Sex Edition Ch3 Initial Draft Complete!
Added 2024-07-02 01:23:01 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
Quick Update: I've just finished the initial draft of the latest chapter!
I'll start working on the typesetting and the rest of the cleanup process next and will keep you updated on the progress. Thank you for your patience and support!
EDIT:
Hey everyone,
Sorry for the delay in getting the final cleaned-up chapter to you. I've been away from my workstation for the past few days due to work-related stuffs and just got home today. My bad for not giving you a heads-up sooner. I'll have the cleaned-up version ready and uploaded in the next 2 days.
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i mean the autor is Netorare No Tami and always had an ntr tag on it, so its expected
KrusteDE
2024-07-10 15:15:12 +0000 UTCRandom predictions of things that might happen next chapter(s): > 1. Goda starts hanging out with Yuichi and Hinako again in the mornings and lunchtime. - He probably only stopped because he didn't want Yuichi to get suspicious of them. Since he's shown Yuichi these videos, he feels his victory is inevitable. So, he probably no longer sees any reason to not spend as much time with Hinako as possible now. It's not like Yuichi can do anything about it. He has to pretend to be oblivious, or Hinako will know that he knows and break up with him. Speaking of which... > 2. Yuichi plays dumb and continues going on sexless dates with Hinako. - Keeping up appearances is the only option Yuichi can choose that keeps him and Hinako together. That said, Goda knows he's basically won at this point, so... >3. It becomes more and more obvious during Yuichi's dates with Hinako that her heart is beginning to fall to Goda. - Hinako might start showing up to the dates late, looking disheveled or exhausted from sex with Goda. She might get a text on her phone, leave Yuichi to go to the bathroom in the middle of the date, and come back looking like she just had a quickie. Or worse yet, she might make up an excuse and cancel a date with Yuichi to go have sex with Goda instead. And Yuichi will find out about all of this because... > 4. Goda sends Yuichi more photos/videos of himself with Hinako. - In addition to pics/vids of Hinako having sex with Goda mid-date, or in lieu of a date, Goda will continue meeting up with her regularly for the normal fwb meetups. Goda will pressure her during every meetup to break up with Yuichi and become his instead, and Hinako's refusal of the proposal will grow less and less adamant over time, ultimately leading to... > 5. Goda and Hinako kissing. - Hinako finally decides she loves Goda enough to allow kissing during sex. Goda, of course, is so good at it (despite having zero experience) that it drives Hinako wild. She ends up wanting to kiss him all the time afterwards, and maybe even stops kissing Yuichi on their dates, thus ending all intimacy between herself and Yuichi. And with that penultimate hurdle cleared, all that's left is... > 6. Hinako leaves Yuichi for Goda/Hinako gets pregnant. - I'm not sure which one would happen first, but both are likely to happen eventually.
baconpie
2024-07-10 05:28:14 +0000 UTCI don't see how Yuichi trying to talk with Goda would do him any good. It seems Goda has decided he'd rather steal Hinako than stay friends with Yuichi. Even if that's not true, and Yuichi can convince Goda to not steal away his girl, then what? Goda would still keep fucking Hinako, and Yuichi pretends not to notice? At some point, Hinako would notice Goda's no longer pressing the issue with trying to steal her away, and then the cat will be out of the bag. Hinako will know that Yuichi knows, and they break up. Also, just like how Hinako has become a slave to her instincts as a female, Goda is the living embodiment of being controlled by the male instinct. He would be the kind of guy to tell Yuichi he'll back off, only to throw that plan out the window the next time he hooks up with Hinako because his instincts tell him to steal this woman. All told, Yuichi talking to Goda would at best delay the inevitable, and at worst motivate Goda to try even harder to steal Hinako away. You're right about Yuichi wanting what's best for Hinako, though. It might be possible that Yuichi confronts Hinako and just tells her "I know about you and Goda. I also know you told Goda that me finding out means you'd break up with me. But I just want to see you happy, and being with Goda makes you happy, so it's okay if we break up and you become Goda's woman instead." That would actually be kinda GOATed and Sigma af if he did that. It would be great if he throws in an explanation of how he only asked her to have sex with Goda in the first place because he didn't feel like he could satisfy her as a man, and he just wanted her to be happy, and how the two of them reached this point because of a series of misunderstandings and miscommunications. Just air out all of his thoughts and feelings for her to see. It probably ends with her choosing Goda in the end anyway, but it would feel cathartic for both Yuichi and the readers to have Yuichi and Hinako finally be on the same page about their relationship, even if it ends up being fleeting. But who am I kidding? Yuichi's going to clam up and suffer internally while things only get worse for him, and Goda ultimately gets Hinako pregnant.
