DD 203 Ch 33 - END
Added 2024-10-12 06:00:05 +0000 UTCChapter 33
The Orkai and the other angel moved quickly ahead of us. The way he casually strolled, moving at what would be a dead sprint for me, told me enough about his high level.
Instead, I turned to the angel who spoke English and seemed to be our guide for the moment.
"I'm sorry, I never got your name.” I paused, waiting.
“My name is..." What she then said started with an 'L U' sound, followed by a trill and several sounds I did not have a comparison for, before ending in another 'L U' sound.
I chuckled. "Would you be offended if I called you Lulu?"
"Not at all. That's a lovely name," she said, emphasizing the statement with a spin midair. She looked so free with how she bobbed and wove just beside me as I walked along the bridge. She was off the edge, seeming more comfortable there.
"Well, Lulu, if this is Star City, do you mind if I ask how it was made?" After all, it seemed to be built into what was two safe zones and five dungeon floors.
"Not at all. That's common knowledge," she said. "There was a great warlord of the Orkai. It's said he was over level 100 when he cleaved through the dungeon floor and created a city amidst the hole he had created." She gestured to the city in front of us. "He then went on to explore the depths of the dungeon and left it behind for his people as a place of respite and an attempt to tame the savage dungeon for civilization." She gestured at the city.
"That's quite the story.” The idea of one of these Orkai being level 100 was honestly more terrifying than the idea of him cleaving through the floor of the dungeon and building the city. “What happened to the warlord?"
She shrugged. "Who knows? Maybe he went further down in the dungeon and made another city, or maybe he died." She said the second statement as if it was of no consequence, though I would think a hero like that to anyone would be rather important.
"Haven't people gone looking for him?" I asked.
"Oh, of course. But you must understand, most of the people of Star City or any of the other cities amidst the dungeon are lifers," she said.
"Lifers?"
"Yes, for those who dive the dungeon, going up and down isn't always the best option, though you can get quite quick about traveling. Eventually, something like Star City gets made. Though it used to be deeper." She gestured at the magnificent structure once again before her gesture spanned out to the many entrances along the wall. "Each one of those leads to a different dungeon floor. That means in a place like Star City, they can gather and concentrate all sorts of resources. In that way, Star City has become a huge trade hub, able to trade with a massive 70 different dungeon floors."
Glancing around, I did a quick count. There were seven layers, each with ten entrances. I squinted. Some of the entrances were only 20 or 30 feet apart. "How do those lead to different floors?"
Lulu shrugged. "Don't ask me. Though, the Orkai have spent many years trying to calculate the strange spatial paradox that is the dungeon," she said. "Some of them claim it branches into the fourth and even the fifth dimension." Even though she said the words with emphasis, there was no excitement on her face. "The Orkai like to study everything," she said.
At this point, we were reaching the city proper and I could see many Orkai and angels amid the pillars. Very often, each Orkai was followed by several of the angels, flying to make themselves eye-to-eye with the Orkai or sometimes flying just above. Most of the angels were women, however, there were a few male angles. Yet every Orkai that I saw all appeared male. Well, either they were all male or I couldn't tell a male from a female.
All of them were massive, at least eight feet tall, some even a head taller than that. But they were dressed in finery, or at least expensive and high-level dungeon gear.
As we moved into the city, the exterior was covered with pillars, as well as walkways throughout the city. Meanwhile, houses filled in the space between the layers. It was truly something of grand design. I could only imagine what else the Orkai could make.
As we walked through the city, on the second layer from the top, many of the Orkai turned and regarded us, pausing their conversations to look our group over. There was even one large dwarven queen that we saw pause and stare at us.
However, the green-skinned humanoids made up the vast majority of the population.
"Just over here," Lulu said, flipping around one of the columns and heading for a building. Like the rest of the buildings, it was made out of the same pristine white stone, though it wasn't particularly large. It had enough size and windows that I suspected it was something like a hotel, or maybe closer to a small inn.
That comparison proved true when she opened the door, and inside stood the most variety of species we'd seen since walking the streets. There was a party of Nekorians, as well as a dwarven queen, and even a Naga matriarch in the corner.
I briefly wondered if she’d been the escaping matriarch from the safe zone we were camped in.
That was forgotten as my eyes were immediately attracted to a woman at the bar. A long black braid hung over her shoulder and I would know that red leather bodysuit anywhere.
Crimson spun around at our entrance and held her arms out wide. "Ken! You finally made it!" She slammed back the last of her drink and waved us over to the bar.
I stared at her as she stood with her arms open, and only after a moment did I step in and wrap my arms around Crimson, squeezing her waist with all of my strength as she shoved my head into her chest and patted me on the back.
"There, there, Ken." She laughed.
I struggled against her, trying not to let her shove me into her bosom.
However, Crimson in this was adamant, it seemed, as she used her full strength to hold my head against her and sway slightly, smothering me in her cleavage.
