Going to start just doing commission in all caps on VIP comics because it seems people get confused on what the VIP means.
This is a 4 page extension to the original version of this comic, including an entire second transformation on the commissioner's OC character. The first 4 pages have also been re-shaded for a more comic-book style.
For those of you reading this comic for the first time the story is a bit complex at first glance.
Essentially, Norman Osborne has found/developed reality altering rings that change the wearer to fit the deseries of the person who put it on them. Norman stages a very risky and elaborate plan to get it onto Spider-Man's finger altering him into ruthless businesswoman and Norman's second wife, Maria Osborne.
The new pages have a bit of an epilogue for Maria first showing her new ruthless no-nonsense personality.
Then we see an original hacker character who's arrived to let the Osbornes know they're about to be exposed as criminals, only for a second ring to turn him into Maria's loyal apprentice.
And again if you're wondering why the 'Miles Original' outfit everyone hated from Spider-Man 2, the commissioner specifically requested it because they hated it and 'wanted to see it destroyed for something better'
Just a reminder to readers, with commissions I do my best to follow the buyer's desires and preferences. For that reason they may feel different to our usual content.