Update
Added 2023-06-11 22:06:41 +0000 UTCHello patrons. Nothing much to report, just wanted to let you know that I’m working on the next update, and I’ll pass sneak peeks along as they’re ready. One thing I plan to post in the next day or so is more info about Anna’s love history… just some bonus content that didn’t make it into the story at this point.
There’s so much content about the characters, but I’ve been trying to trim it so the story doesn’t become too wordy and boring. This project is way more a novel than a porn game, but I also understand too much detail in the VN can turn readers off. Interested to get your feedback on this.
I want to point out that this next update is more buildup to part 3. Anna has some interesting interactions, but nothing wild happens, so you should measure your expectations. I hate spoiling things, but I’ll just say, her mindset on Friday is more about improving things with David, and keeping her thoughts and emotions in check, especially these lewd thoughts that have suddenly been so prevalent now that Kendra is in her head combined with her hormonal imbalances.
Thank you for your patience, and especially your support!
Comments
I agree that Kendra would seem unlikely, but I could see Kendra doing some S&M stuff to her if she was into that and had oppurtunity, but I don't see it as a possiblility with this story.
thinkinTom
2023-06-28 14:00:26 +0000 UTCI am personally completely ok to read more about Anna's past but I am also not a full novel guy for this project. I understood that the game is more oriented to porn than to literature, correct me if I am wrong. Anyway, I still hardly wait to see the next update. Keep on good work :)
Watcher011
2023-06-14 22:47:13 +0000 UTCOh I think that sly dog Hank has some girl on girl action intended for Anna in his training regiment.
Bringn_Da_Pain
2023-06-12 14:36:45 +0000 UTCJust wondering, will there be any chance of Anna getting a female love interest at any point? Kendra probably wouldn't make sense, but it'd be nice if there was any other girl she could potentially get involved with.
Jenny Mcduckerson
2023-06-12 14:30:54 +0000 UTCPersonally, I'm really enjoying the slow build up. I'm also in agreement with Sun and Bringn here, happy to have additional 'backbround' content posted here. Thanks again Mr Palmer.
BobCratchitt
2023-06-12 11:35:08 +0000 UTCI completely understand streamlining it for general release. I think your past endeavors posting the extended version here have worked well. I would also suggest perhaps making a tab from the main menu to explore some of the extended content if you intend a STEAM release. I think for those of us that love the game, you can never have too much info/ backstory. The other thing that will be interesting to see develop is once Anna becomes aware that Kendra has been sabotaging her, and David if he has been staying faithful is the victim of this. It will also make for a interesting twist if David remains faithful until he finds out Anna is unfaithful, and then begins having his own fun.
Bringn_Da_Pain
2023-06-12 01:32:18 +0000 UTCAlways love about knowing Anna's past. It really makes the character feels real and hot. As for the story being wordy, you can keep on releasing cut content here; if you can't include them in story. N I don't think anyone mind even if you put it in VN because more the content the better. However, it might end up taking your time in creation. So, you can instead just type it out and let us read. It's always fun! Keep up the good work!
Sun Elune
2023-06-11 22:45:59 +0000 UTCI would like to know more about Anna. Will be included the Saturday in this update?
Adolfo
2023-06-11 22:24:07 +0000 UTC