I patted her on the shoulder, suddenly struggling to breathe, and she let me up. I gasped for air. "Crimson, if you were here…” My eyes narrowed on her, quickly starting to piece together the situation.
“If I were what?" She said, giving me another once-over before she tapped at her chin. "Something about you is different. Wait, don't tell me... You leveled up!" She laughed. "Don't worry, you had the censors with you. And I kept checking to make sure you were fine. There is a new theory on Earth that with these intense shuffles people have leveled up significantly," she gestured at me. "As you can see, it was just another round of intense training."
I squinted at her. "How long have you known we've been down here?"
"Months," she answered, not missing a beat. But then she tapped next to her eyes. "I knew it was going to be good for you. Also, when you barricaded yourself inside the raid, I assume that was you that covered the entrance with sand. I decided to let you guys hunker down and train. Besides, the world went on without you, and there was plenty of other work for me to do. God knows that the UG is making me work my tail off."
"Another round," she gestured at the Orkai bartender, pointing at her drink, and then pointing at me and the rest of my party. "By the way, where's the princess and her guards? I thought they would be with you.”
I stared at her, still processing what was happening. “We just went and fought the boss, so I wasn't... We only brought a group of five." I honestly was struggling with what to say. Crimson being here caught me off guard in multiple ways.
"Well, I'm sure Broken Blade is going to have an absolute blast when she sees this place, and Miriam will find some way to make a penny out of it, I'm sure. From here, there's probably a way back towards the elves." Crimson glanced off to the side, as if seeing through the buildings into the mini entrances that connected to Star City. She was likely actually seeing through the walls as her eyes lit up bright blue, and she used [Eyes of Wisdom] to confirm her guess.
"I haven't been back to see the elves," she said. "I assumed if I showed up without the princess, they would throw an absolute fit."
Felin sat down next to Crimson's seat and waved at the Orkai before pointing at several of the bottles behind the bar, doing her best to order things that looked like Irish cream.
"Yeah, well, we'll have to get them back. Also, Miriam isn't with us, neither is Tish. Don't suppose you've seen them?"
Crimson had already gotten another drink and had it halfway to her mouth before she stopped and slammed it down on the counter hard enough to make the glass crack. She gave me a stiff smile. "I'm sorry, what? The censors aren't with you?" Her eye twitched.
"Actually, it is a little worse. Right after the shuffle, Prince Albar had a set of assassins that poisoned Neldra with something called Healer's Bane. Even reviving her won't fix this one. It's resistant to the cleanses that we have, and also gets stronger when she's healed."
Crimson let go of the glass before she shattered it. "You mean you had none of the censors able to help you?" Her eye continued to twitch even harder. "Broken blade was useless." Red lightning sparked from her eyes, and the bartender took a step away from Crimson.
"Yep, that's about it. But on the good news, it was intense training and we leveled up."
She threw her hands up in the air, lightning all the way down to her fingertips. "But you were in actual danger."
I chuckled at Crimson's concern. Yes, we were in actual danger but at the moment, I was glad for the progress we had made.
"Crimson, calm down.” I told her.
“You don't hate me, do you?" Suddenly the warrior appeared vulnerable.
"No, Crimson, I don't hate you at all. It's not as if you could have predicted what happened in the dungeon, nor could you have prevented it. We all fought the raid with our life on the line, and yes, that was stressful, but maybe it was worth it," I said, taking my drink as the bartender felt more comfortable coming back over to our group.
“How are your stats?” Crimson poked at my CID that wasn’t working.
“They should be good, but that stopped working after this.” I pulled at my white hair.
Crimson raised and eyebrow and then turned to Felin who was sipping different white liquids with various reactions. “Can’t the pussy cat just use the tattoo?”
I took a sip of what looked vaguely like green beer to hide my embarrassment. I should have thought of that, but in fairness I was still reeling from the multiple surprises I’d been hit with. The beer had a bit more bite to it than I expected, but otherwise, it was actually a fairly good beer.
The rest of my party all started taking seats.
"So, Crimson, what else is happening back on Earth?" I asked changing the subject and vowing to get Felin to work her magic with the tattoo the moment we had some alone time.
She leaned back in her bar seat. "A lot's happening. Everything kind of went to shit," she said. "We lost track of almost 70% of active adventurers in the dungeon, and we've only reclaimed 60% of those that were lost during the shuffle," she said, before hesitating. "That number has probably gone up a little, but we know there's a good chunk that we will never see again. We had adventuring down to a science, thinking we could play the dungeon, but it seems we got a little too comfortable," Crimson said, taking another drink. "Because when things really went bad, a lot of the groups that got stranded down the dungeon didn't last long. Without a safe zone to retreat to, or with more hostile forces, like the dwarves or the naga," she glanced at the two groups in the room, "they didn't fare so well."
I shared the glance that she sent the other races. "Should we be worried about them? Here?"
Crimson scoffed, "No. They wouldn't dare do anything in this place.”
