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Part 2B - Jock-suited Girl (Tg) Bad Ending Draft

In the bar, the goddess sat at the table she had occupied earlier, her notebook open in front of her. She sipped her glowing drink with a small, satisfied smile. With a flick of her wrist, she added one final line to the page.

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You can enter your mecha armor anytime no one is looking at you. When talking to someone you have never talked to before, you will always mention that you are a busty girl inside of a convincing human mech suit. And if someone tells you to get out of the suit, you cannot resist and must immediately step out, no matter the situation.

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The words glowed on the page before fading, their power seeping into reality. The goddess closed the notebook with a soft snap and rose from her seat. With a glance toward the bathroom door, where she could hear the faint sound of the suit powering up, she smiled knowingly.

“She’ll figure it out soon enough,” the goddess murmured. And with that, she vanished, leaving no trace of her presence.

Inside the suit, the girl felt a surge of relief as the systems fully powered up. She clenched her hands into fists, flexing the suit’s fingers, and let out a deep, confident chuckle in Brad’s voice. “Alright,” she said to herself, her old bravado returning, “back to normal.”

She strode out of the bathroom, towering over the bar patrons once more. Heads turned as the familiar figure of Brad emerged, his confident swagger back in full force. For a brief moment, it seemed like she had regained control of the situation.

But then a man near the bar, someone she didn’t recognize, called out to her. “Hey, Brad! Did you see that just now? There was a small hottie in cosplay bouncing around. It was a sight to behold. I think she did something to impersonate you.”

She sighed in her fake brad voice. People were going to talk about this for years to come, won’t they?

“Yeah? Good to know that there is an imposter running about. Though I can assure you that I am the real deal.” She declared, sighing again, before something unexpected happened. She had already said what she wanted to say, yet her lips parted again, and before she could stop herself, the words tumbled out in her deep, commanding voice. “I’m the one and only Brad, your average everyday busty girl inside a convincing human mech suit.”

The entire bar went silent for a moment before erupting into laughter once again.

“What?!” the man said, his eyes wide with shock. “Did you just say—?”

Her face burned beneath the armor, but she couldn’t stop. It was as if the words were ripped from her against her will. “Yes. I’m a busty girl piloting this suit. The suit makes me look like… well, this. I'm still the real Brad though, not an imposter!”

The man blinked, and then a wicked grin spread across his face. “Oh yeah? Prove it. Get out of the suit.”

Her heart sank. Every fiber of her being screamed to stay inside, to keep up the illusion. But the compulsion hit her like a tidal wave, and her hands moved on their own. “N-No, wait!” she stammered in her old voice, but it was too late. The suit powered down, the seams splitting with a loud hiss, and once again, the imposing figure of Brad peeled away to reveal the petite, curvy girl inside.

She stood there, trembling, her skintight pilot suit leaving nothing to the imagination. The laughter reached a fever pitch as the crowd pointed and jeered.

“Holy crap, she wasn’t kidding!” someone shouted.

“She’s so tiny!” another added, barely able to contain their amusement.

The man who had told her to step out leaned forward, his smirk widening. “Well, that’s… interesting,” he said, eyeing her up and down. “You the little girl Brad turned into, huh?”

Her lips quivered as she tried to respond, but her shyness overwhelmed her. She could barely meet his gaze, let alone speak. “I-I… um… uh…” she stammered, her cheeks glowing red as the words refused to form.

The crowd roared with laughter again, and the girl hugged herself tightly, desperate to escape. But she couldn’t re-enter the suit while they were watching her, and she knew it. She was trapped, exposed, and utterly humiliated.

Somewhere far away, the goddess smiled to herself, her work complete. "That should teach her a lesson in humility," she mused, vanishing into the night, leaving the girl to navigate her new, embarrassing reality—forever bound by the goddess’s final words.


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