Patreon Newsletter 11-6-23
Added 2023-11-06 11:08:37 +0000 UTCHi Everyone,
Things are going well. I just finished the edits for DD 104 last night. Totaled out at about 11k words added with the last pass. A little under 10% added, but I think it was all necessary.
Shipped it off to an editing service that does 24 hour turn around. They split the project down and have a team edit it. Not something I normally like to use, but we do what we must to make our deadlines.
For those of you curious what you’ll see change, most us it up until the Underroot plotline is unchanged with maybe some slight alteration to language. After the Underroot there are some additional scenes and we moved Crimson’s scene so it makes a little more sense.
Anyway, we see Duke Selmia’s trial, go on a date with Elysara and the younger Duke makes a public plea that forces Elysara to meet him and spark up some conflict with Ken.
There’s some more interaction between Ken and the younger Duke Selmia sprinkled in. The mission after they return from the Nekorian trip is shored up to make a little more sense and dive into Ken’s head more, then there are two additional scenes after the failure of the mission and before the wedding along with giving Ken some more agency during the wedding.
All in all, I’m happy with the changes.
I’m also excited to get back to Ard’s Oath 2. I paused at chapter 11 and getting back to it now, Ard is fun to write because you don’t exactly have to be correct, just ostentatious and a little nosy.
We’ve met the mother and kicked off the plot line I have planned for her while intertwining it in a few others. In the planning for Ard’s Oath 2, my biggest problem was that I had too much content on the deck for the book, so I need to get cracking and churn out some chapters, but it is flowing well.
At this point, I’m basically planning to write/edit Ard’s Oath all the way up to the 7th. Then join my wife in the hospital for kid #2. Of course he’s going to be compliant like that, right? Right?
With the kid and being behind, my focus is really just on getting Ard’s Oath out. Q4 is probably 50% of my sales for the year, so I’m fairly motivated on getting the book out and I have time, just will probably use a last minute editing service again and eating into next month’s cycle.
It is looking like Dec might be more of a skip month than the non-harem book I had planned. I’ll dabble, but for Patreon, my current plan is to switch you all over to DD201 after Ard’s Oath 2.
If I do cook anything else up between them, you likely won’t see it until later.
As for other projects, they are getting pushed a little to the back burner with some stress I’m under.
Ard’s Oath has been switched to Jessica Threet and she tells me that Jack is unavailable and she’ll do it with Chris Boucher. DD 104 and Dragon 9 are scheduled to be recorded this month and whichever one lands in my lap first will get setup for December 9th. The other for Jan 9th.
I’m making a move away from Rozelyn and Lewis, they still have Dungeon though at present. In working with Jessica we are going to try and rotate through several of their troupe's available male narrators to give some difference between the series, but all of you tell me that you love Jessica and she’s easy for me to work with. So, she’ll stick around for the female voices.
Webcomics are moving through pre-production. It’s a long process, sorry.
SSV comic is sort of moving along, no dates at present that I can commit to. But there’s a lot of new cover art and I’ve been trialing more American styled comic artists.
Oh! Also, I’m going to be re-uploading some art that has been deleted from the prior months. I’ve gone back and forth on the idea that the art is semi-exclusive for those who were subbed at the time, yet there are always tons of request for prior artworks in my inbox, I’m just going to put them all back up and let you all enjoy.
Otherwise, please continue to enjoy my stories and I’m working to write you more!
We'll start Ard's Oath on Wednesday.
Comments
Thx for the update
Kconraw
2023-11-10 01:42:36 +0000 UTCGiven all of the items that were pointed out as world breaking changes in 104 were still in the rewrite, I cannot say that Bruce is deserving to be in a top 3 rank.
Lynderyn
2023-11-10 00:50:19 +0000 UTCBlasphemous.. Tamryn didn't drop it. There is a difference between dropping a series and taking your own time to do with it whatever you like. You just dislike you have no control over the authors release schedule. Tamryn is far and beyond the best herem/litrpg author in the genres together or separate. Though that's my opinion and yours may differ for whatever reason. Please don't spread nonsense or hate on authors for not adhering to your personal desires. I find that opinion unwelcome, not you yourself, but that specific take you made. Give people their own time to do what they want, or go write your own book.
MistuhBogan
2023-11-09 12:09:11 +0000 UTCCongrats on the new kid. Hope everything goes well. Looking forward to new Ard and DD201 soonish after. Gives me more of an excuse to throw money at you.