“Really?" I asked. "Are the Orkai that strong?"
Crimson bobbed her head. "Oh yeah. If I weren't me, I wouldn't even be so relaxed." She hooked a thumb at the Orkai cleaning out a glass behind the bar. "He's level 50, and he's just a fucking bartender."
The Orkai likely didn't speak English, but frowned at her tone.
"Yeah, I'm talking about you, bub," Crimson said back at him. "The naga and dwarves here aren't nearly that high level. I saw one of the guards, and he was freaking level 82," Crimson said. "He was a guard, not even one of their adventurers. Though, I think he may have been a retired adventurer."
"What about the angels?" I asked, waving a finger around and looking for Lulu, our guide, who seemed to have already disappeared. Her task was apparently to deliver me to Crimson, and then she had ventured off.
Crimson made a face. "Not entirely sure what their deal is, but they're fairly subservient, and oddly happy about it," Crimson raised an eyebrow with a confused look on her face. "All I know is the one I met here over drinks. I talked to her about adventuring, and I guess her entire race pretty much tries to become casters. Those that become melee classes, or worse, tanks, actually give up adventuring," Crimson explained.
"They give up, if they become a tank?"
Crimson hummed in agreement. "I guess, in order to fly, all of their bones are hollow. Which means they have like half of the weight you would expect when they take swings. Not to mention, they're apparently fairly fragile." She shrugged, "At least by whatever standards the angel was talking about. Then again, I think most things are fragile compared to these big green machines."
She hooked another thumb at the bartender again, who glowered at her, clearly not understanding, but not liking her gesture or her tone.
"I fought a couple of them in this arena they have on the fifth floor," she scratched at her teeth and rubbed something off of her nails. "Dude was like hitting a brick wall. To think these things are not only giant walking walls of muscle, but apparently more advanced than humans by a fair margin," she said. "Rather than CIDs," she tapped the clunky watch on her wrist, "they actually implant themselves with something," she mimed injecting into her arm. "And it has all of the technology, apparently powers off of their own internal mana, and does all the same shit."
Crimson held her hands up. "Not to mention, apparently, they have hovercars."
I almost spit my drink out. "Hovercars?"
"Yup, we're talking like Jetsons level hovercars. The angel showed me a bunch of pictures on her little thingy," Crimson made a gesture unable to describe what she was talking about.
"And don't even get them started talking about math," she grumbled. "Both the angels and the orcs, apparently, are whizzes with numbers, and that includes money. When I went to buy a room here, they suddenly hit me with, like, eight payment options. All of them required more math than I think I had even done in college. In the end, I just paid a flat fee. Besides, I have plenty of mana stones, which is, by the way, what everything costs here. Hopefully you have enough for your room. If not," she shrugged helplessly, "then you can just bum a stay in mine."
"Is that invitation open to all of us?" Des winked from the other side. The group had all been listening to Crimson talk.
"I suppose it is," Crimson said. "But maybe I'll get all of you a separate room so I can have Ken to myself. After all, I'm sure you've been hogging him, Des." Crimson stared straight back at the temptress. "I mean, he looks rather hunky now that he's high level," and she leaned closer to me, "Ken, something happened to your eyes."
I chuckled and ran a hand over my face. "Only, now you noticed."
Crimson shrugged. "Now that I have noticed, it's hard not to notice."
"Yeah, well," I pointed at Des, "we did a thing. It may have gone wrong, or it may have gone incredibly right. After all, I think it looks like an upgrade." I decided to embrace my most recent changes. "Before you drag me off," I said, glancing at Crimson, "I think first we have a little shuttling to do. Elysara needs to get back to her people, and that means getting Neldra patched up as well."
Crimson frowned and mumbled into her green beer, "Stupid Broken Blade, can't even handle herself. Why should I help her?" She said the last a little louder.
I poked Crimson on the side. "Because, despite how much you antagonize and tease Neldra, you still like her. Now, I think we have a little bit more work to do before we get to relax. And we need to figure out what to do about school."
Crimson blinked at that. "Simple," she gestured around, "we'll hold class here. Besides, I think at this point you guys have gone far beyond the curriculum that Haylon would have prepared for you. After all, it’s not like they even know what each level looks like or how to prepare anymore. Why not break free of those confines and start here? I'm sure the Orkai have something for learning how to adventure."
Crimson gave me a giant grin. "Besides, you know that going back and trying to pretend like you're college students once again is just going to be stifling. At this point, you are all well and truly adventurers. It's about time we started to teach you how to dive the dungeon like real adventurers and take the training wheels off."
I swallowed audibly because if what we had done so far was considered training wheels by Crimson, I was afraid to see what came next.
AN - Welp, that's it for this book. We will transition into class structure in Star City next book. I am taking 2 days to go back and do a few tweeks on expectations for the raid as well as Ken's mental gymnastics to not kill the Prince. I got... idk a little statted out with Returner and had an odd aversion to them while working on this book. Sorry about that, it's a big flaw since stats are a core part of LitRPG, but I'll work on it. A bigger update to come this weekend. Followed by AO 4 on Tuesday morning.
