TG SHORT STORIES #1 pg.6
Added 2024-06-10 23:18:39 +0000 UTCThe end of this first story!
First page of the next in a few days ^^
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Heyy thank you ! I'm very glad you are happy with my contents ☺️❤️ For your question, I must admit that the way it is shown here is a dumb mistake I made because the girl just got body swapped with the peeper. But I don't want to show or do anything too violent in any case. In this comic, I had this ending in mind, but not in such a harsh way at first. It was just like “It's a body swap, so the girl in the peeper's body just got kicked out of her house because the boyfriend thinks she's the real peeper.” Kind of dark but it's alright As the action isn't in the final scene, the lazy option was to add onomatopoeia at the end and my mistake was not thinking any longer about how I should write them, so I just added them and the most obvious one in mind was just “punch” “ouch” etc.... Like a cartoon I should have done something much softer, actually. Because if a reader take the big picture like you did, it's a beating and in a way I really don't want to do. And now that you've told me, this page made me uncomfortable, sorry for the long explanation xD Many thanks for your comment as I'll try to avoid this kind of very silly mistake in future. 🙏 I'll change that immediatly on that page
LesslieTG
2024-12-22 17:24:28 +0000 UTCGlad I signed up to your patreon after finding you on DA. These pay comics are fantastic. I'm hung up on this one though. Is he...beating up his own girlfriend right now? If the stalker's consciousness is transfered to her, but the stalkers body outside is still awake, does that mean it's a swap kind of deal?
EngineHouse
2024-12-22 14:23:15 +0000 UTC
