako and Goda's sexcapades during the timeskip at school, the 10-day winter break, and the 7-day hot spring date. But instead, all we got was a hidden sex scene and a sex video? Come on! It felt like a missed opportunity, tbh.
Also, Hinako’s lines while she was being fucked by Goda seemed to come straight out of an amateur porn script lol. This made me reconsider that perhaps there's still 4D chess at play here and they were just faking it. While I still think there's a 95% chance of an NTR ending, there’s a slim 5% chance that it might still end in NTS.
Anyway, my prediction for the next chapter is that, after their breakup, I think Yuichi is going to make one final request to Hinako. He might confess that the best orgasm he's ever had was at the love hotel when he saw Hinako truly falling for Goda, and he's itching to experience that again. Hinako could then decide to stop taking the pill, leading to unprotected sex with Goda (since it looks like that's the only thing left for them to explore at that point).
As always, thank you all for your continued support! Cheers!
Comments
Could be a bonus that the creator might make later on, showing us their behind the scenes sex acts they both did like what the creator had previously done, but I guess it might be full on NTR as the road and foreshadowing has lead us to
Mr Newb
2024-08-13 16:27:03 +0000 UTCIn that case, three weeks to doomsday
George Costanza
2024-08-08 01:27:21 +0000 UTCI don't think there's an ending NnT could do that I *wouldn't* be satisfied with!
coffeepup
2024-08-06 01:06:41 +0000 UTCDon't even think there's an ending NnT could do that I'd be even halfway satisfied with. Even the one I laid out wouldn't do it
Konata Aoi
2024-08-05 23:44:37 +0000 UTCI dont think Yuichi having an orgasm at the end means anything people in super stressful situations will have their bodies react out of instinct for example rape victims can have an orgasm doesn't mean they enjoyed it the body is just reacting. I think Yuichi relationship was over when Hinako first left to have sex, and what she has been doing all this time has been mean and cruel she should have had the decency to end it before all the cheating, but that's not how the story is written.
Curtis Evans
2024-08-05 15:45:13 +0000 UTCI don't read ntr from the side of the cuckold but from the netori side, so this looking highly likely to be nts is very disappointing.
Grim ReeFer
2024-08-04 13:52:40 +0000 UTCI honestly think that it might just all be an act after all. The way Yuichi nutted at the end makes me think that all of this was intentional for Yuichis sake. But I guess we will know for sure next month. Thank you for the hard work you always deliver great translations.
Spectra
2024-08-04 02:26:56 +0000 UTCHey, you may try this link instead: https://we.tl/t-OtXRnXuwCT
kusso_megane
2024-08-03 21:44:47 +0000 UTCI know Genki is aware that Yuichi enjoys cuckoldry, but sometimes I feel that Genki resents him way more than he should. He doesn't really feel like a friend even though he was introduced as being one. I am interested to know what'll happen next. Yuichi has been getting third wheel treatment. And he has lost his gf and friend (don't know for a certainty until the next chap tho).
Skyline
2024-08-03 21:12:30 +0000 UTCI think the only reason NnT decided to do that is because as much as people want to call this just porn, they wanted to try to tell a story. If it was still an episodic one where not much connected with each other it'd be fine, but since Goda became the focus it feels they wanted to tell a story between these 3 of Yuichi finally accepting he is a cuck.
Konata Aoi
2024-08-03 16:53:23 +0000 UTCSounds like Kusso is praying for CH5 to be really good but we all know its going to be mid haha
George Costanza
2024-08-03 16:47:26 +0000 UTCAfter everything I've seen, at first I wouldn't agree with you. What gives your prediction A LOT of credibility is the author's heavy reusage of old panels. He seems to be getting lazier in the drawing department and your predictions line up with how much easier it would be to finish this story by using a flashback method of Hinako narrating each and every way she set things up with Genki while using old panels. I feel fucking pathetic saying this, but as long as the conclusion ends with Hinako and Yuichi being together in some capacity, I'd be a happy little cuck.
Timmy
2024-08-03 16:17:24 +0000 UTCAs always, Thanks for the fast translations. I really appreciate your hard work. I found your thoughts on the author much more insightful and interesting than the story at this point. Everything you've noted about the author is in line for a very consistent NTR ending. I'm wondering if his lack of interactions with his following means that he doesn't agree with the NTS sentiment that's been voiced so strongly. Maybe he's struggling with how his work is being perceived and that's why his last few chapters have lacked substance. Even though I root a lot for the NTS origins, at this point, it'd seem even more inauthentic if Hinako smirked and told Yuichi it was all just an act. One thing that bothers me is, why couldn't the author just stick to original formula when Hinako got stuck with Genki during the storm? What would be lost if Hinako came clean and told Yuichi about how much she fucked and enjoyed it with Genki rather than lying? I honestly could have read 100 chapters of the same formula with escalating scenarios because of how masterfully he was able to tease his readers. It's too late for me to turn back now. For better or worse, I'll see this through to the end. Hope you have a great day Mr. Translator. Thanks for guiding us through this journey.
Timmy
2024-08-03 16:08:37 +0000 UTCtbh, a bit of a twist for me, his nut at the end, meaning he is enjoying this, or has the potential to enjoy this relationship dynamic like others said, he may confess that he say it and enjoyed it, so they may stay in this cuck relationship, this time just hinako aware he knows worst case scenario is just typical bad end, bf gets broken up with, depressed, then just ends. even this may have a twist, since i have seen a couple manga where this happens, but the new pair dont get along after a while, gf goes back to OG bf, then its happy* end
Jiromejin
2024-08-03 14:44:06 +0000 UTCI pray man
RubenSandwich
2024-08-03 12:36:41 +0000 UTCYeah I actually think because Yuichi got his ultimate nut that Hinako had been promising him since the beginning, it could be that she planned all this out with Goda. It is technically an entire month that goes by before Yuichi asks her to have sex with Goda and it would answer my question of why Hinako told Goda that Yuichi was into NTS in the first place. Like you said she's going to say let's break up, Yuichi will get on his knees and plead not to do it and he finally admits he's into netorase that he got the orgasm she says he would get, and when he lifts his head Hinako's will be joining at him with that smirk that she hasn't looked at him with in months. She'll tell him everything that the only way he'd be able to get that orgasm is if he felt that she was genuinely being taken away from him. They'll stay together, her and Goda will have sex with Yuichi sitting watching, and instead of the frown she's being having every chapter she'll finally be smiling.
Konata Aoi
2024-08-03 11:53:48 +0000 UTCHi is mega is banned in my country :((
lol
2024-08-03 11:17:21 +0000 UTCI liked this chapter. You're right it was a missed opportunity. Exhibitionist sex would've been great as the friend said, more hidden sex scenes too. I don't mind the NTR but a NTR ending would be fucking boring dude something like "anything for you by yumeki banana" would've been nice, more NTS with different guys, it feels like NNT wants to finish this quickly. Regarding Hinako's words, yeah they're kinda generic like some shit that you would say in the heat of the moment but I guess I'm gonna wait for the psychological essays of our friends on exhentai
Waifu Sommelier
2024-08-03 07:54:09 +0000 UTCYeah, I agree with your timeskip point. It is kinda tiring seeing the same bedroom setting for 4 chapters straight when the previous ones took place in school, train, infirmary etc etc. A Hinako exhibitionist chapter with Goda would've been peak honestly.
Retty606
2024-08-03 07:34:44 +0000 UTC