baconpie
2024-07-10 04:57:07 +0000 UTCThat could work and I can see it if he does decide to say something. Yuichi at this point only wants Hinako to be happy though. Looking at the situation in Yuichi's eyes, would taking her away from Goda who's making her happy sexually be a good idea to him? Also If he knows that no matter what she'll leave what motivates him to say anything at all? If anything he'd try to talk to Goda first I feel because they are still technically "friends"
Konata Aoi
2024-07-10 03:27:40 +0000 UTCThat's only if you take everything Hinako said as the unshakeable truth. People speak in absolutes only to go back on their word later all the time. You never know what will trigger a change of heart/resolve. Hinako seemed adamant about Goda not telling Yuichi about their relationship ever since the typhoon. She probably told him dozens of times over the past three months. Finding out Goda broke the one rule she gave him might anger her enough to tip the scales. Also, it works because the scales would only be tipped temporarily. As you said, her body has fallen. She could be furious with Goda while talking with Yuichi, but then once she meets up with Goda to confront him, her female instincts take over once again and she falls for him once and for all. Once her rage from Goda breaking her rule begins to subside, she reverts back to following the plan she laid out in the bathtub. It could be like the similar trope in NTR where the girl has fallen almost completely, but temporarily escapes from the clutches of the antagonist to give their relationship with the MC one last chance, only to ultimately fall for the antagonist in the end.
baconpie
2024-07-10 02:47:06 +0000 UTCFeel like that would only work if Hinako wasn't already dead set on breaking up. The problem is even if Yuichi does tell her that and she gets mad at Goda, she knows her body can't go back. She might mad at him but staying with Yuichi if he finds out isn't an option for her anymore
Konata Aoi
2024-07-10 01:14:54 +0000 UTCIf NnT wants to milk one last squeeze out of this cash cow without resorting to filler, he could have part 4 be the confrontation and breakup, followed by a final chapter where pregnancy/NTR happens. Maybe Yuichi confronts Hinako, and Hinako breaks up with him like she said she would, but then Yuichi shows her that Goda broke his promise not to show Yuichi the videos. This pisses Hinako off. Hinako then says she'll talk to and break things off with Goda, and she'll either cancel breaking up with Yuichi or hint that she might decide to take Yuichi back after dumping Goda instead. Hinako leaves to confront Goda, and the chapter ends with Yuichi getting another video sent to him by Goda. Final chapter is full NTR, Goda convinces Hinako that she loves the dick way too much to ever break up with him, and Hinako apologizes to Yuichi before breaking things off with him for good. Maybe pregnancy happens at that point. And a time skip. NnT loves time skips.
baconpie
2024-07-10 00:09:13 +0000 UTCIf this turns into actual netorare I'll just forget I ever read it. But I hope and think it will go like Netorare no tami's other doujin, the "7 days of cuckolding" or whatever. Hinako won't leave Yuichi, she will prob break up with him out of guilt, he refuses, and they both stay as a couple(but she'll be pregnant with Goda's baby). I really, really hate normal netorare so I hope it doesn't turn out like that, if it does I'll have wasted time and I'll prob be slightly depressed. This is why I wish netorase and netorare would actually be separate, instead of blended.
Sakana3
2024-07-09 19:35:17 +0000 UTCSadly, the only other option is to confront her about it, which will pretty much end the series. I feel like NNT would say that the last chapter would be the final one if it was the case, so unless he somehow involves Yukino in it and have her taken away from Yuichi as well, it will be this next chapter then a final one. Anything more than that is pushing it.
