Snippet - A Systematic Tale: The Pirate Ch 4
Added 2026-01-28 05:14:04 +0000 UTCComments
…Black Pearl is scary. And I love it! William is genuinely going to have to learn how to fight because instinct can only get you so far.
The Foreign Traveler
2026-02-02 10:50:42 +0000 UTCHave to say this has taken the place as my favorite of your stories. I do like that it’s not retreading old ground and focusing on the characters.
Max Vos
2026-01-30 15:36:53 +0000 UTCMust have more, so hard to find good one piece fics and this one is great!
Jimmy
2026-01-30 01:08:26 +0000 UTCi just want like 300 chapters of this fic. i am not asking that much.
Meruem Astro
2026-01-29 23:41:53 +0000 UTCLove the good Yandere ship spirit. Crocodile is screwed even if Lucy couldn't generate rain, all William and Lucy would have to do is distract him long enough for Nami to get him with her Seastone Staff, cuz Crocodile is exactly the type of person to underestimate people and think himself invincible for that to work. Hope William and Lucy start training Haki soon cuz any decent One Piece fan at least knows how to train Observation and Armament and that would give them a huge leg up especially if Williams remembers how to train the 6 styles as well
Andrew Stewart
2026-01-29 14:58:07 +0000 UTCI'm not sure whether I feel relieved or disappointed that The Pearl's spirit doesn't look like eldritch Keira Knightley Also, wow, I haven't heard the cat in a room full of rocking chairs metaphor since ep 1 of the 90's X-Men cartoon.
Artemis
2026-01-29 14:36:33 +0000 UTCIt's so good. I'm waiting only for this, fox hole and black witch now
Jonatan Byrdziak
2026-01-28 16:29:49 +0000 UTCGreat chapter loving this fic way better than a lot of one piece fics out their, hope you do an interlude of zorro, sanji and little weasels usopps reactions to crews antics, also kaya pissed off at usopp for stealing merry from crew
Jamie Celtic
2026-01-28 14:56:18 +0000 UTCI love this story, and would rate this as one of the top three of your stories. And it's only chapter 4, which means it will get even better. Some of my questions have been answered, but still have many more. Like what's William's next reward? And is Miss Valentines joining them as well? Will Robin join them early? And Pearl, if she eats a Bunker Call ship, would she gets huge cannons? I NEED MORE ONE PEICE!!!
DragoulM
2026-01-28 14:52:08 +0000 UTCThis is my new favorite
Humphry(The Heretic)
2026-01-28 13:43:19 +0000 UTCYandere ship spirit kinda goes hard
Amazing-Albatross
2026-01-28 10:14:03 +0000 UTCThat would defeat her purpose, unless something like her keel cracking (as happened with merry) happens, then eating a fruit would just leave her unable to sail upon the waves.
willowskeith
2026-01-28 10:11:29 +0000 UTCBest ship shall become bestest ship!
Oopsibwokeit
2026-01-28 08:29:17 +0000 UTCLoved this chapter, hoping for more. Loved pearl in this, wonder what robin will do, also crocodile is screwed. Keep up the good work
Nicholas
2026-01-28 08:04:54 +0000 UTCGod Damn!
xerxes33311
2026-01-28 07:00:54 +0000 UTCPearl is badass, hopefully she gets a devil fruit before long, maybe Moria's? Getting his control over shadows and the dead would suit it quite well, though it could probably do with a fruit that can fly too, like the artificial dragon fruit, it would give the ship a form to turn into to access land as well as the ability to create and fly on clouds which would be op af, though pretty much any Zoan or Mythical Zoan with wings would allow for similar. Thanks for the chapter.
Ototsu_Yume
2026-01-28 06:22:24 +0000 UTC
