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APM Part 3 Sneak Peek #8

Here we see Anna's outfit for Sunday. She's staying strong and keeping her spirits up despite all the turmoil in her life.

As I alluded to in my last post... I know there's people wanting results by now, but I'll warn you that Anna is not there yet.  It's going to take her a few days to process everything... she's still in shock.  She'll need to interact with David and be comfortable with the situation, being that there's so many unknowns.

That doesn't mean there won't be some hotness in the coming update and beyond, but I'm just giving fair warning that it's not going to be explosive yet.  My purpose is not to endlessly tease everyone... it's more about trying to stay true to the story and the characters.  It's about how the couple responds to this incredibly unfortunate chain of events.... It's NOT a revenge story.

Now, if the complaint is me taking too long to move this forward, I'll admit it's taken longer than I'd thought... and I even cut out some characters and storylines.  The artist has the bandwidth for about 100 renders per month give or take... and there will be animations coming when things get hot, so that will take some time... and I only have the bandwidth to write and program around 100 renders a month.  So, that's why it takes a few months to crank these updates out.  We're actually lucky it's gone so smooth and that no life emergencies have consumed the artist or me.

I bring this up to say that if anyone is unhappy or impatient with the progress and lack of action, please just come back later.  I don't want anyone to support me who's unhappy with it.  And I totally understand the complaints... the idea that it's been over a year and Anna hasn't been seen naked yet sounds absurd in an adult game.  I totally get that, and I question that as well..  But I've always had a plan in mind when to expose her and when she finally falls to her dark side... I don't want to deviate from that plan.  This VN is supposed to be a unique experience... not simple porn.  It's almost like - it's a Hallmark movie that turns dark halfway through.  That's the experience I'm more or less aiming for.  Like, what happens when you inject some really bad characters into the Hallmark movie?  Well... here you go!

For those who enjoy the process and continue to support me, I'm so grateful for you, and I wish I could give you more content and interact with you more, but I just know the most important thing to everyone is finishing this story, so that's my focus when I have free time.  And I don't always have free time, unfortunately.

For those who are expecting and anticipating a true porn experience in the next update or two, I just wanted to give fair warning that you could be disappointed, so just come back later on during the meat of part 3.

Thanks everyone!

APM Part 3 Sneak Peek #8

Comments

Love the fact that this is original material. It means you have ALL the lattitude or liberty to go where this story needs to go. I want to see Anna and her husband back and happy together at the end, but I am making it hard (and super sexy and I guess NTRish in the process), I play David as the most loving, supporting and trusting husbang the game alloys me, and I play Anna the exact opposite.

AmaraHmmm

Very nice. Then push for quality over quantity

AmaraHmmm

I’m happy you enjoy! And yes, it’s a journey. As for abandoning it, that’s not an option for me unless I lose support and can’t pay the artist, but so far I’ve received great support and am moving full steam ahead. The only way there’s a significant delay or an abandonment is if I have serious health issues… that I can’t help.

Mr. Palmer

100% original. I have a framework, but I’m writing as I go.

Mr. Palmer

​Final thought/feedback : I respect the choice you're making. If you impose outside constraints on a story teller, then the story itself will suffer. But choosing to start the week over from Anna's POV has taken a lot of time. Things would have moved along at a much faster pace (meaning we would be much ahead in the story by this time) if the story was told from both POVs at the same time. One frame lets us know what He thinks/ feels, the next frame lets us know what She thinks/ feels. Or something like that. Anyway, I am enjoying the journey. I guess this is a 5-year voyage :)

AmaraHmmm

Also, is this story original or from another source material (is this from a book?)

AmaraHmmm

I'm OK with a slow pace or slow burn. My main worry about this is that it is very likely that this VN will never get finished. Over 60% of the developers I've followed since I discovered those games (during the pandemic) have simply stopped posting upgrades and stopped all communication. Bye bye, Adios, see you (not) next time. I'm not saying this will happen with a Perfect Marriage, I'm saying it's my main fear.

AmaraHmmm

I think upcoming update he’ll finish the weekend & then next one he’ll do Monday & then fast forward to her meeting up with Stenstromber mid week 🤷🏻‍♂️

R nator

Same question. It seems this update will only have rest of Saturday and Sunday.

Eulerian Neumann

I hope too

claudio brovelli

How long a time span are you planning to cover in this update? Because iirc, we are not going to see the story unfolds in day to day basis according to the q n a.

Sun Elune

In it for the long haul. Some voyeur or accidental exposure like a nip slip or upskirt would be hot without going full porn. Everything you’re doing is great. Stay the course!

BC8

I think that from the beginning it was clear that this story had a rhythm and was going to be slow, anyone who didn't see it has a problem, on the other hand, those who accuse you of deceiving us must think that it is easier to render people with clothes that without it or cheaper, or what? I would feel cheated that it was the typical meaningless porn that floods the internet, continue with your plan no matter who falls and whoever doesn't like it already knows, and I understand the impatient people, the wait is hard, but it would be worse not to have one good story. I feel my English from Google Translaitor ;)

Bentxi

I for one support your vision Mr. Palmer and I feel like Anna doing anything to risky before the next weekend is a little absurd. I mean she is a working mom needing to find a babysitter, dealing with whatever feelings she is experiencing, etc. I get the fantasy of her just gobbling up whatever dick you throw at her like most adult games, but you’re trying to craft something more realistic. I think the people that come back and complain just shows you how good of a product you’ve crafted that people thirst for it.

Bringn_Da_Pain

Marvin pool event in the next update?

iSmokinGun

I'm just dealing with a natural human instinct that says - when people give you money, you need to make them feel like they got what they paid for. I just want to be clear on expectations with everyone on what's coming. I'm moving on though... time to focus on Part 3!

Mr. Palmer

I support you Mr palmer. Just go with your plan. 👍

Eulerian Neumann

Damn🔥 Anna is looking so damn hot. Full drool worthy 🤤🤤 It's great that you're staying true to the character. And I think, you should take ppl unrest as an compliment to your skills that they, including me, can't wait for action to unfold. N tbh, waiting for part 3 is kinda new realm, since you build up the expectations of hotness to come, so we all are wondering when and how. You always deliver, so you got nothing to worry. Once the update is out, we all can anticipate then where the story is leading and then ppl expectations could be managed.

Sun Elune


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