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MACRO GROWTH SUPER CHARGE - Pag 24

 

Commission for and written by http://www.furaffinity.net/user/whitestar2020

Main Characters:

Redsaber by https://www.furaffinity.net/user/redsaber

Whitestar by  http://www.furaffinity.net/user/whitestar2020 

Vicktoriya Reznikov by http://www.furaffinity.net/user/alphavragg735/ 

This page cameos:

Pinksaber aka The President by  https://www.furaffinity.net/user/xxkwakkiexx 

Isabelle by  https://www.furaffinity.net/user/thorn105 

Alex by  https://www.furaffinity.net/user/alextheraptor 

Credits and copyright of the artwork owned by me (http://manthomex.deviantart.com/;http://www.furaffinity.net/user/manthomex/

MACRO GROWTH SUPER CHARGE - Pag 24

Comments

The hand... well... the wing of doom!!

Manthomex

Oh no!

Gwahar

Well. this page have it's own story. Kwakkie/Pinksaber as the President was not in the first draft of the script, if i remind well. Once we have included her evrything about "dropping the bomb" thing changed in the emotional area of the story. Kwakkie dosen't want to show her character too loveless, and ask that someone else would push the botton. So Star send me a script where she just said that "a general from the background" would have push the botton instead of the President. The Vulture character is all my stuff. Once we have to choose someone to be cold and direct to the point i choose those classic look from the WWII cartoons, where the evil military are usually vultures or crows. So, the entire thing about making the "unnamed genaral" an evil cartoon vulture is completely an idea of mine, after the script change i've recieved. I've thought that dropping a bomb must be seen as a cruel thing, after all, or at least something that will bring death. And so the use of a over-stereotypical character.

Manthomex

I'm of two minds concerning this. On the one hand, the emotional stress is clear when it's family. But on the other, it's not only egregiously poor form to place personal concerns above those of a Country you lead, but almost certainly Illegal. On top of that, it makes clear that you're not fit to lead from where I stand. And you're being painfully blatant with that Vulture being "wrong" to push the button, with the thin frame, high shoulders, thinning hairline, Monocle-of-Evil, and the way he generally carries himself. No subtlety whatsoever with who you're supposed to Root for...

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