5/31/2017: EAC Chapter 6
Added 2017-05-31 22:21:22 +0000 UTCThe great chase continues, with the stakes only rising for the trapped girls. Will anyone escape? Is everyone doomed to become a brainwashed slave? And how many damn rooms did Ashley's dad build into the mansion anyway? It's almost like the hack writing this story is just making up the mansion as they go :P
So enjoy the latest chapter and as always feel free to comment and discuss below!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/sjq7vlz8rpvvypo/EC%20chapter%206.pdf?dl=0
Comments
Thanks for the link and the pics!
larqven
2017-06-26 12:09:23 +0000 UTCHey everybody! There's now an album for the commissioned illustrations I've been getting for each chapter of the story. It can be found here: <a href="http://kaywest.deviantart.com/gallery/63360361/COLLEGE-SEDUCTION-SERIES" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://kaywest.deviantart.com/gallery/63360361/COLLEGE-SEDUCTION-SERIES</a> Obviously it's not going to match up perfectly with the scenes depicted, since there's going to be variation between the picture in my head, the picture in Sammy's, and the artist. But I like the comic book style artwork and it's a rate that will let me get every chapter illustrated and get a cover page done. :) Hope you enjoy!
ParagonRocky
2017-06-22 02:08:05 +0000 UTCCheerleaders tend to be pretty fit, since their whole deal is athletic performances. Big doesn't always mean slow, and small doesn't always mean weak. Emma was the tallest and probably strongest of the squad, but Jade seems an adept rock climber from what we saw here, so she's probably the last formidable physical threat to Amber, assuming Rebecca can't shake off her mental block. Jade's rationalization makes sense when we remember that she pretty much had the same deal with Ashley back when she was running things. Ashley was a bully as a leader, just without actual superpowers. Jade and the others stayed on her good side and got to reap the rewards that came with popularity. I can only imagine serving as a Goddess' right hand woman would come with great perks, assuming you could retain some of your own individuality. Emma seems to have convinced her this isn't the case. I doubt Emma is trapped for very long. Someone will probably go fetch her, sweep up the glass. Ashley's likely keeping track of everyone from that control room to facilitate Amber's plan, so Ginger's probably headed down to the pool with a broom, maybe some flip flops. :P Amber's overconfidence is in character, and apparently not unreasonable, since she still came out of a 3-on-1 victorious. Brute force isn't going to win the day if she can employ her powers with such versatility. Rebecca wasn't being directly entranced with Amber's rack on her head, but the lingering effect of physical contact was enough to keep her immobile. Maria's not likely to be a plant, since she hadn't ever met Amber prior to the start of the story. If she had, she'd have known who Rebecca was and wouldn't have required prompting by Ashley earlier. With Jade also confirmed to be free, it looks like the only person Amber entranced before the game started was Ashley. Granted, it looks like she didn't need the extra help, and she certainly seems to be enjoying herself. It's possible Amber's energy is sapped by prolonged or rapid use of her power, which would explain your observation that Amber took her time weakening Heather through the boob-on-boob battle of wills. Either way, the remaining free girls don't have the numbers to try a head-on assault again, so they'll have to outsmart Amber to have a chance. Thankfully they've all displayed a degree of cleverness, so if anyone's got a chance, it's them. My biggest question is: If anyone does manage to escape, what would they even say?
ParagonRocky
2017-06-02 23:21:07 +0000 UTCThe battle between Jade and Emma was interesting. Jade really is the Wild Card in the scenario; I had thought of Emma as the biggest, strongest, and possibly most badass of the cheerleaders, the slave to fear, but Jade took her in stride. We knew Jade is athletic, but she's clearly not the Asian stereotype of the petite sylph to be able to throw Emma around. It was smart of Emma to sneak up on Jade, but not smart to try and talk to her. It made sense in that Jade was actually wondering about just giving up so easily for hopeful special favors?! Recovering herself and breaking free after the fact? Truly, she is a chance taking wild card. But seeing Emma as fully obedient, not likely to break free any time soon, if ever; Jade changed her mind. Emma learned the problems of not wearing shoes and facing broken glass! At least her enslaved state didn't compel her to walk on the glass. Of course, she figured that she might climb or leap over the wall, perhaps figuring her greater height might make it easier? Not so easy after all, so, she's trapped for a time, the more fearsome seeming slave neutralized for awhile. Although, a funny way of ending the scene with some tension might have been if Jade was crowing about her being trapped, Emma might have just gone in back deeper into the alcove, opened a maintenance door and pulled out a broom, wagging her finger at Jade! LoL Again, Amber took huge risks. I'm rather wondering if she might be playing to lose? At least she took some major risks, and I think that she herself might have found that she bit off more than she could easily chew. The mass rush nearly worked. If Maria would have attacked from the beginning, it would have, as Heather proved to be quite capable athletically in getting up to Amber. The breast power got a real workout, but did prove up to the task given someone who knows how to use it. While it won't entrance instantly, it will freeze a subject instantly, the effects of even a short exposure wear off a lot slower than it takes