Comments
Great book. My only critique was we never see Ken's level or stat sheet or what new emperor abilities he gets but it looks like Bruce realizes that so great.
TNM
2024-10-22 22:50:56 +0000 UTCEnjoyed this. Still having trouble keeping track of all Ken’s classmates. A character list would be appreciated, either in the books or just on Patreon somewhere.
whyme943
2024-10-20 04:02:41 +0000 UTCVery good. I hope this keeps going for at least another 3-4 books. I can’t wait to start ards oath as well but I need to finish returners 2 been really enjoying that one too, the least it will give me a few chapter buffer with AO lol. I have a bad habit of reading whole books in a day if I have time haha. I really hope you have enough content to do 3-4 more AO as well haha. Great job Bruce enjoying your books.
Dems
2024-10-18 04:50:44 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter
Kconraw
2024-10-14 23:05:11 +0000 UTCSo we haven’t touched on Crimson’s Aberrant class… maybe with this new race, we can find out what it was like Ken did with the elves
TexasWolf
2024-10-14 01:48:44 +0000 UTCDid we get a character sheet for ken in this book?
TNM
2024-10-13 22:54:12 +0000 UTCI have to agree with the others, Bruce. This book was too short, and Penny was being setup to join the harem but you pulled a Felin, DD 202 again and missed the opportunity to add her. Personally I think you should add about 3-4 more chapters, or more. Give Penny her spot in the harem, with Des to finish up after her, go into the stats from fully absorbing Demon Lord Snu Snu, giving Ken more than enough stats to finally use Portal, and end the book by Crimson rushing to the elven home world and opening a portal for Elysara and Fayeth and everybody saying goodbye. That would be an ending that would satisfy the fans and I think would add enough meat to close out the open ends of the story.
Jacob
2024-10-13 22:31:12 +0000 UTCI feel like this book probably should end earlier (perhaps when they get their first view of the dungeon city); ending after their conversation with Crimson feels off.
Lycaon
2024-10-13 18:49:02 +0000 UTCTbh I don't know why the bet with Albar was made. It had basically no impact on the plot, got pushed to the back and resolved quickly without any plot relevance when the dungeon shuffle plotline started. All it did was make Crimson a shitty girlfriend, which is damage that will long outlast Albar.
ArbabSB
2024-10-13 07:39:20 +0000 UTCI was seriously hoping we would see what had happened to Ken before the end of the book
Tyler Scheibe
2024-10-13 05:09:51 +0000 UTCRelease date please
janes lucas proudfit
2024-10-13 05:03:58 +0000 UTCWhy Is this series so much fun that it is shorter then the 2 other series u are doing at this time. u are doing with chapters with other 2 mare in 40s there is so much u good have done in this book with out making new story lines for Ken I’m drunk so I’m sorry I love ur books and hope u keep making them just make dd longer then u have been that would be awesome. 👍👍👍😋😋😋🙏🙏😍😃😊👏😀😃😄😁😆😅😇😊👍👍
Devil420
2024-10-13 04:43:31 +0000 UTCAfter reading listening to 202 I think that Penny should have gotten her chance in 203. I have said several times I think Dungeon Diving is getting somewhat the short stick. Since we were told no book for October there is time to add a few more chapters perhaps it would be better if a certain Frost Knight gets her time before the next book.
Aaron Berube
2024-10-13 04:18:13 +0000 UTCDisappointed that this was so short. Really don’t like RD and can’t get into AO haven’t even finished book 3. This needs more effort to expand story and longer books. Now I have to wait for 3 cycles to hear more on this story. Personally would have liked DJ expanded a bit more as it seems to jump to an ending really quick after the action. Maybe just me but I like a bit more story on the characters after following for so many books. Didn’t hate this book just frustrated it ended so quick. Other books are longer by 30 to 40% why not this one. If I got to wait so long at least give me a lot to read lol
Mason656
2024-10-13 04:10:22 +0000 UTCAnd i tell you more, this book is not BAD because of Ken's dense and unlogical behavior in relationship or his harem, it's bad because of good ideias the Author have that got overshadowed by the unbalanced parts of the book that were clearly too slow and out of tune with the story or in tune but too rushed and adding the fact the end got too much loose ends like how much Ken and the others progressed while trapped in the Raid? What was Ken's stats and level before the Fight with Snu Snu? Why ken now look more like a anime vampire protagonist? Understand my point?
Sett
2024-10-13 03:32:50 +0000 UTCKinda sad penny didn't get the spotlight in this book, I'm on team penny rn
SiI3nt
2024-10-13 03:13:09 +0000 UTCThat's my point, what is making him belive it will just be a hollow and quick one night stand if the other main girls from the other parties showed they want to build something with him just like he wants? They clearly want to be in a harem nota hentai like you said, so whats stopping him?
