It Runs in the Family: Chapter 25
Added 2018-05-30 23:29:23 +0000 UTCOkay, so maybe I do love cliffhangers, I can't help it. Hope you're all ready for "Dream a Little Dream For Me: Part 7", as Connie takes Michelle back into a new dream to try and solve her problem once and for all.
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Comments
You made a grammatical error on page 7 with Jane. She save "You gave me back", when it should me "You give me back". Just wanted to let you know, also LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER.
Zelkova Tatl
2018-06-02 16:44:48 +0000 UTCO K that was much better. i hope this is a glimpse of things to come?! Michelle will make one HELL of a slave!! let's hope Connie has solved the dominant Michelle dilemma, so she can FINALLY enjoy an obedient enslaved Michelle. Cliffhanger with Jane? It is bad enough we have to wait for each chapter, then you add in your twists and turns, now you throw in chapter ending cliffhangers? That's mean, Sammy, really! LOL!!! I I know what I want to happen, but, as you have already proven Sammy , we CAN NOT predict what you will do!! Can't wait for the rest of the story. Yes, Sammy, that means Cliffhangers and all. thanks a lot!! Still love you, though.....
John
2018-06-02 16:37:01 +0000 UTCYou're killing me with these cliffhangers, but what a way to go! Great story!!
billy k.
2018-06-01 01:22:50 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved this update! I like to see this progression of events.
2018-05-31 16:22:29 +0000 UTCThank you for admitting your true self and motivations. It is a beautiful thing.
2018-05-31 06:48:12 +0000 UTCThank you so much :)
Anonymous Coward
2018-05-31 00:34:34 +0000 UTC
