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🧼💀 "15 seconds" II pg 1-3/7

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well would you look at those fuckers *looks fondly* 

anyways, i spent 5 hours on flats and text, i dunno what any of those words mean anymore, so if you see any typos pls let me know thank you! 

have a nice evening 

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🧼💀 "15 seconds" II pg 1-3/7 🧼💀 "15 seconds" II pg 1-3/7 🧼💀 "15 seconds" II pg 1-3/7

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Ahhhh~ thank you ❤︎❤︎❤︎

CreatureXIII

This is like. The most sensual thing I have ever seen.

Brookie

ooooh~ thank you so much for this gigantic comment ❤︎❤︎❤︎ i'm gonna rub it all over my face for extra nourishment!

CreatureXIII

I love your art so much. Especially Soap's expression in the "oof!" panel and in the middle top panel on the first page. I swear I can almost *hear* his voice to go along with that pout. Of course he wasn't sleeping! He was being good!!! The body language, expressions, and the way you frame your panels is just incredible. I love the incremental changes in those first three panels: Soap "resting his eyes" alone in the first panel, the second panel when Ghost enters and we see his shadow and his voice bubble and Soap starting to respond, then finally that last panel with Soap fully turned toward Ghost who has entered the viewpoint just incredible! The text box between the first and second panel stitching them together, showing that Ghost is reacting to his first look of Soap which was probably the same as Soap looks in that first panel just-! Yes good!! And then you just have so many great other panels! Poor Soap though, immediately forgetting the instructions he was just given! xD That second page is so fun too, especially the expressions. Love the look on Soap's face for 'oh you're not that cold!' and then Ghost's own "Oh you have no idea." Incredible. Thank youf or doing this, it can't be easy to draw out a comic like this but the results are stunning! (and finally context for some of the teasers you've been posting! :D!!!)

Xophin


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