Konata Aoi
2024-07-09 19:23:15 +0000 UTCMan, I hope not. This chapter already felt like a filler chapter. The only important plot points/info we got from this chapter was the convo at the end, and that now raw sex is okay between Goda and Hinako. That's like 10 pages of content, with the rest being poorly-drawn sex scenes with weird faces and messed-up body proportions. Another chapter like that, where not much happens plot-wise, would be incredibly disappointing.
baconpie
2024-07-09 19:04:22 +0000 UTCExactly which is why I just think this next chapter is gonna be a filler chapter where Yuichi just tries to keep the relationship going by not saying anything. Now the funny ending would be if Yuichi somehow gets his magical dick growth out of nowhere because of his desire to not want to lose Hinako
Konata Aoi
2024-07-09 17:33:19 +0000 UTCFully agree. The ending of this chapter almost feels like NnT was systematically shutting down every possible route to a happy ending that the fans came up with in the previous chapter. > "The thumbnail is censored, so maybe it's Yukino in the video." - Nope, only the thumbnail was censored. The video is not, and it's definitely Hinako. > "Yuichi can man up and confront Hinako and let her know he's not okay with this. They can talk it out and fix their relationship." - Nope, Hinako loves the dick too much. If Yuichi confronts her, she'll break up with him. > "Yuichi can appeal to Hinako's heart. He can forgive her and ask to start over, like he did in the end of the Ryosuke Playboy chapter." - Nope, she loves the dick too much. Even if Yuichi forgives her, Hinako will break up with him because she refuses to give up the dick. > "Yuichi can forgive Hinako, and allow her to keep fucking Goda. Goda may have won her body, but Yuichi can keep her heart." - Nope, Hinako loves the dick so much that Goda is starting to win over her heart, too. If she doesn't end things with Goda, she will eventually fall for him completely, and she refuses to end things with Goda. If NnT tries to come up with some sort of twist ending, or manipulates the situation in a non-twist way (for example, Goda starts acting like an asshole towards Hinako all of a sudden) such that things end up returning to the status quo after all of this, that would be the worst possible ending for the readers. I'd rather it be a sad ending than a twist ending at this point. An ending where both Yuichi and Hinako walk away from this still in a happy relationship should be impossible, AFAIK. The only "happy" ending I can come up with at this point is Yuichi dumping Hinako, or even getting dumped by Hinako, and moving on to find another girl. This relationship is effectively dead in the water.
baconpie
2024-07-09 14:44:06 +0000 UTCi enjoy the final version more, then just the rough translated one
KrusteDE
2024-07-09 12:02:44 +0000 UTCFeel the same way. Just reading it to finish the story now. The issue is NNT has already written what will happen because appealing to Hinako's heart is just not gonna work. A twist ending after all this will just feel weird
Konata Aoi
2024-07-09 03:51:01 +0000 UTCMaybe when NnT said Hinako's Secret chapters would be a mix of truth and lies, he meant that some entire chapters would be true and others wouldn't, so the rimjob stuff was a true one, but the Yamada one was intended to be an untrue chapter, but then later NnT realized that whole concept was kinda dumb so he just recategorized the Yamada chapter and stopped making any more Secret chapters after the criticism and confusion from the rimjob chapter. And yeah, both Hinako and Goda both got progressively less considerate of Yuichi's feelings as time went on, and from the BBS chapter onwards I started not liking the direction the series was heading. I'm just sticking around to see how it ends at this point.
baconpie
2024-07-09 01:00:19 +0000 UTCDamn, that's a long time. So I guess they 2-4 months left to spare. NnT could squeeze another time skip in if he wanted lol.
baconpie
2024-07-08 23:28:19 +0000 UTCYeah that's what was said, but with Goda confirming that she actually did do the rimjob stuff from the secret chapter, it makes the rest of them most likely true as well. In addition to that, if Hinako's personality remained the same it would've been looked at more favorably too.
Konata Aoi
2024-07-08 22:53:10 +0000 UTCI believe it's from either April or May to February or March.
