Post-convention update
Added 2017-07-20 00:08:28 +0000 UTCI'm finally back home from the Entranced erotic hypnosis convention, which was great. It took up a couple days of writing time but I'm fired up to get into writing some real mind control smut! I've got both entries in the next update half done, just a small delay on Enslave all Cheerleaders because I rewrote what I had to be more entertaining. I should have both done in 2 or 3 days so I hope you don't mind the short wait.
As for the third update, you guys voted to see a realistic style mind control short story, and I actually have a few ideas for it so I wanted to hear your thoughts.
1) The Girlfriend Fixer: About a lesbian who introduces her girlfriend to a friend of hers that she invited over for dinner, a professional hypnotist who helps couples by hypnotizing them into sharing the same fetishes and fantasies. Of course as the dinner goes on the girlfriend starts to notice she's losing time, and having some strange and compelling new ideas. F/F. The hypnotist won't be involved sexually, and I'm thinking of never actually stating what gender they are, so I can leave it up to the readers imagination.
2) A woman's neighbor begins giving her relaxation tapes, purely as a platonic favor. She's suspicious though and gives them to her audiophile roommate to check out. The roommate instantly finds the subliminal programming to make the listener into a submissive slave, but then she starts to wonder if having her roommate become more submissive would really be such a bad thing. M/F and F/F
3) A wife comes home early to find that her best friend has hypnotized her husband. She watches in secret as her friend tries to brainwash the husband into having an affair, but rather then become angry, she's instead shocked to find how turned on she is by the idea. She chooses not to expose her friend in order to see just how far the brainwashing will go. M/F
Comment below on which ideas seem appealing to you. I plan on writing all three, but whichever seems the most popular I will try to write first for the last update of July. I'm also trying to branch out into writing a little more M/F stuff, so we'll see how that goes
Comments
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nameless
2017-07-30 20:49:13 +0000 UTC#3!!
M
2017-07-22 18:47:45 +0000 UTC#1
Emily Bostic
2017-07-22 06:39:35 +0000 UTC#3!
ColorlessAlien
2017-07-22 05:47:32 +0000 UTCThey all sound really good. I'd definitely choose #1, with #2 as a close second.
boundspyral
2017-07-21 23:43:08 +0000 UTC#1
Brodric
2017-07-21 14:56:04 +0000 UTC#3
2017-07-21 00:29:08 +0000 UTCI'm glad that everybody had fun with this one! It looks like number 2 has a pretty big lead, with number 3 coming up in second. As I said I plan to write them all eventually, so you'll see these stories show up soon. The main thing I noticed was that a lot of people would prefer a F/F version of the story. As I had it planned there was plenty of lesbian fun, as always, but the ending would go more M/F. Perhaps I can write a second version of the ending, one that would end the same way but not involve any sex between the neighbor and the two women. Would people be interested in seeing a lesbian only version to that story that I can post with it?
Sammynona
2017-07-20 20:35:07 +0000 UTC#2
Robert Chervanik
2017-07-20 19:04:01 +0000 UTC#3
John Cusack
2017-07-20 17:58:18 +0000 UTC#2 f/f
2017-07-20 17:33:47 +0000 UTCDon't worry, my love will always be for lesbians. I just want to try writing occasional stories with M/F just so I can get better at it. A majority of my stuff will stay all ladies
Sammynona
2017-07-20 14:51:03 +0000 UTC#2 but with a focus on the F/F interaction.
2017-07-20 13:35:22 +0000 UTC2
2017-07-20 11:23:43 +0000 UTC2 with 1 a close second and, of course.. f/f emphasis
Abby Gail
2017-07-20 10:50:11 +0000 UTCOh please not constant M/F-stuff... I am having so much fun reading your stories because of the usual lack of males in it. I remember parts like in Succubus Cheat Sheet where I skimmed over that part until it was finally over and I could continue reading ^^;
Sheenariel
2017-07-20 09:20:06 +0000 UTC#2 followed by #1
Avery Lopez
2017-07-20 07:11:26 +0000 UTC#1, followed by #2.
Devi Lacroix
2017-07-20 05:31:24 +0000 UTCNumber three sounds most appealing to me, with #2 next.
Gornyetch
2017-07-20 05:02:42 +0000 UTCAbsolutely love the sound of #3
Kallie
2017-07-20 05:02:00 +0000 UTCJukebox has everything: <a href="http://mcstories.com/VoyeurJukebox/index.html" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://mcstories.com/VoyeurJukebox/index.html</a>
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2017-07-20 04:18:29 +0000 UTC#3, followed by #1. Ideally the wife should confront the friend at some point, though. I always love that sort of conversation in stories. ;)
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2017-07-20 04:17:35 +0000 UTC#2 has my vote, followed closely by #1. Thanks for the opportunity to give a bit of extra input!
Masterdramon
2017-07-20 03:28:02 +0000 UTCAwesomeness
Kravenar Games
2017-07-20 02:22:54 +0000 UTC#2
Nexus
2017-07-20 02:21:40 +0000 UTCI like #2
E
2017-07-20 01:50:51 +0000 UTCHey there. Glad to hear you had a good time. Ideas 1 and 2 probably hit more of my kinks, but I like the idea of the protagonist from the 3rd becoming an mc voyeur. I don't know how much we've seen of that sort of take on a mind control story. I'm interested in seeing how it would go.
Dorian Alton
2017-07-20 01:17:12 +0000 UTCim a fan of missing time and new ideas "popping up out of nowhere" 1 most, but 2 could be good
2017-07-20 01:08:20 +0000 UTCI vote for 3. It would be fun to see you write M/F and I'm sure the wife will get in on the action. Lot of possibilities there.
Feehan1999
2017-07-20 00:50:31 +0000 UTChm, going with 2 here. Not a fan of M/F at all, but the story sounds better than suggestion #1 and #3 is right out.
Dyamonde
2017-07-20 00:48:37 +0000 UTC
