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Nami asphyxia

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Nami asphyxia

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Oh sure. Right now I'm only making videos with Cecilia. I will add 2 minutes to the video for the new year (December 25-30) aproximately. After that I will add another 1 or 2 minutes. And if there is no post in a week I will try to write on the page above under "I am planning to do:" how the work is progressing. I want to focus on the quality of the video. I redid some moments in the video a couple of times. There is still a lot of work on the video. I myself did not expect that the work on the video would take so long.

IWBB

Hi! Hope you're good; almost a month from last post, ¿how's progress so far? It'd be great to have some news from time to time :)

kuro

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pepepr

OK I will try

IWBB

Please more strangles and show the dead/dying face a lot more :)

Teem

Gotcha, those are just what I feel could make the video feel more brutal. As for the struggling and twitching, it doesnt need to be much just some slight upper body rotation left and right and fingers twitching once or twice before she goes out. Maybe her body can also have a slight final spasm after she she dies. But yea take your time if you ever plan to addon to this video.

finitedark

I agree it would have looked better. But when it comes to strangulation, it's actually quick. In the movie, of course, you can stretch it up to 5 minutes. "A slightly longer scene of her passing out would be nice" - I agree. Jerking and fighting would be for example if she was drowning. And of course it could have been done better, and I would have done it in another 2 months, for example. But in general, thanks. Very helpful comment. There is something to think about.

IWBB

Serious criticism (in a good way). Thanks for the comments. I'll take everything into account.

IWBB

Some critique. The death seems a little tame, needs maybe a bit more struggling and twitching before she dies. A slightly longer scene of her passing out would be nice. Her expression could have shown more fear/pain/anxiety the closer she got to death, currently it looks like she is just nervous. you could maybe make her mouth bigger tongue hang out more to show choking. Her movements could have been a bit faster to show she is frantic. Otherwise, your work is good, loved her showing defiance at the start by giving the middle finger. Also enjoyed her death expression. The dildo piston was very well done. edited my previous comment. should have paid more attention to video.

finitedark

Just in time for episode 1000! xD Not really a fan of asphyxia, i don't feel it like a sexy punishment, just like a bit of a waste, but that's just my opinion. The video was very good tho. Now very excited to see what happens to Sicily!

kuro

I dont know really know what to say about it, it'd good, certainly not bad but idk kinda tame imo, still hot tho. Excited for Sicily tho!

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