Konata Aoi
2024-07-08 22:51:52 +0000 UTCDawg just read it. He alr translated it
Tulopapiculo
2024-07-08 20:21:15 +0000 UTCHow long is a school year in Japan? This series has a lot of long time jumps. You have: 1 month for the Ryosuke playboy chapter 1 month for the Ijima bully chapter 2 months minimum between Goda's intro chapter and Goda's date chapter 1 week of Yuichi being ill during the Secret BBS chapter 1 week for the typhoon during the Sex Part 1 chapter 3 months as sex friends with Goda for the Sex Part 2 chapter That's at least 7.5 months. Some of these could be happening concurrently with each other or with other chapters, which compresses the timeline a bit, but the story appears to be occurring chronologically, and there are no references or evidence to indicate that any of these are happening at the same time as other events. Hinako wears her summer uniform all the way until Part 2 of the sex chapters, so I'm curious as to whether this whole series occurs over two semesters or just one.
baconpie
2024-07-08 19:06:13 +0000 UTCAh, that makes sense. I could see how the love hotel stuff could be seen as a step backwards if canonical sex had already happened at that point. Didn't NnT say at some point that the Hinako's Secret chapters are supposed to be a mix of the truth and lies, meaning it's only semi-canonical, and some of the stuff that happens in those chapters might not be true? I know fans for the most part consider those chapters to be 100% canon, even if they might not be. Did NnT ever change the definition/purpose of the Secret chapters to be fully canon? From reading old fanbox comments, it seems a lot of the interest in Goda was about two things: - 1. Wanting to see Goda have more secret oral sessions with Hinako in various places/scenarios throughout school and the rest of town. This sentiment is still shared in some of the comments to this very day, so you're right about the fans wanting that time gap filled in. - 2. His being friendly/polite/grateful/humble toward Yuichi endeared him to the fans in a way that the other antagonists didn't. Fans were looking forward to see him continuing to do more intense things with Hinako, so long as the non-hostile aspects remained intact. Unfortunately, NnT did the escalation but removed Goda's friendly/grateful nature in the process, which didn't sit well with a lot of fans who then got tired of him. I think the things that happened from the blowjob chapter onward would have resonated better with fans if Goda filled the role as a friend helping Yuichi get off to being cucked, while getting to enjoy doing things with Hinako at the same time. If he played that role right, Yuichi probably would've let him creampie Hinako by now anyway, as Hinako would've pressured Yuichi into letting things escalate more and more over time.
baconpie
2024-07-08 16:53:53 +0000 UTCwhats taking so long to do 30% cleanup :/
KrusteDE
2024-07-08 14:36:50 +0000 UTCNo not the tags. If I could take a screenshot and post it I would. I was around for the secret chapter to bad end change and it was because leading up to that love hotel secret chapter people were guessing and wondering what all Hinako and Goda did in the love hotel for that long and when the chapter came out everyone was disappointed it was only handjob and rimjob. Because she already had sex in the masturbation cuckold secret is weird that he didn't show that at all there. After that NNT changed it because unlike the other secret chapters that one featured sex and since as you can see now that's a big factor in the series he didn't want that first time to be in a secret chapter. Also because of the rest of the secret chapters being things that definitely happened as opposes to that one he had to clarify what the secret chapters were supposed to be. For me ever since the love hotel chapter I figured Goda was just gonna be the guy going forward simply because of that stupid timeskip of several months in the beginning of the chapter. I think NNT misunderstood and thought fans wanted more Goda but what we really wanted was for him to show us what happened in those months leading up to that
Konata Aoi
2024-07-08 11:42:36 +0000 UTCI'm not sure what you mean about the title on fantia. If you mean the tags, from what I've seen they all have both the 寝取られ and 寝取らせ tags. If you mean something else, doing a ctrl+f for "寝取られ" only shows the tags (and maybe someone saying it in the comments). As for fans not liking Goda, it's kind of ironic. To quote myself on e-hentai once more: >Something I discovered from the fanbox comments was that the Masturbation Cuckold BADEND was originally released not as a BADEND, but as an episode of Hinako's Secret, meaning it was originally intended to be canon. NnT even states on the release page for that installment that Yamada is blackmailing Hinako with the knowledge of their raw sex, and has been given access to Hinako's breasts whenever he wants. Apparently, it was recategorized as a BADEND at some point, due either to negative feedback or to give these sex episodes with Goda a greater impact. So it seems like NnT has had intentions of Hinako getting fucked by other dudes in secret for a while now, but had to dial it back until he created a character that the fans seemingly wouldn't object to stealing Hinako away from Yuichi.< I'm pretty sure NnT has several chapters planned ahead when he makes these, so that he can focus on cranking out as many drawings/pages as possible every month. And Goda was hugely popular after his first two appearances, much more so than any other antagonist in the series up to that point. So NnT probably thought he found the perfect character to use to transition the series into full NTR territory with. But by the blowjob chapter, the fans were already tired of him, and wanted Takeshi and the others to make a return, or for a new antagonist to arrive. I think a big part of that was that Goda wasn't really an antagonist in his first appearance, and was only minorly antagonistic in his second appearance. Unlike Takeshi and Hebikawa, Goda always acted friendly and appreciative towards Yuichi for letting him experience things with Hinako. I feel like that's a big reason why some of the fans liked him above the others. But from the BBS chapter forward, those aspects of his personality vanished, and without that he's just another generic rival like the others, so it makes sense that the fans would get tired of him. But now it's too late to bring in somebody else, so we're stuck with Goda.