Sett
2024-10-13 03:07:19 +0000 UTCI agree, thanks for mentioning that. I love the work and the series, and I want it to keep its humor, its adventure, and the relationships going! I’ve been listening to the audio books while getting daily updates, so that made it a bit glaring. I also always take these daily doses as very rough drafts, and appreciate them greatly!
Jake Li
2024-10-13 02:24:46 +0000 UTCBecause his doesn't just want to sleep with everyone and then move on. He wants to have relationships with all the women he is with and that takes time to build and maintain. This is a harem not a hentai.
Bob Bryan
2024-10-13 02:03:40 +0000 UTCBruce, there are a few things lacking in this and the book before. Some comedy with the harem, not Ard level but all the characters have a little Ard in them, just not to his extinct. And the slice of life moments are lacking. It does feel thrown together. If I might make a suggestion, do not read the prior books, listen to them before writing the next books, gives you a great feel for the characters and you can do other things while listening. I think that would help a lot. Thanks for your work.
Mick
2024-10-12 23:48:26 +0000 UTCSame boat
ReadingObsessed
2024-10-12 22:12:23 +0000 UTCWe didn't get a new woman in this book so now Bruce will need to add one to the official release. So who do you think it will be?
Joshu Savage
2024-10-12 21:02:54 +0000 UTCChapters in his other books are even shorter?!
Clinton Walsh
2024-10-12 20:26:09 +0000 UTCI still wanna see variations of some races. Such as a different set of dwarves that view the hive kind as abominations or something like that
Blnded
2024-10-12 19:27:40 +0000 UTCAnd also not just leaving in the air what happened to everyone else or the RA group. There’s a part of me that wants to see that they were being blackmailed (with proof) by the SJS to kill Ely and that gets used to dismantle the group and be done with it as well
Blnded
2024-10-12 19:21:28 +0000 UTCI think the issue with ard is yes it’s amusing and can stay fun but also he’s gotta have some real character development. You’re right in the fact that in some ways he prides himself on not knowing much but he def needs to build at least some better situational awareness or something. I get he was raised simple but something needs to happen apparently again where someone important comes close to death or just dies because he’s a fuck up and he needs to build/learn from it. He did for a bit in the first? Book.. I think? Idr but still that’s the only real issue I have with him. Sure be snarky sarcastic and whatever but at least develop his intelligence or something
Blnded
2024-10-12 19:18:55 +0000 UTCI really like Bruce’s stuff but AO is way overhyped. Guess I’ll just wait for that banger returners defiance to start back up.
Collin Rarig
2024-10-12 18:16:33 +0000 UTCArd is amusing, but it’s plucky sidekick amusing not main character. Just my opinion though, to each their own.
John
2024-10-12 18:16:25 +0000 UTCUnnecessarily mean, but what’s wrong with DJ, sure it was long but the ending with the kids was cool no?
ABU-UBAYYAH SALLAU ABA-HURAYRATA
2024-10-12 18:09:54 +0000 UTCGiven how Bruce ruined the end of DJ and has been throwing out how things function the moment they become inconvenient in DD, I’m not starting another series until he proves with DD he is capable of not completely destroying the series he writes.
Lynderyn
2024-10-12 18:08:05 +0000 UTCIf the prince thing is getting reworked and the prince is allowed to live as long as he was, then Gafar needs to be killed and the royals class needs to be taken in.
Lynderyn
2024-10-12 18:05:49 +0000 UTCNah ard’s oath is amazing hahaha come on give it more credit
ABU-UBAYYAH SALLAU ABA-HURAYRATA
2024-10-12 17:51:16 +0000 UTCYeah, unfortunately Ard is next, it’s the only one of all Bruce’s book series that I don’t really like, the rest of his books the main characters seem to try and work to progress while Ard just stumbles along with each book basically relying on one trick he learned in that book and otherwise just watching everyone else solve his problems.
John
2024-10-12 17:50:23 +0000 UTCSpeaking of skills and such, couldn’t Ken use eyes of wisdom to look at them? I know Crimson uses it that way.
John
2024-10-12 17:44:53 +0000 UTCIs that ard’s oath?
ABU-UBAYYAH SALLAU ABA-HURAYRATA
2024-10-12 16:35:11 +0000 UTCArd is next, then Returner and then we'll get back to DD.
Hugh Sweeten
2024-10-12 16:32:49 +0000 UTCArd. Back at the first couple books I wasn't into it but that's really changed. I'm hyped for more now. (Kinda the opposite of the DD books.) Ard and crew has really grown on me. Bring it on!
Hugh Sweeten
2024-10-12 16:21:28 +0000 UTCWill we continue with DD204?