Jericho Knight
2023-11-08 00:25:52 +0000 UTCYeah, I just noticed no art links prior to last august. I think I saved it but IDK. So this is nice.
Jericho Knight
2023-11-08 00:24:41 +0000 UTCI had no idea she drop herald. I know she hasnt put any updates on her page cause she been waiting on audible to get back to her.
Wade thomas
2023-11-07 15:36:45 +0000 UTCAh but first immortal is the beginning of the universe isnt it? Dar soul is pulled through time from the sealed earth. Which is right before LR. Thats why dar meets them in the prologue
Wade thomas
2023-11-07 15:35:10 +0000 UTCI call a vote to exile Tamryn from our recommendations and mentions for the crime of dropping Herald of Shalia! I'll have to look into Dakotas work though haven't read that yet =)
RTV
2023-11-07 15:31:36 +0000 UTCI forgot where but he said all his books are part of the world tree in "manaverse" my working theory is that SSV and some other works like DJ are going to tie into the degrading mana issue in the universe that Dar mentions at the end of first Immortal and hires the LR MC for and spawning the premise for DD. Edit: it would also explain why he never answers this question that I have seen lol
RTV
2023-11-07 15:28:20 +0000 UTCYay! I want more Mei and Aurora! Lol I wasn't so into the art back then despite being subbed and didn't save =( also congrats!.
RTV
2023-11-07 15:23:40 +0000 UTCYeah most definitely. Dar meets the cast from LR. And the White Monarch is the lady Bai in MC. But DD might just be a branch of yggdrasil otherwise they would run into Dar’s cove he makes.
Wade thomas
2023-11-07 12:46:51 +0000 UTCHonestly, the way he wrote LR, FI, and MC, all his books could be part of the world tree (even DD, with the dungeon actually an extension of Dar's mind and the dungeon just pathways through the tree trunk). That's the great thing about fantasy, anything is possible.
Jim Adams
2023-11-07 12:41:12 +0000 UTCIm curious… is ards mantle a part of the first immortal universe? As anchors and projectors as another mode of cultivation. That said is the SSV world a part of the world tree? A previous sealed world and ki is mana causing powers?
Wade thomas
2023-11-07 12:17:27 +0000 UTCJust one more day lol I'm not addicted your addicted 😂
MultiSteven2011 .
2023-11-07 08:01:15 +0000 UTCIs Bun-Bun on the 103 cover what you had in mind for how the cute little shit (😂) looks or is he more of a realistic rabbit?
Azazel
2023-11-07 04:14:55 +0000 UTCGot to say, I love your stuff, but DD is absolutely the best. Even better than “Supervillains” and that is saying a bunch.
David Harr
2023-11-06 22:06:33 +0000 UTCAwesome news about your 2nd child, congrats. No worries about posting things if you need a little bit a time, as we all know life happens sometimes.😎 I am looking forward to DD104. And the loveable crazy Ard. 🤣😂
Tim Nielsen
2023-11-06 21:09:46 +0000 UTCCongratulations to your family on the incoming little one! Looking forward to seeing Arden and the gang again. Hoping we can get more with Zuri at least if she's sticking around.
Voror
2023-11-06 19:54:01 +0000 UTCCongratulations on the new addition to the family. With Actors Everywhere Jessica is fantastic. "Alyssa Poon" is also REALLY good. But definitely stay away from Robert L. Bradvica. He sounds like he is permanently congested and nasally. Unfortunately his narration/voice acting is uninspiring as well as congested and has ruined, audio wise, some really good books.
Clifford Wilson
2023-11-06 18:18:37 +0000 UTCI love ur work and if u get to stressed with everything I don't mind waiting a month or two for new chapters. A chapter a day can be a lot especially with a new kid "congrats by the way" so take it easy if u need it.
Derick Mapes
2023-11-06 17:56:43 +0000 UTCStill think it’s worth saying you are still top 5 best author I’ve ever heard/read. It goes 1. Bruce Sentar 2. David Burke 3. Dakota krout 4. Tameryn tamer 5. Alvin Atwater
Wade thomas
2023-11-06 17:47:25 +0000 UTCCongrats on the second kiddo. Im happy to hear about the changes and can’t wait to read them. Can’t wait for the Audio for the books aswell. I really enjoy Jessica she has a great range and think it’s smart to switch up so things don’t run together like you said. Thanks for enjoying what you do Bruce, I think it shows in your work and how you respond to criticism positive or negative.
