Hypnosis app to college students who go to the gym.
Added 2022-01-19 03:54:28 +0000 UTCPlease let me know if there is something wrong or something that is better!
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Thank you! I may draw the characters I have drawn again someday👍
書記隊
2022-01-22 09:09:06 +0000 UTCI am happy that you are posting more frequently :) I hope someday there will be more of this girl https://www.fanbox.cc/@utsuro-butai/posts/3040958 But of course, it is up to you. All of your work is great!
Cynthia Beck
2022-01-22 00:33:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the translation! " sink deeper and deeper..." is a good way to put it👍 I remember hearing about it often in foreign hypnosis videos. And about "they become a doll that will do as I wish." I felt that my English translation here was too subtle for my expression, so your English translation is better!
書記隊
2022-01-19 09:09:46 +0000 UTCうっ。。。ふう。。。 Uuoh... phew... やっぱジム通いの女は締まりが良いよな。。。 As I thought, a woman who frequents the gym sure is nice and tight... クールダウンのストレッチなんてものはそもそも無い。 There was no such thing as a cooldown stretch in the first place. ジムに来た女に催眠アプリを見せて、 I show the hypnosis app to the women who come here, 俺の暗示をたっぷり頭に流し込む。 and fill their heads with my suggestions. 後は俺の思うがままの操り人形だ。 With that, they become a doll that will do as I wish. このジムの評判を無意識のうちに上げるように暗示を入れておけば、もっと女が来る。 Then I implement a suggestion in their subconscious to praise and improve the reputation of this gym, thereby attracting even more women. 笑いが止まらないな。。。 I can't help but laugh at that thought... OO、ストレッチはまだ終わってないよな？ OO, the stretches aren't done yet, isn't that right? はい。。。もっとしてください。。。♥ Yes... please give me more ♥
Cradily
2022-01-19 05:25:06 +0000 UTCもし私の翻訳が欲しい Fan Translation of the image set: ------------------------ お、OOさん今日も来てるな。。。 Oh? OO-san is here today as well... お疲れ様。 Good work. 今日もクールダウンのストレッチやる？ Shall we do some cooldown stretches today too? え、ストレッチってしてました？ Eh, were there these stretches? あ、そっか。憶えてるわけないよね。 Ah right, there's no way you would remember. え？ Huh? ------------------------ 眠れ Sleep はいふかーく落ちていく。。。 Yes, sink deeper and deeper... あぶね。。。 That was close... すげえハマってんじゃん。 You've fallen so amazingly deep haven't you?
Cradily
2022-01-19 05:23:19 +0000 UTCThanks for pointing that out! I appreciate it because there are so many areas where I wouldn't notice the weirdness on my own👍
書記隊
2022-01-19 04:50:03 +0000 UTCAs you ask for suggestions… her breasts looks a little bit strange but I can't clearly describe it… anyway, still a great work!
scrbed
2022-01-19 04:23:05 +0000 UTC
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