effect, hence, even faced with the Achilles' Heel of the 'one subject at a time' rule, and two opponents at 180 degrees--and an incoming third at 90 degrees--she still pulled off a win. Perhaps most interestingly, the breast power is now proven to work via touch as well, tactile stimulation will also entrance; so fighting without sight isn't going to necessarily overcome them either. It might even be that touching Amber's breasts directly has an effect independently of whom Amber is focusing her power on? It did seem that Amber was using her power on both Rebecca and Heather for a time in the battle, with her breasts 'crushing' Rebecca by sitting on her head? If there is always some breast power 'trickle' going on via touch, again, applying it to the other story, there is little wonder that Cathy folded after her triumph by playing around with Amy's breasts for an hour. Of course, such questions also have the issue of the effects of previous and multiple exposures to the breast power, which seem to instill feelings of awe and submissiveness even without verbal instruction. Well, for one of these two reasons, or perhaps both, Rebecca failed to overcome the lingering effects of the power. Frankly, I had wondered if Amber had zapped Maria early on and if Maria was a mole. It would seem not, albeit, a previous exposure might explain why Maria ran away so easily. Again, though, Rebecca ultimately choked as well, with the obnoxious Heather who became the hero who fought in vain, a situation with some irony. Because, surely, if Rebecca had enough strength to propel her body across the dance floor, she had enough strength to topple Amber. There will never be another chance like this again. Or, will there be? Jade might be more capable than even the arrogant Heather? Heather seemed to believe that the breast power worked via 'the power of positive thinking'. If nothing else, she did rattle Amber a great deal, and she and Rebecca should have been successful from Amber losing her composure. But Rebecca was all but beaten by that time, and while she might be the principal protagonist, she's now bound to be suspect and compromised in any future engagements. But, pushed severely like this, it would appear that the breast power has its limitations. Apparently it cannot be used all day long, either because she was rattled or her power was running out of--power, or both, Amber seemed to struggle against Heather for an inordinate amount of time. Possibly because the two were comically pushing their breasts together and glaring at each other rather than Heather looking at Amber's breasts, so as only getting the power through tactile stimulation? Well, Jade is a badass, but Amber now has Heather, plus, after this encounter, I'm not so sure that Amber will be so brazen to face off against multiple girls again without backup. She should have lost by all rights, especially after letting Heather goad her. But the girls are now split up again, and Jade might be the one most likely to defeat Amber as neither Rebecca or Maria can be trusted to go the distance in a repeat of the three-in-one scenario. A tall order, as the missing enslaved girls are either in the control room or looking for the remaining three.
larqven
2017-06-02 18:18:58 +0000 UTCHearst Mansion in Beverly Hills has its own nightclub, and other crazy mansions have had amenities like indoor skating rinks, $250,000 hot tubs, 20 car garages, all kinds of nonsense. You'd have to go a long way to strain credibility. 😂 I like the pacing of this chapter. Quiet Drama Scene, Tense Action Scene. It makes sense Jade would go for an area she knows because she's been here before as a member of Ashley's cheer squad. Now that Heather's taken too, she's the last survivor with that advantage. She's also got a wild streak in her from that talk with Emma, and was clever enough to use the broken glass to slow Emma down. She's a badass. Speaking of badass, look at the guts on Amber taking 3-on-1 odds in the nightclub! She didn't even have any slaves to back her up. We don't know where Ginger and Ashley are, though. Maybe one of them was off in a booth running the lights and music for Amber. I picture Ginger working a light board and DJ turntable for some reason. 😅 It looks like Amber's confidence was well founded though. She knew she had to break up the group, so she took them head-on. Breaking Maria's will to make her flee was a total predator move, and even as she's thinking it's not the most tactical move, it still works in her favor. She also has enough proficiency with her powers to switch between targets quickly, and apply her power in unique ways, like forcing Rebecca to get a handful to weaken her. Heather's decision to go tete-a-tete (hah, puns!) was intriguing. The way I see it, she was doing one of two things. One, she was playing into Amber's vanity and ego to get her undivided attention and sacrifice herself to let Rebecca escape. Two, she legitimately thought she could out-thrall Amber as if it was purely a battle of will rather than having actual superpowers. Whichever it was, it was satisfying to see Amber literally back Heather against the wall and drain her will through her own chest. I had a lot to say this time! Excited to see who's in the crosshairs next, and where everyone else is while this is going on. Great work, Sammy!
ParagonRocky
2017-06-02 04:31:13 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as ever. Just wanted to make sure you hadnt posted a double chapter I may have missed.
Tim
2017-06-01 22:28:51 +0000 UTCYup, I totally put the wrong chapter title up. Fixed now, thanks Tim :)
Sammynona
2017-06-01 15:35:00 +0000 UTCIt's 6
ParagonRocky
2017-06-01 13:21:12 +0000 UTCJust wanted to doublecheck the chapter as dropbox is saying Chapter 6
Tim
2017-06-01 04:36:11 +0000 UTCHi there,
Tim
2017-06-01 04:35:50 +0000 UTC