ABU-UBAYYAH SALLAU ABA-HURAYRATA
2024-10-12 15:54:53 +0000 UTCI thought it was a great book. The dungeon shuffle was a brilliant idea and will keep things fresh for a while. I do agree that it feels like there's a couple too many dangling threads at the end. At the very least the Snu Snu segment maybe needs a third chapter where we get a teaser on what he got out of the deal.
Jason Constant
2024-10-12 14:40:04 +0000 UTCI understand and follow several writers who write multiple at once, but they don't do it in such a complex way. They either alternate chapters or write arcs, being multiple books for a series at once, to avoid the issue we're running into here. It is easy to see with the complaints people have about this book and the last one that there was a large shift in the writing and tone. This only happens because the books keep getting left off at horrible spots like this. When we start a new book, it doesn't jump into anything and takes a while to build up, and when we get near the end of a book that he doesn't want to go on too long it gets cut short. I would have rather waited longer between books to get a book that made sense. The same kind of thing happened with Dragon's Justice with a lot of stuff feeling skipped over or characters making choices that seemed odd in later books because it is truly difficult to keep track of all of these things at once. I hope that it doesn't continue to be a detriment to the writing of the books to be done this way. It's fine for shorter series, but the longer things go on, the more complex they get. When writing 3 or 4 stories and they all get to be 5+ books long, I am sure there is a lot of overlapping between new character ideas and plotlines.
Reed Alexander
2024-10-12 14:36:31 +0000 UTCMy reference to the school thing is about the structure of it. Making it seem like they were building up to something with the school and having class structure, along with a set timeline that we were following. The first 7 books have been across not even 2 years? The only way I can see the series being finished without going beyond 20 books is to start wrapping things up in the next few. We have hardly resolved any of the major plot threads that have been dug into with the other races, Ken being the emperor, or anything outside of Haylon. I don't want it to be 20+ books because we only get 2 or so a year, and I don't want it to feel like it is rushed. Not to even mention the lack of stats or common sense throughout most of this book. So much of these could be cut out, and I am worried for the series if it continues like it has been. This is my problem with how slow the last couple of books have felt. Either it's going to be more books than any of his other series have been so far by a long shot, or it's going to feel way too fast.
Reed Alexander
2024-10-12 14:28:52 +0000 UTCWhat's the next series?
ReadingObsessed
2024-10-12 14:21:37 +0000 UTCStat update please! Maybe even an Epilogue chapter with pussy cat magic & stats!
Stephen
2024-10-12 13:51:01 +0000 UTCI don't know about anybody else, but, this chapter seems a little lack luster. I mean, it would be nice to know what his stats are now.
John Duncan
2024-10-12 13:47:14 +0000 UTCLooking forward to the next one! a race that strong to fight and train with, and new bird angel girls to seduce!
Jim Payne
2024-10-12 13:44:05 +0000 UTCI dont get It....Why end now? God.... I cant believe i will say this but i have to be straight and say: THIS BOOK IS BAD, it have amazing ideias on it? YES, and are INCREDIBLE ones, but this book in a whole is simply too lacking and have too much loose ends, and you dont need to pay too much attention to notice and Ken is turning into a dense thrid class anime character, why he still resist at the girls that obviously like him and want to be with him in the party and in bed? Is like he's way of thinking returned to the first book and the progess in this book is always too slow if not rushed, there is no balance between.
Sett
2024-10-12 11:57:05 +0000 UTCGlad to see you getting back into your groove with DD considering your stance on the last book. I like the star city angle to open up your writing and give access to all kinds of races without having to force Ken's level high way faster.
Austin Wolf
2024-10-12 11:45:56 +0000 UTCIdk if you have followed or writers ever but ones that are writing 3 books concurrently tend to take more than a year to get back to a book vs his 2 and a half months. Or there are the long term single book writers that scroung every detail about every nook and cranny of a room that give you a thousand pages and they take over 6 months to write out one book but that not his type of writing
Austin Wolf
2024-10-12 11:43:54 +0000 UTCShe assumed the censors were with him so when she freaked out that's when she realized about the assassins and what not
Austin Wolf
2024-10-12 11:40:35 +0000 UTCYes the Ardtasticness shall commence shortly!!!
Christopher Gino
2024-10-12 11:39:14 +0000 UTCUh this is the last chapter of the book friend. Also he told her about the assassins it's safe to assume that she save either the prince dead or royal college gone when she last checked on Ken
Austin Wolf
2024-10-12 11:36:47 +0000 UTCThe part where he can barely use Eyes of Wisdom because of mana really needs to be taken out. Just got done with the other books again and he’s causally uses it REPEATEDLY at least three other times. The dwarf invasion, the hunt with Felin and the fight in the server room at the castle. It’s a glaring continuity break to leave it as is.
Hugh Sweeten
2024-10-12 10:17:49 +0000 UTCKen didn't even tell Crimson about The Prince and the bet. Or is that in the Next chapter?
Jeffrey Stearnes
2024-10-12 10:15:11 +0000 UTCI'm thinking with how unpopular Albar arc was, he spent more time rewriting it then pushing arcs up. Besides, as-is that's not wholly bad considering each is meant to happen over roughly 3 months.
