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SakiTomo 7

The Junior High girls are now very fit due to their robust diving routines :-)

SakiTomo 7

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First of all, happy belated birthday to Savaster. I don’t think there was a birthday post this year, but I remember because it’s just a few weeks ahead of mine (which is today, coincidentally). But now to get serious. I’m going to be polite but firm. I believe I know where you’re going with this, and it’s something that I don’t want. It looks like you’re going to reintroduce Tomokazu to all the other divers, and I can guess he’s going to be dressed as a girl. I think that would be a mistake. I WANT Tomo involved, I WANT him to dive with his sister, but not if he’s dressed as something he’s not. I remember how happy I was when he originally appeared in his swim shorts. That “One Minute to Go!” post is unironically one of my favorite posts on this channel EVER. It’s because of the drawing talent on display, showing that you can make a male body in a swimsuit as appealing as a female form. But one of my only real issues with the story thus far is the fact that we haven’t had a male character be shown to have any capability underwater at all, and I thought we were finally addressing that, with the best option we had! Now I’m concerned that the only representation we had is going to be taken away after just a couple images. I have incredible respect for you as a creator, savaster. It’s why I’ve stuck around for as long as I have and tried to be the resident scientist of the comments, often picking apart meanings and inferences, trying to reason out the logical extremes of the talent on display by the girls. I WANT that to continue, but my enjoyment of the series will continue to be hampered by a lack of male representation. I’m not asking for Tomokazu to be the best, or even on par with the core three. I understand that what most people are here for is the girls. I was too, originally! But I believe now is the time to add a male diver to the ever expanding cast. I am asking for him to have involvement as he is, not as yet another girl to add to the pile. If the plan here is to have him dive as a girl once and then they realize how dangerous it is, and then he dives as a boy from now on, then by all means, continue. But please, do me a favor and don’t cover him in a girls suit. We have quite enough of those going on this dive already. Please understand I am not trying to critique your artistic vision. I am simply trying to lay down exactly what my earnest desire for this series going forward is. Thank you.

Titan1017

Oh, Saori is already taking deep breaths for the dive. I'm more curious about how far she's progressed in training with Saki these days.

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