baconpie
2024-07-08 09:38:36 +0000 UTCSo an interesting thing I noticed because I follow NNT on fantia as well is that leading up to the blowjob chapter the titles will have 寝取らせ in them but starting with the sex chapter it switched to 寝取られ. I don't think the fanbox side shows that. You can take that how you want, but now I can go ahead and just believe it's a netorare story from here on out. The sex chapter 1 was always weird to me because, like you said, Hinako, the entire chapter just acted cold towards him. Being happy that he decided to go send her to go fuck Goda but looked disappointed that he asked her to have sex with him before that. I agree with the whole he might be apologizing thing simply because personally I feel like the story I'm reading now is completely different from the story I got attached to. This currently is just a generic ntr plot, but before, there were actual things to the characters that made it good. I will say I don't think he was influenced by comments. Because if he was you'd be seeing other people than Goda. For a while, people have been asking for others and loathing the fact that he's even around still.
Konata Aoi
2024-07-08 04:17:33 +0000 UTCYeah, the Yukino chapter did feel like a turning point. They never confirmed it in the story, as far as I'm aware, but Hinako definitely wasn't hanging out with some friend. She was with Goda. She got dressed up in the slutty outfits Goda likes, and spent time commiting intimate acts with Goda behind Yuichi's back. She never told him about it afterwards, either. Couple that with Yukino saying how Hinako had been talking with Goda on the phone every night, and started masturbating while thinking of Goda, and it's clear that at some point between the love hotel date chapter and the Yukino chapter, Goda had made a breakthrough in his relationship with Hinako, to the extent that Hinako began harboring a strong physical and slight emotional attraction to him. It would make sense that she told Goda about Yuichi's NTS fetish around that time, perhaps as a subtle hint to Goda that she's okay with him trying harder to steal her away. It wasn't just Goda who started acting differently around Yuichi after that chapter. Hinako began treating him differently, as well. There isn't a single instance of Hinako acting kind, reassuring, or comforting towards Yuichi after that. In the past, The chapters would start with Hinako being a normal, loving girlfriend around Yuichi, and she'd change her behavior only when the prospect of performing NTS was brought up. But Hinako starts off the blowjob chapter pretty much ignoring Yuichi and chatting with Goda while he gropes her ass right in front of Yuichi's face. This behavior began back in the love hotel date chapter, but Hinako would still pay some attention to Yuichi back then, and in that chapter and the related Hinako's secret chapter, you could tell that she was mostly annoyed by Goda, and still cared more for Yuichi, at least emotionally. But from the blowjob chapter onwards, she starts only interacting with Yuichi to tease him. Even Kusso himself mentioned how terrible Hinako was acting towards Yuichi in the sex arc pt. 1. She didn't even say "I love you" back to Yuichi when he desperately called out to her before she left to get fucked by Goda. I mentioned in the comments of e-hentai for Part 2 that Hinako's speech/confession to Goda on Day 2 might have actually been a message from NnT himself to his readers, particularly the readers who are upset at the direction things are heading in. Having her say that up until the night of Day 1, she'd been doing all of it just to make Yuichi happy felt like a retcon, and contradicted what us as the reader saw in her behavior leading to this point. To quote myself: >What if Hinako's guilty confession to Goda on Day 2 was actually meant as a message from NnT to his fans? Here are the things Hinako says to Goda on Day 2, and the possible correlations to NnT's message to the fans: - "My plans might be ruined.": NnT might not have expected any backlash from the previous chapter, and it might have caused them to change/reconsider their plans, or at the