Time Loop
Added 2018-07-31 19:46:13 +0000 UTCHere's the first fanfiction story I have to share, based on the video game Life is Strange. You don't need to know about the plot to understand anything, just that Max happens to have the ability to turn time back with her hand, and in my story her girlfriend Chloe has an interest in hypnosis and a desire to see Max become a happy, hypnotized slave. Hope you all enjoy!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ll6h6p9r0kjivzl/Life%20is%20strange%20commission.pdf?dl=0
Comments
Of the three commissions I've purchased so far, this is undoubtedly my favorite for precisely those reasons. You really knocked this one out of the park, Sammy!
Masterdramon
2018-08-02 17:57:55 +0000 UTCI love original ideas and this one rocked!!
John
2018-08-02 16:44:56 +0000 UTCNice job with "Time Loop". I liked the idea of previous versions of Chloe 'making a sacrifice' for their future iterations. Also, the idea that each had to learn anew, albeit, with clues left behind from their previous iterations. Sometimes they figured some details out, sometimes they might not have. Certainly there was a sense of a game--within a game. Nice to see Max's ability to leave a failed timeline behind boomeranged on her.
larqven
2018-08-02 04:25:46 +0000 UTCThis one's also "one of mine," LOL. Sammy intentionally left the ending open for follow up, and I'm not ruling it out yet as a possibility down the line...but for now, I'm inclined to let an ending that perfect stand on its own. :)
Masterdramon
2018-08-02 03:26:27 +0000 UTCwell done, again!! this would make yet another great story. more, please? you really can paint one hell of a believable picture.
John
2018-08-01 19:16:29 +0000 UTC
