表紙案ラフ・今朝の調整分

皆さまいつも応援ありがとうございます！🙏✨✨✨

Thank you all for your support!🙏✨✨✨

今回は昨日出した表紙案に対して、いくつか調整指示来た分を新たに描いたのでご紹介します。　昨日の午後10時過ぎにメールが来て「むむむ…」ってなりかけましたが愚痴はよろしくないのでここまで。😅

This time, I'd like to introduce the new cover I drew for the one I submitted yesterday, for which I received some adjustment instructions.　I received an e-mail yesterday after 10:00 p.m., and I was about to say "Mmmm...", but complaining is not good, so I'll stop here.😅

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今回直した絵は昨日の番号で言うと１、２、３、６番…　そしてペア構図の10番となります。

The pictures I fixed this time are #1, #2, #3, #6... and the paired composition, #10, according to yesterday's numbers.

まずは全般的な調整指示の内容です。

First of all, here are the revisions that were instructed in general.

〇恥ずかしがる顔にしてほしい。

（まぁそうですね、初稿は表情が曖昧過ぎたと自分でも思いました。）😃

〇I want you to fix her expression to a look of embarrassment.

(Well, yes, I did. I thought to myself that the expression was too vague in the first draft.)😃

1番、2番についての調整指示

〇足を映るようにしてほしい。

（膝上で足が見切れて画面外に出てしまっていたのが良くなかったのかもしれません。）

Adjusting instructions about #1 & #2

I'd like you to make sure that you can see her legs.

(It may not have been good that her legs were out of view above her knees and out of the screen.　

そこで、

１は恥ずかしがりつつほら…って感じで見せてる風に描きなおしてみました。

２は見せてみたけどやっぱりちょっと恥ずかしい…で内また気味で手で隠そう、

　みたいな感じで恥じらってる雰囲気にしてみました。😉

So.

I redrew the first one as if she was showing it to me in a shy way.

In the second one, she tried to show it to me, but she was still a little embarrassed.

　I tried to draw her in an embarrassed mood.😉

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※下図グレー表示は前回の投稿で紹介した9月6日月曜日提出分表紙案です。比較対象として貼ってみました。

The grayed-out image below is the proposed cover for the Monday, September 6 submission that I introduced in my last post. I have attached it as a comparison.

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３番についての調整指示

〇顔を背けてほしい。足に変化が欲しい。

（正面から股間全開でドヤってたのが恥ずかしさが少ないように感じられたようです。まぁたしかに…）

Adjustment instructions for #3

I want you to draw her with her face turned away from me. I would like to see a change in the direction of her feet.

(It seems that she felt less embarrassed because she was standing in front of me with her crotch fully open and smug. Well, that's true...)

こちらも恥じらいながらのしぐさに描きなおしています。そうなると服は結構残した方がこれはいいかなと思ってチラ見せ系に…。😋

I also redrew her facial expressions and other gestures of embarrassment. In this case, I thought it would be better to draw her as if she were wearing some clothes, so I used a glimpse of her...😋

６番についての調整指示

〇画面を引いてもう少し頭の見切れを減らし足が見えるようにしてほしい。

〇男の子の下半身を触ってるようなポーズに。（小道具としてのペア構図はOKのようです）

Adjustment instructions for #6

I'd like you to pull back the screen and redraw her so that we can see her legs a little less of her head.

I want her to pose as if she is touching the boy's lower body. (A pair composition as a prop seems to be OK.)

指示では男の子の下半身を描くだけを提案されていたのですが、かわいいショタをただの竿役とかそういうに使うの嫌いなのでいちゃラブインピオ描いているので少し…反抗しましたｗ🤔

The instructions suggested just drawing the lower half of the boy's body, but I don't like using cute shota as just a pole or anything like that, so I drew a flirting love impio, so I was a little... defiant.🤔

がんばって逢島くんが小道具的に見えなくもないけどちゃんと主張できてそうなくらい画面に入れてみました。結構インピオっぽくてかわいいのでお気に入りです。

（もしかすると採用されない率上げちゃったかもしれませんが悔いはないですｗ）😆

I tried my best to put Aushima-kun on the screen in such a way that he doesn't look like a prop, but is still able to make a point. It's my favorite because it looks pretty cute and "inpio".

(I may have raised the percentage of pictures that don't get adopted, but I don't regret it.₎😆

10番に関しては構図が良いので捨てがたかったようでこちらも審議にかけてみるとのことでした。採用率は低いかもしれませんが、個人的にお気に入りのロリのショタ捕食感ある構図なので採用率少し上がるように目線をこっちに向けたの描いておきました。（あまり好きじゃないんですけどねカメラ目線）📸

The editorial department had a hard time deciding on No. 10 because of its good composition, so they decided to discuss it as well. The adoption rate may be low, but it's one of my personal favorite compositions with a predatory Lolita Shota look, so I drew it with the eyes turned toward me to increase the adoption rate a little. (I don't really like the camera look, though.)📸

ボクはカメラ目線というのがあざとさがあってあまり好きじゃないんですが、あざとい以外にもこだわりというか理由がありまして…。🤔

I don't really like the camera-eye-viewing composition of the characters in my pictures, but there's another reason why I'm so particular about it...🤔

まず、これはボクの作品傾向だからなだけで他の作者さんのインピオ作品では違いますのでお間違えなく。😃

First of all, please be aware that this is only because of my own tendency, and not because of other authors' "inpio" works.😃

ボクの描くインピオ作品ではの構図についてはできれば守りたいことがあって、

In my work, there is one thing that I would like to keep in mind when it comes to composition.

お互いラブラブなのでカメラなんか見ずに相手見てるにきまってるだろ！😎

They're so in love with each other, they're not even looking at the camera, they're just looking at each other!😎

というものです。

It's called

一般的にこっち見てる方が売れるのだとしても自然にこっちを見てるのでなければ抵抗感がボクにはあるので、今回の10番はこれは手前にあるスマホでタイマー撮影してるからと自分を騙して描いてました。😊

Even if a composition from the perspective of looking at me generally sells, I think it is unnatural unless they are naturally looking at me. In image #10, I assumed the phone in the foreground was in the background and tricked myself into thinking they were looking at me because they were taking a timer shot, and I drew that composition.😊

好きなものを好きに描いてお金をもらえるのがベストなので個人的には6番か10番が採用されないかなーって思ってますが果たしてどうなりますやら…。そしてまた違う構図が爆誕するのかドキドキの1日になりそうです。😆

The best way to get paid is to draw whatever you want, so I'm personally hoping that #6 or #10 will be adopted, but I'm not sure what will happen... But I'm not sure how it will turn out... And it's going to be a very exciting day to see if another composition will be born.😆

結局は自分の作品集なので手を抜かず仕上げていきたいですね。さぼった分は全部自分に返ってきてしまいますし…🙂

It's my own work after all, so I want to finish it without cutting corners. All the slacking will come back to you, and...🙂

ではまた次の更新をお楽しみにですー。😉

See you next update.😉