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[WIP] Our Apartment Chapter 0

I would appreciate feedback on this intro, I know some context and description is missing. But it would be helpful all the same!

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I like it, its a good intro for the story portion of things. reading it kind of late so it might just be my eyes but it might need a couple look overs for editing but I cant wait to see how the story progresses from here.


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