NovaZero
2024-10-12 08:55:32 +0000 UTCKinda painful for me to realize that this series has gone from my favorite to a distant third place. 202 and this one just haven’t done it for me. They joked about Ken being a thick headed anime protagonist early on but it’s really true at this point. I do have hopes for the next book. The last chapter sounds like things may pick up. I hope so. I really want this series to be popular so it will continue.
Hugh Sweeten
2024-10-12 08:51:41 +0000 UTCI’m sorry but compared to your other great books that Ending sucked and why such a short book felt way too rushed very game of thrones last season
Andrew Sidebotham
2024-10-12 08:47:30 +0000 UTCUmmm… can you clarify why being mostly in school or not impacts the story? My mind immediately jumped to Harry Potter which took place entirely during school. So I’m trying to understand how this differs. In my mind, they just graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in dungeoneering from Haylon and are about to start a Masters program in Star City. Not sure how the degrees translate to universities outside the USA.
Clinton Walsh
2024-10-12 08:45:12 +0000 UTCAnd here is my struggle with this genre. As soon as things start happening the book comes to an end and the momentum drops out. In a novel, this would one-third to one-half way through and the momentum would be building into grander events while resolving all those other threads that are still hanging. Having said that, DD is my fave of Bruce’s series since book 1. So I’m glad things are finally getting on track. I think the dungeon city idea is brilliant and will solve a lot of issues. Like who will be in Candace’s party now that Ely is heading home? Will Fayeth still think heading home is the wisest course? Will Ely stay (or quickly return) to act as a diplomat for this new city? I’m really excited what all of this advanced knowledge will mean for Ken’s party. He’s got his upgrades. Now it’s their turn. Time to reset the CIDs. Those have basically been parroting already seen and little understood information. Time to upgrade to Orkai gear that informs the individual and isn’t relying on servers based on earth. I don’t need the stats myself but recognize they are a staple for many individuals here. Find nekorian homeworld Get Ely and Fayeth home. Figure out Ken’s classes Start a city adventuring education. Catch up to Crimson? If she keeps pace or outlevels Ken and party then this could be difficult. Check on guild? Bring grandparents to start leveling in city? Actually face ‘reality’ and realize that he needs to grow his harem or start losing raid members.
Clinton Walsh
2024-10-12 08:14:06 +0000 UTCI personally don’t care about the exact stats I’m just curious about his level and what happened with his whole race/class after the fight. Looking forward to them getting injected with the Orkai version of the CID next book.
John
2024-10-12 07:57:50 +0000 UTCI doubt Neldra would risk that when surrounded by enemies and Ely in her care
Jacob
2024-10-12 07:55:49 +0000 UTCFirst the dwarfs and now the orcs i love the fact u are changing the stereotypes about these races it's nice and refreshing to have something so diffeent
Derick Mapes
2024-10-12 07:52:29 +0000 UTCHumm. Can’t think of a good cover for this one. Poor Penny still waiting. Kinda reminds me of the last one where he forgot and had to go back and write a chapter for Felin. Changed Ken makes no sense. Don’t want to show something from one of the last chapters that’s a surprise…. I don’t know. I’d say this is my least favorite book so far. At least the last chapter was interesting I guess.
Hugh Sweeten
2024-10-12 07:42:34 +0000 UTCCrimson has always called Neldra useless. It’s basically a term of endearment at this point. In this instance it is used because the strongest human/elf thinks Neldra is good enough that she should have been able avoid being poisoned or to overcome said poison. What if Neldra had the same training thought as crimson and actually has a potion in her back pocket that would heal her back to 100%. But she wanted everyone to get a taste of genuine adventuring so decided to not drink the potion yet?
Clinton Walsh
2024-10-12 07:40:20 +0000 UTCResolved way too fast, and I think after how off 202 and 203 have felt that things really need to be structured better for the next book. The story is dragging and though there is some improvement in this book compared to the last one, it still feels like there was an awkward shift between the prior book and these 2. I can't help other than to feel writing multiple other books between books is really causing the writing style to feel like it has jumped all over the place. I am not sure how much longer that this series is planned to go on, but it will not make any sense for there to have been 7 full books about school life and the entire plot moving along slowly for it to shift and finish in another 2-3 books. If things keep up at the current pace it feels like it will take 30 books to finish, and with how long the gaps between books are, the thought of that is concerning.
Reed Alexander
2024-10-12 07:26:13 +0000 UTCYeah this chapter felt really fast. Like Ken mentioned the prince’s assassin attempt and she she didn’t even bat a eye
Jared
2024-10-12 07:25:08 +0000 UTCThis is the weirdest ending I've seen so far. I made a comment on the last chapter that it finally felt like something happened in this book, but it literally only proved my point. This book and the last one could have and SHOULD have been condensed into a single book. Bouncing between multiple books, having to wait months between Dungeon Diving books, and them feeling half assed and rushed has really turned me away from the series for now. I definitely will not be able to follow the next one as closely, and I truly hope it doesn't take a damn year to get enough content to feel like something happened again.