Dems
2023-11-06 16:37:38 +0000 UTCAwesome stuff. Congrats on having another kid.😁 I fully accept any delays that come along as a result. Life happens. Loved DD 104. I would love to see some artwork of that final scene at some point. I know the art you post is usually focused on the stunningly gorgeous women of your books, but some action art of that ‘training’ would be so friggin hilarious. Can’t wait for the next one. I love that you are switching to Jessica Threet for Ard. No offense to Rozelyn Rader, she’s good, I’ve definitely heard way worse, but I just like Jessica better. She seems to have more range, and to me at least, her characters just feel more genuine and natural. Probably describing that terribly. Anyway, whatever route you go I Will be buying your stuff. Enjoy spending time with the family. Take care.
JediChris85
2023-11-06 15:27:06 +0000 UTCI know it isn't easy for audio, but I for one am extremely grateful you are switching stuff over to Jessica. Even if we have to wait a little for her, she is a damn amazing talent. Nothing against Lewis and Roz, but their vocal range just isn't at the same level. They do good stuff when there isn't a lot of different voices, but then it all breaks down into the same voices for tons of characters. Anyways, keep up the awesome works, and try not to stress too hard about deadlines as we aren't expecting you to be a 'chained to a bed' author lol. I know you know the book I'm talking about.
Eric Bailey
2023-11-06 14:01:26 +0000 UTCCongrats to you and your wife on baby number 2! Very considerate of them too send you the due date 😆 Glad to hear the move to Jessica. I don’t hate the other narration, but like Andrea Parsneau, I’ll pick up a book simply because Jessica narrated it. Looking forward to Ard Crazyness, and the edited DD104! Thanks for everything!
Jim Payne
2023-11-06 13:59:23 +0000 UTCCongrats and good luck with the second kid!
AZ
2023-11-06 13:59:20 +0000 UTCLooking forward to the revisions! Congrats on your second kiddo as well!
Jim Adams
2023-11-06 13:17:32 +0000 UTCCongratulations on kid #2, and glad to hear Jessica will be taking on Ard's Oath! With the mention that anything before Underoot is unchanged I have to ask: was the major continuity error of floors 11-15 suddenly being on floors 6-10 addressed? That was a huge immersion break right from the start.
Ben Cooper
2023-11-06 12:43:39 +0000 UTCCongratulations to you and your wife on Kid #2. Looking forward to Ard's Oath 2. I'm very interested in Ard meeting his mom.
ArbabSB
2023-11-06 12:21:30 +0000 UTCThat makes sense. I would like to see different voices for each book, because they do kinda run together when they voice multiple series. If that can help with scheduling I'm here for it.
Awesomesauce Stuff
2023-11-06 12:19:01 +0000 UTCMostly scheduling. I also sort of think using the same male narrator for everything makes it all sort of run together.
Bruce Sentar
2023-11-06 12:16:14 +0000 UTCRecording is scheduled for the end of December.
Bruce Sentar
2023-11-06 12:12:27 +0000 UTCCollege Second year courses begin at 200. First year 100, second year 200, third year 300, fourth year 400
Edward Phillips
2023-11-06 11:58:16 +0000 UTCWoot!
Nukin Futs
2023-11-06 11:48:08 +0000 UTCDd 201 not 105?
Swagmaster
2023-11-06 11:40:53 +0000 UTCAgreed! so glad we don't have to wait for DD201 for as long!
Nozzy
2023-11-06 11:34:41 +0000 UTCAre you rotating male voices to find one we'd generally agree on? Or just to find one that has more open scheduling?
Awesomesauce Stuff
2023-11-06 11:24:40 +0000 UTCAwesome! I am not sure he is part of the audiobook narrators associated with whom you use, but Robert L Bradvica I would caution against. He has somewhat of a nasty nasaly lispy voice. He is probably a wonderful person, but he is very unheroic sounding. Not that someone with his type of voice couldn't be heroic, but it's emersion breaking in my opinion. Like the guy you find creepy for reasons you just can't put your finger on.
MistuhBogan
2023-11-06 11:21:29 +0000 UTCAll great news! Thanks for the update I’m super excited for those audiobooks and DD 201 🤩🥳
Azazel
2023-11-06 11:18:01 +0000 UTCJessica is a great choice…any idea on when AO audiobook might be released?
Haran Prana
2023-11-06 11:14:10 +0000 UTC