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"The Vore Rehabilitation," & "The Vore Unification": A Series (MPS#67 & PE#51)

Sini and Feo the kitsurin have been locked in a rehabilitation prison, the dragon's metabolism taken from him. How does he retrieve it? How do two friends bond (literally)? These will be answered, and much will be reconciled, in this progressively-horny adventure. 


22 days I spent working on this story which is, partially, a response to my boredom with the prevailing slow pacing of modern stories—but, also, mine. I've experimented throughout with style, with genre (I added a heist element)... Part 1, I definitely tried christening to nouns and verbs, cutting down on adjectives to focus on forward movement and provocative imagery. Inspired by many stories I don't normally turn to to get inspired (the chief one of them being Black Leopard, Red Wolf by Marlon James). Let me know what you think of the pacing; of the ideas & plot-oriented style and pacing, which does definitely assist in telling this kind of story in under 8,000 words and in helping me get through all the shapeshifting and gluttony and zaniness especially in the latter part. 


Now, enjoy while I go write the Warhammer lizard vore/growth series. :) 


"The Vore Rehabilitation," & "The Vore Unification": A Series (MPS#67 & PE#51) "The Vore Rehabilitation," & "The Vore Unification": A Series (MPS#67 & PE#51)

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