Toxic Candy pg 7
Added 2019-05-22 03:15:53 +0000 UTC...I'm tempted to do a follow-up where Violet suggests "Targaryen" would've been better than "show poodle", but 1.) Mercy might not get the reference, 2.) Vi shouldn't be watching Game of Thrones, and 3.) I have too many follow-ups planned as it is...
Updated - fixed some typos, and made some additions & alterations to the dialogue. I've had a lot on my mind this week, so I may make some further tweaks before the public release...
Comments
Yo, I love this scene but I smell a very plausible misdirection.
Angelo B.
2019-05-23 03:58:53 +0000 UTCSomething tells me that Mercy is just getting warmed up to "DISH" out some more courses for Candy to chew on.
Kenneth Winkelman
2019-05-22 15:27:46 +0000 UTCOof, that was a stunner!
Richard Handy
2019-05-22 13:53:44 +0000 UTCJust because she shouldn't be watching it doesn't mean she hasn't. ;)
Brian Christy Burke
2019-05-22 12:10:46 +0000 UTCWell done sir, excellent story telling.
Oscar Rios
2019-05-22 11:51:41 +0000 UTCOuch, right in the DNA.
Graeme Thorburn
2019-05-22 06:55:15 +0000 UTC
