Neural Wraith - Draft preview #2
Added 2023-02-03 14:17:58 +0000 UTCI'll probably leave this draft preview up, but the final version (i.e. with some tweaks) won't be posted until much later.
This is the near-final version of the cover whose early draft I showed a while ago. Figured I'd post it here for any final feedback, as I'm about to finalize it with the artist.
The cover hits all the points I need to worry about commercially. Despite being full body, it pops enough that I'm not concerned about that aspect.
This is a more casual Kushiel. I'll at least ask for bigger boobs, as they're a bit small compared to the ones described in the book (ironically, the opposite issue as the last cover).
Anyway, let me know your thoughts.
Comments
It's probably closest to a railgun. I didn't exactly have an image in mind, so I just asked the artist for a suitably large sci-fi-ish gun.
K.D. Robertson
2023-02-04 04:24:30 +0000 UTCWhat’s the gun next to her? Is that the rail gun? Also, awesome cover! I always enjoy the color pallets used in cyberpunk settings.
GooseQuack
2023-02-03 21:44:45 +0000 UTCGood catch. I think it's mostly a palette issue or a style issue. Zeke's hair looks more silver than white, and I'm not really sure how I'd ask for this hair to be "more silver" than it already is. The tones that the artist prefers sometimes blurs colors together (e.g. red eyes come across more as a dark amber)
K.D. Robertson
2023-02-03 16:59:08 +0000 UTCKush’s hair looks just like Zeke’s, but I thought Kush has Silver hair, not white? Is that a background / highlights thing? Or is sliver hard to distinguish with white as a palette?
Jeff Ford
2023-02-03 16:03:14 +0000 UTC