very least feel a little bad for letting down some of their fans. - "Everything for Yuichi.": NnT essentially retcons all of the previous chapters, revealing that Hinako genuinely did it all for Yuichi and wasn't at risk of getting stolen away at all. This might be NnT's way of saying "As an apology for those who would prefer things stay the same between Yuichi and Hinako, I've retconned all previous chapters so that they are now all entirely an act by Hinako to make Yuichi happy. Please enjoy the older chapters from now on, knowing that the earlier NTS formula that I had established was intact all the way until this current arc." - "You can't have a happy ending anymore" (said by Goda): This could be NnT telling the readers they just finished apologizing to that "While you're welcome to enjoy pure NTS in the previous chapters, please understand that from this point forward things will be changing from the established formula." - "Please go easy on me": NnT hoping the fans don't get too mad for what they have planned, both for the remainder of Part 2, and whatever they're cooking up for Part 3.< Regardless of whether that theory is right or not, I personally reject Hinako's statement that she was doing it all for Yuichi up until that point. She was definitely doing it for her own enjoyment, as well as for Yuichi. Taking what she said at face value contradicts the visible evidence of her behavior so much so that it would be a borderline plot hole if it were true. Somebody in the fanbox comments during one of the sex arc chapters mentioned how Hinako claimed to be doing the NTS stuff to make Yuichi happy, which means that doing NTS stuff for Yuichi was her way of expressing her love for him. But in the three months following the typhoon, she doesn't do any NTS stuff for Yuichi anymore. Obviously, there are several reasons for this, the biggest one being she was spending all her free time away from Yuichi getting dicked down by Goda. But there must have been moments like the train molester chapter, where she was alone with Yuichi in a scenario where she could tease him with another man, and she still didn't do it. This might be taken as a sign that her love for Yuichi has changed, if not faded almost completely. Spending three months with Yuichi, without any sex, without NTS teasing, and without confessing that she's been having an affair pretty much means her relationship with Yuichi has been downgraded to just a close friendship at this point. It might be possible that the guilt she feels in this newest chapter during and after sex might be purely from her knowing that what she's doing is morally wrong, rather than feeling bad for cheating on the one she supposedly loves. In my mind, Hinako already wants to break up with Yuichi and become Goda's woman, and she's just staying with Yuichi for now out of obligation, or because she wants to avoid having to confess her infidelity to him. Her saying she would break up even if he forgives her sort of confirms this. She's just looking for a convenient way out at this point. If someone offered her a way to end her relationship with Yuichi that didn't have any negative repercussions for both parties involved, she'd take it in a heartbeat.
baconpie
2024-07-08 03:46:14 +0000 UTCI figured she told him around the Yukino prank chapter because after that chapter Goda's whole demeanor towards Yuichi changed. Even in the hotel secret chapter he said he felt bad for wanting to steal Hinako but still wanted to. After the prank chapter it was like he didn't care about Yuichi's feelings much. I agree if you reread and look at Hinako's actions it's clear she got in over her head and the only time we saw her inner thoughts was in the Hebikawa secret chapter. I also agree with summer of the fanbox comments that Hinako's reasoning changed. At first she wanted Yuichi's cute reactions and that was the reason she teased him, along the way that changed until what it is now. I know the argument is that Yuichi could've stopped what happened, but would Hinako have listened? I agree with #2 and #6 but not so much 4 because I feel that even without Goda's pressure he would've agreed.