Reed Alexander
2024-10-12 07:20:56 +0000 UTCHe likely did it because it would take another 20-30 chapters to wrap things up. Better to let it fall into another book so its not rushed
Jeremy Patrick
2024-10-12 07:11:34 +0000 UTCFeels like an abrupt end to the book without resolving a number of the threads in it
James Wafer
2024-10-12 06:58:49 +0000 UTCAlso, would’ve loved to see Crimson’s reaction to the news of the prince and Gafar’s deaths. That would’ve been hilarious😂Alright, back to listening to DD 202 audiobook😁
JediChris85
2024-10-12 06:57:07 +0000 UTCWould love longer chapters in DD, overall I like this book. Time to use portal and bring the class back together.
Jared
2024-10-12 06:56:45 +0000 UTCFantastic as always. Wish we could’ve gotten a reunion epilogue with everyone, with their reaction to Star City as well as what happened to Ken with the transformation, and I’m still curious if there was anything good, interesting, or newly incriminating in Albar and Gafar’s CIDs, but otherwise fantastic book. Can’t wait to see him and Penny finally get closer in the next book as it seems to be heading that way. Definitely looking forward to the return of Ard and friends.😁
JediChris85
2024-10-12 06:50:34 +0000 UTCKen in his new look
Kris Solstice
2024-10-12 06:49:30 +0000 UTCi think that a perfect ending for litrpg reasons might be them going up to the room and Felin checking his stats... honestly having one of them ask 'what the fuck?' as the literal final words would be hilarious
person
2024-10-12 06:44:51 +0000 UTCBruce - maybe it isn’t a thing, but who is going to be on the cover of DD203, given that Ken doesn’t actually sleep with anybody new during the book? Lots of hints that it is going to be Penny, obvs, but nothing more than that…
Ben
2024-10-12 06:44:29 +0000 UTCEnding is somewhat abrupt, especially since there is no mention at all of the Prince, the bet, etc. Even a casual 'I assume you won that bet' followed by an equally casual 'Yeah, but since I killed the Prince I doubt I'll get to collect on it.' would have done I think. Also I am a bit disappointed that Penny didn't get a shot to join the Harem yet. And Crimson calling Neldra useless because she got poisoned is quite bitchy, seeing as Crimson did fuck-all to help them Nonetheless, I like it, but I am ready for some Ard. #Ami4Harem #Tish4Harem #Neldra4Harem #Penny4Harem #Selene4Harem #Taylor4Harem #Felicity4Harem #Candice4Harem #ClassA4Harem #74+wives4Harem #Cream4Kittens #Succubunnies4BunBun
Az Reel
2024-10-12 06:35:30 +0000 UTCOn a side note happy we are heading back to AO, it is my favorite of your works.
Richard Anderson
2024-10-12 06:35:22 +0000 UTCHa Jetson hover cars
Cory Orr
2024-10-12 06:34:41 +0000 UTCI think it is AO 5 not 4 but i love how Bruce brought everything together can't wait to ready the book and see the cover
Kris Solstice
2024-10-12 06:33:31 +0000 UTCFor once I agree that this is a good place to end the book. So is earth ready for sex demon Ken the ninja lover?
Richard Anderson
2024-10-12 06:32:57 +0000 UTCI love this
Christopher Conatser
2024-10-12 06:28:56 +0000 UTCDamn, Star city is going to be an interesting hub in the dungeon going forward. And a hotpot of different races. It's interesting to note the Oraki are both higher level AND more technologically advanced than the other races. I'm curious to know if either race will have an addition to the Harem? Although the Oraki genders are unknown. Maybe their 40k Orcs and are actually fungi or pod people?! With their tech maybe they've done away with gender? But was hoping for a Penny moment before the book ended, but guess it'll be next book. How many of the Haylon class are going to become Lifers I wonder. And damn, can't wait to find out what has happened to Ken with the tattoo. Maybe they get an Oraki implant? Does it give them a HUD and VR game interface? So much potential going forward!
Jamie R
2024-10-12 06:22:14 +0000 UTCOne thing, if you can add them. Add his stats and everything at the beginning and then at the end. That way we know where he is and have a better idea.
Bob Bryan
2024-10-12 06:21:45 +0000 UTCI think it has to do with word count
MillionLittleE
2024-10-12 06:14:43 +0000 UTCGood book! But fuck yeah time for Ard!!
Mister42
2024-10-12 06:14:07 +0000 UTCIt’s frustrating that DD only gets 30 chapters, while other titles get 40-50.
PuniMo
2024-10-12 06:12:25 +0000 UTCI miss Ard’s brilliant stupidity
The Rat King
2024-10-12 06:01:55 +0000 UTC