Burn the World Down 32
Added 2024-10-23 13:33:01 +0000 UTCChapter 32 - A Most Magnificent Sunrise
~In which… Behold, the Power of Red Bull! Plots and plans clash together. Things seem to go right, only for many other things to go catastrophically wrong. And altogether, the North Pole Campaign ends on an explosive note that would surely be remembered for decades to come, and not at all misremembered. ~
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Not gonna lie loved this chap the 3 nations stuff is nice just the Aang part was really tragic and graphic always felt a bit bad for bro in canon but this was something else 😭, can't wait for what's next , l loved Zhao's whole and it didn't end by betraying him the whole give him your flame like it's a spirit bomb 🤣
Salih Mustafa
2024-10-26 08:19:36 +0000 UTCI did not think that there would be a continuation, more concern about your health, but I will not say that I am very glad. The end caused two feelings. On the one hand, Zhao is Great, who gave emotions 800% good reviews, and then even crazier Azula, to be honest, crazy is not the part that many people love. They love the same Azula from the second season. Next, Qatar and all this nonsense with 10,000 against 1000, cool, but I want to develop further, it would be interesting to look at the Third Wave personally wants retribution for this whole adventure, because it is a spark of Resistance. Dalek, Kyoshi Warriors, they are probably the main joy of this book, neither Jun, nor Yor and Anya (whom I can't stand), it is Kyoshi. I hope for their quick return, or Suyuki's return, the others are out of the game and they will be replaced by the Tai Lee sisters. I want to see how Han treats Mei, Tai Li, Ursa (a great influence on Zuko), Toph (hopefully as a friend), and possibly other kameo. And then Princess Yui, well, I hope she doesn't stay at the North Pole. She just recently appeared in the chapters and chronologies inside the book. And it would be interesting to take it with you, and I believe that you will write it perfectly. Like, we have Anya, a comedic character who is just funny (not for me). I'll say about the plot, it was fucking awesome, except for the part with Kyoshi and the Kyoshi Warriors. Otherwise, I wish you good health, a writer's mood and other pleasures. (And yes, alas, like everyone else, I am selfishly waiting for a new chapter as soon as possible, please forgive me)
SImax ArAtA
2024-10-26 01:27:16 +0000 UTCThank you for the great chapter, I'm assuming Suki and the others are in the spirit world somewhere. Here's to hoping that they are found safely. That said, Zhao had a truly magnificent send off. I hope you are well, stay safe out there!
Kz3838
2024-10-25 19:06:21 +0000 UTCTruly Zhao will forever be remembered as "The Magnificent". He was fun before but he truly was the greatest bro this chapter. Alt timeline is a good wrap-up. I hope Suki&Co return though managing charater bloat is an issue. Need excuses to send people away on long missions or something. :V
Elvwyn
2024-10-25 17:43:34 +0000 UTCkind of sad that Yue "died" before being more fleshed out...
costochondritis
2024-10-25 17:21:11 +0000 UTCGet well soon Infonticus! PLENTY will be annoyed if you kill off the Kiyoshi Warriors. Why not have them have a sort of rivalry with the Ty Lee sisters?
BronRevo
2024-10-25 15:13:38 +0000 UTCGonna be honest, would have been greatly annoyed if you killed off the K Warriors. Especially if it was because of Kyoshis intervention. Considering all the shit that she did, I don’t see why she’s getting mad at the girls. Hopefully you write in some scene where Khan gets his hands on the lesbian and beats her silly for daring to hurt his girls. I get that it’ll be hard to write the Ty sisters as well as the K Warriors but if you can pull it off, their interactions would be fucking great. I love all the characters you have around Khan and I think you’ll do a great job of incorporating the sisters as well if you put in the effort. Sure, it will ramp up the amount of words but i think it would be worth it
Daddy Ivan
2024-10-24 18:29:36 +0000 UTCWhy not suki and the ty sisters? He is a conqueror after all. Also get well soon man.
Uzu
2024-10-24 15:00:58 +0000 UTCGet well soon.
Nate
2024-10-24 14:18:59 +0000 UTCGlad you're doing okay.
Tristan Taylor
2024-10-24 14:00:26 +0000 UTCWhen you have the ice cold redbull at 4am that’s definitely how it tasted. He ascended!
PegasusJake
2024-10-24 05:18:40 +0000 UTCPlease give us updates on your status, I’ve been waiting anxiously for any update
Spirit Stones
2024-10-24 04:33:52 +0000 UTCThis was a fantastic end to Book 1! Kudos to you for such a gripping finale to the water tribe arc! (On a side note: BRING BACK SUKI!)
K
2024-10-24 04:19:14 +0000 UTCWhoa. This is like seeing your teacher at the grocery store. Don’t you live on discord?
Dirk Gent Lee
2024-10-24 04:12:02 +0000 UTCPlus he got to drink the Red Bull
Dirk Gent Lee
2024-10-24 03:45:22 +0000 UTCWelcome back Sir! *salutes* Also I very much like Suki's perverted shenanigans to come back so where is this vote taking place?
RiZan
2024-10-24 03:37:05 +0000 UTCIm for keeping the girls alive. Suki as been a great offset that keeps this from getting to grim with how brutal Khan gets.
GentlemanMad
2024-10-24 02:11:27 +0000 UTCW chapter, but can you please not kill off the main cast🙏🏾
Freewat
2024-10-24 01:13:37 +0000 UTCI like zhao now after reading this.👍
Yoshi Shoji
2024-10-24 00:46:35 +0000 UTCHoly s$&t this was peak. Bruh just wow
AKi1red
2024-10-23 20:23:16 +0000 UTCShieeeeet that (possible) ending was so goooooood. Im glad you decided to drop so many chapters at once I spent all day reading those, thanks a lot for writing. Loved every minute of reading this, you made my day. I hope you recover friend, you are my favorite fic author and the world would be lesser without your writing in it. Have a great day, thanks for writing.
Jose Ricardo Passos
2024-10-23 18:28:06 +0000 UTCYou turned Zhoa the most textbook evil middle management character into a Bro. I tip my hat to you
Sksk4128
2024-10-23 17:29:07 +0000 UTCHoly shit bro I’m here nearly tearing up over zhao of all people! It’s the last stand I think we all want in life… its all the more sweet when it’s to defend someone we care for.
PegasusJake
2024-10-23 16:03:01 +0000 UTCI had feared that you were tired of the story and this chapter was going to be a bad end, but I liked it
David Green
2024-10-23 15:47:13 +0000 UTCI hope khan writes a amazing book about zhao dude deserves it
ExodiaTheForbiddenOne
2024-10-23 15:14:50 +0000 UTCMan, you’ve been busy
Dark Wolf Shiro
2024-10-23 13:34:10 +0000 UTCWawzaz
A Bellator
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