Konata Aoi
2024-07-07 16:26:11 +0000 UTCdamn still no cleanup D:
KrusteDE
2024-07-07 15:58:06 +0000 UTCThe possible explanations I could come up with are: - 1. She told him after their love hotel date after she tells him to show off to Yuichi. - 2. She told him about it as part of her 'revised plans' after Goda posted to the BBS without her permission (it's unclear why/how telling him would fit into her plan, but either way it doesn't matter because at this point those plans have gone out the window anyway). - 3. At some point, Goda just straight-up asked Hinako why she lets him do all these things with him, and why Yuichi seems to be okay with it. - 4. She felt that letting Goda know that Yuichi is into NTS was the only way they'd be able to convince Yuichi to allow the blowjob to take place. Maybe she thought she couldn't pressure Yuichi into agreeing to it by herself that time. Another explanation falls into a theory I have about Hinako's perceived intelligence and competence vs her actual intelligence and competence. The story is told from Yuichi's POV. Outside of a few side-stories, we see everything through his eyes. Because Yuichi has low self-esteem and feels that Hinako is way out of his league, Yuichi (and by extension, the reader) see Hinako as this sort of Madonna - a near-perfect woman who's clever, scheming, and manipulative, and always knows exactly what she's doing. Yuichi views her as some sort of NTS mastermind, and because we see everything from his perspective, that's how she's largely portrayed in the series. But, it's become quite clear at this point that she was none of those things. Perhaps she thought she was at some point, but it's obvious to see now that she's actually a bit of a pushover herself, and isn't nearly as good at planning things as Yuichi believed her to be. Any time a strong male makes a demand of her in the series, Hinako caves almost instantly. Takeshi tells her to touch his dick, and she does. Hebikawa tells her to let him fuck her tits raw, and she lets him. Goda asks her to give him a rimjob, and she obliges. A random student starts humping her offscreen in the BBS chapter, and she lets him have intercrural sex with her. The only times she's put up any sort of resistance is when Goda asked her to be his fuckbuddy and when Goda asked her for raw sex, and even then she caved eventually. Hinako is not some mastermind playing NTS 4D Chess. She's a dumb high school girl who thought she knew what she was doing, but ultimately got in over her head. The cracks in the facade were there all along, but after the events of sex edition pt. 2, now even Yuichi is starting to see her for who she really is. If you adopt this mentality, a lot of the seemingly nonsensical decisions/statements she's made in this series start to make more sense. Why did she tell Goda about Yuichi's NTS fetish? Well, maybe: - 5. She let it slip or told him out of sheer incompetence. They talk a lot, so at some point she could've just said it, either accidentally or because she didn't think it was a big deal to let Goda know at that point. - 6. She wasn't being completely honest during her confession to Goda in sex edition pt. 2. While she does these cuckoldry things mostly with Yuichi in mind, she also, as someone just as vulnerable to her natural female instincts as any other woman, does it because she likes doing sexual things with a strong male. She tells Goda about Yuichi's NTS fetish because she wanted to suck Goda's cock for her own enjoyment, not just Yuichi's. Letting Goda know about the NTS stuff just made it easier for her to set up more sexual encounters with Goda, under the pretense of doing it for Yuichi's sake. Personally, I think it might be a combination of #2, 4, and 6.
baconpie
2024-07-07 15:58:03 +0000 UTCA question that has bothered me since the first time I read it in the blowjob chapter and has only bothered me more with every passing chapter is why Hinako told Goda that Yuichi was into NTS. Not only was there no reason for him to know, I can't think of a conversation in which that's brought up without explaining why she's doing all this in the first place. And if she didn't explain how is that for Yuichi? The only thing that would remotely make sense is that Goda would be in on Hinako's plan but why would this be a part of the plan?
Konata Aoi
2024-07-07 06:44:49 +0000 UTCAh, that makes sense. So an overly detailed rephrasing would be something like "Even though you understand that your body has completely fallen for my cock, and you're prepared to break up with Yuichi if he finds out about us (regardless of whether he forgives you for it or not), you still won't break up with Yuichi as long as he doesn't find out about us, huh? Or rather, you feel like you can't or mustn't break up with him, instead of you won't break up with him." The reasoning you give for why she feels that way makes sense, too. Thanks for clearing that up.
baconpie
2024-07-07 03:38:08 +0000 UTCGuess I took it as a "Even though your body has completely fallen, you can't bring yourself to say it because you don't want to hurt Yuichi." I she broke up with him she'd have to give a reason as to why and the truth would come out and that would hurt him. As long as he never found out he'd never be hurt so as long as she can keep up the facade she can't break up with him
Konata Aoi
2024-07-07 03:23:48 +0000 UTCI'm slightly confused by Goda's dialogue from pages 285-287. He says "Your body has completely fallen, huh. Even though you understand and are prepared for it, you still can't bring yourself to say 'Let's break up', huh? No... it's more like you can't say it rather than you won't say it, right?" What does he mean by that? What is it she understands and is prepared for? Break up with who, Yuichi or Goda? It's a little vague. The wording of it is very strange. Why did he correct himself to say she can't rather than she won't, when there was no correction needed? He already said she can't. The possible interpretations I've come up with are: 1. "Even though you know your relationship with Yuichi is basically over at this point, you still can't bring yourself to break up with him." 2. "Even though you know Yuichi would gladly forgive you and agree to start over with you, you can't keep yourself away from my dick and stop being my sex friend." If anybody can clarify this for me, I'd appreciate it.
