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It Runs in the Family: Chapter 28

I am sleep deprived and fueled by the Halloween spirit, but I finally got the next chapter done haha. It took a few drafts before it felt right and I think it turned out pretty well in the end. This is the 'climax' for this arc haha, so there'll be a chapter or two to tie up the loose ends that I'll put out as soon as I can, but I'm excited with where the series can go after this. Hope you all enjoy "Dream a Little Dream For Me: Chapter 10"!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5fzzzsup3rh71vn/It%20Runs%20in%20the%20Family%20chapter%2028.pdf?dl=0

As always feel free to comment and discuss below!

Comments

KEEP IT UP~ I absolutely LOVE the blend of cruel & kind you hit. Especially when how they blend into each other, akin to Yin-Yang. The same goes for Fallign for her Tits, which I would LOVE to see finished - I feel like a couple (2-3) more would wrap it up...

V01D

This was a stellar read! Thank you!! This chapter is why I will continue to support you.

CosmonautNo.6

Sammy, this is the best story you have written!! definitely my favorite and I like a LOT of your stories!!! would you accept alternate endings as a commission? Looking forward to my own some time...

John

I was thinking more along the line of maybe Tara brings Nadia to Connie? offers her as a gift to her Mistress? Maybe Nadia is a natural sub too? not cheating if they are both slaves? I think Michelle now realizes her place is on her knees at Connie's feet? Jane should be more obedient now also she seemed to push it not as submissive as she should be.

John

I think I say this after every new chapter is posted: But I missed this family.

Very entertaining. Where is this going? How soon until the next installment? Waiting sucks! Now that the pump has been primed, what will our three slaves feel like after they've woken up? How are the unintentional commands given during the session going to impact them in the real world? Will Connie remember to undo the command to get 10% everything whenever they hear her take a picture.... or will it be more like that "it would make me happy" command? Will this embolden Tara to seek more from Nadia? Will Nadia take to being the dominating mistress Tara didn't know she needed? Is Michelle's desire to be a mistress now a thing of the past, or is there some underlying programming we're not aware of.... but will rear its ugly head in the days to come?

Ferrum1

read it again....it occurred to me, you talked about the conversation tat Connie and Tara had to have BEFORE Tara offered herself to Connie, I can only imagine the conversation they had AFTER all of this....I can almost picture it Connie puts Michelle and Jane to bed then she and Tara have THIS conversation?? I would love to "hear" this one!!! Anyway, any more of this story or more from these girls is eagerly welcome!!!! Thanks for one DAMN good story Sammy!!!!!!!!!! I have NO doubt this commission was WELL received!!

John

Did I mention that I LOVE Connie???????? More of her?????????????

John

If this is how it ends, then you really went out with a BANG!!!! Damn!!

John

Oh WOW!!!!!! God, that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Easily the best chapter yet. But, I was hoping they would be her slaves for real. All three of them fully aware and understanding in the real world choosing to be her slaves. all three her willing, absolute and utter slaves 24 / 7?? I read the last chapter with Connie and Tara several times and will definitely do the same with this one.......Damn, Sammy YOU CAN WRITE!!!!! I can't wait for my own commission. I love Connie...

John

Very impressive! Thank you!

Anonymous Coward

PS I hope you will be taking commissions again soon as with your writing, I can only imagine what you would do with peoples ideas. Thanks again

Tim

That was just about the hottest piece of writing I have ever read! Thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into your writing. That was simply sensational!

Tim

Holy Cow!

Tim


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