Guts and Glory 2 - Rewrite 2; Electric Boogaloo
Added 2022-01-02 12:47:14 +0000 UTCAs of today, the old links will stop working. You can find the previous version of the story at this download link up to chapter 36.
Chapter 1 - This one is mostly unchanged but there are some backstory bits I tweaked.
Chapter 2 - Starting off with small changes.
Chapter 20 - At this point the story is moving in a totally new direction.
There is much from the old story I will keep or re-use, editing it to my new needs, but more on that as I get to it. As of now, everyone's fate has been altered in some way.
Comments
I read the rest of it and it has been fantastic. It seems like every time you have to make adjustments the story feels more polished. I like that all of the characters have a definitive personality and that all of them are at risk of being gurgled. There were quite a few cliffhangers that were killing me, but in a good way. Just makes me look forward to the next chapter lol
Marcus Thompson
2022-01-03 14:35:20 +0000 UTCLooking forward to reading it.
Devilnaga
2022-01-03 12:25:04 +0000 UTCUploaded the rest!
Aces
2022-01-02 21:28:49 +0000 UTCWell the first 10 chapters are pretty great! I’m liking the changes that you’ve implemented so far 👌🏾
Marcus Thompson
2022-01-02 15:44:17 +0000 UTC