baconpie
2024-07-06 13:52:36 +0000 UTCi'm fired up for the clean up. it will be a nice end for my vactation
KrusteDE
2024-07-04 11:17:59 +0000 UTCProbably the same way I snopped thro my girlfriend smartphone doujin did. Hinako will say stuff like let's break up, but eventually cry and back off, and Yuichi will end up accepting her cucking on him. That happens on ch3 of that doujin iirc. Shitty af.
Bertolotto
2024-07-03 15:48:20 +0000 UTCI wonder how Hinako will respond when she finds out that Genki sent all these videos to Yuichi when she asked him not to and on that same thought since she is going to break up with Yuichi anyway and she has already hurt him why does she not want Genki to send the videos to Yuichi. I hope the author gives Yuichi some kind of dignity, its kind of sad that you build some kind of loving relationship between two characters to have its core value narrowed down to the size of some guys penis.
Curtis Evans
2024-07-02 19:05:59 +0000 UTCi love where it goes
KrusteDE
2024-07-02 14:56:23 +0000 UTCI can't imagine a better ending for this, this is the hottest way this could have gone. I'm on the edge of my seat for things to go as badly as possible, you just can't find this kind of stuff anywhere else. I hope this is crushing!
coffeepup
2024-07-02 07:24:34 +0000 UTCAfter a slow and thorough reading... I have no idea what happens next. I don't know what Yuichi is going to do or what he should do. That writing is very heavy.
George Costanza
2024-07-02 05:51:38 +0000 UTCPretty good chapter. I hope Yuichi confront her and breaks up with her, lil shit needs to man up and move on.
Waifu Sommelier
2024-07-02 03:56:50 +0000 UTCdude when I saw Goda's dick getting even bigger I laughed so hard, that was kinda silly.
Waifu Sommelier
2024-07-02 03:53:28 +0000 UTCUgh. This author is sick in the head. Looking at the RAW vs translated is completely different. I thought there was a chance for Yuichi, but now I get that deep, gut wrenching feeling that Hinako will be the one to pull the trigger first and break up with Yuichi. Given both Yuichi and Hinako's personality, I doubt there will even be closure. I would not be surprised if Hinako didn't mention her reasons for breaking up and also, wouldn't be surprised if Yuichi just accepted the break up without confronting her. At the very least, it seems the author is set on finishing the story, and we'll see the conclusion before the end of the year. I feel sick and want to get off this ride now.
Timmy
2024-07-02 03:20:26 +0000 UTCDamn, you movin fast with the translation. Really good chapter, Goated.
Nichoto
2024-07-02 03:12:51 +0000 UTCYuichi will go back in time to stop himself from doing this and then have a baby with Hinako and a Happy Ending!!!
George Costanza
2024-07-02 03:06:30 +0000 UTCPreciate the hard work. Because we can't just have Yuichi say something next chapter, it'll go like I said most likely and he'll pretend he doesn't know but unless he goes on a dick strengthening trip in the mountains of caucas the ending is pretty much set in stone so why have the filler chapter anyway
Konata Aoi
2024-07-02 01:28:01 +0000 UTCMan that was so heartbreaking. I appreciate Hinako at ch1~2 of the sex edition. But the blame is for sure 50/50, yet still sadly there's nothing to save anymore, unless... unless the author decides to smoke weed and come up with some fucked up random shit xD.
Bertolotto
2024-07-02 01:25:40 +0000 UTCThanks mate!
Waifu Sommelier
2024-07-02 01:25:05 +0000 UTCthanks for the hard work !!! 🙌🏾
backw00d
2024-07-02 01:23:40 +0000 UTC
