3/8/2017: EAC Chapter 3
Added 2017-03-09 04:48:52 +0000 UTCThe next chapter of the series has all the girls converging at Ashley's house for the party, with one very unexpected guest. The fun is about to begin as Amber plans to get her revenge on the cheer squad.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/bc1d8whiezi5298/EC%20chapter%203.pdf?dl=0
Comments
Anyone who gains mind control powers would very quickly realize that they are most valuable when essentially no one else knows about them. There is likely to be a balance between the foibles of a figurative lottery ticket winner, and to keep the secret and act judiciously. A fancy car impresses people, but attracting attention is not recommended. Driving a Honda makes sense as a reliable car that any college kid might be expected to have, but is the same true for becoming a cheerleader? Of course, being a cheerleader gives an excuse for hanging with a lesbian harem that is hidden in plain sight.
larqven
2017-03-10 02:36:39 +0000 UTCI didn't think about the car, that's some good attention to detail Larqven. π I can think of two explanations: One, she was in such a rush to get to the mansion that she used any car she could find, maybe Latrice loaned it. Two, it was a gift from her parents and has sentimental value. I imagine she probably wouldn't be able to get herself a Porsche without some complications.
ParagonRocky
2017-03-10 01:17:15 +0000 UTCAmber looks like she might need to enslave a good personal assistant too. One thing I found interesting was her small Honda. Having powers does not yet extend to getting the best of everything, at least not yet. It makes me wonder if Amber was restrained at home, or otherwise isn't so foolish as to make her power and manipulations obvious? She shows the power of GPS--the wonders and the blunders of the tech. It's a bit of a metaphor for her power; she seems more a pro at using it than Amy in the other story, but Amber is quite the risk taker here.
larqven
2017-03-09 22:00:27 +0000 UTCGreat job with the multiple mis-directions. Jade drives--terribly well. It was humorous how the other girls were afraid to ride in her car!
larqven
2017-03-09 21:53:11 +0000 UTCBuilding that suspense. π Love it!
ParagonRocky
2017-03-09 05:04:43 +0000 UTC
