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Soren Narnia
Soren Narnia

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harbingers

An educator's watch of the winter skies sets him in anxious motion to shelter the innocent.

Music: “Cicada Killer” by idokay, “The Heir” by Emmanuel Jacob, “Meeting the Goddess” by Kyle Preston. All rights reserved. Interview with Ila Patton, Galax, Virginia, from the Blue Ridge Parkway Folklife Project collection (AFC 1982/009), American Folklife Center, Library of Congress.

Released everywhere else next week.

 Art by S. Patrick Brown, https://www.instagram.com/scalawagarts/

P.S. I've been informed that over on the Knifepoint Horror Discord server, a writing contest will soon kick off. All are urged to enter by writing their own Knifepoint-ish story and submitting it for possible publication in a digital anthology. I'll do a narration of the winning tale (though I'll be leaving the judging to others, so sending me pie will get you nowhere, and said pie will merely be categorized in the warehouse as Miscellaneous Pie, though of course, it will still be eaten.) For more details on the contest, join the Discord group! https://discord.gg/mrVSYG5Uhd

P.P.S. A burning question: What was the scariest thing ever revealed when a character in a horror movie moved carefully and fearfully into their bathroom and then jerked the shower curtain back all at once, terrified something might be hiding behind it? It seems to me like there's NEVER anything there and I may as well just go get some Pringles when that scene begins. Prove me wrong, those who know of YouTube clips to the contrary!

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Comments

Thank you so much! This story really resonated with me. It's a while ago now, but I'm pretty sure I immediately listened to it twice in a row, which is unusual for me. I'm an amateur fiction writer, so I think I might notice writing strategies or decisions more than most listeners, who just enjoy. Of course I listen for fun, like everyone else. But I try to comment not only about what captivates me, but why. This can be embarrassing, because sometimes it seems like I'm critiquing Soren's work for his own edification, which I'm not! I just occasionally try to mention what I hope other listeners might not have considered. Usually I'm just a regular fan girl. :-) Anyhow I hope you're not disappointed by my comments on other stories. You'll find only one common characteristic in all my comments (and replies to my comments). They're too long! I do edit my own work, but edit a comment? Nah. I leave you all to slog through them, or more likely give up... p.s. Full disclosure. I did edit this comment ;-)

Jill E Merrill

Great thoughts here Jill. It’s good to read the words of someone who understands the nuances of Soren’s storytelling to an incredibly analytical level as you! I really feel that Soren appreciates your comments and thoughts. Am now going to check out some of my fave KPH stories to see what your thoughts about them are. And: I hope you are well in life, and have a great day Jill! -Nate

Nathan Michael Dufresne

Love this story. So good 🫨

Violence Zack

If I want heartbreak, I listen to "bots." It's my favorite story to activate my gratitude sensory. I must say this is added to the list as well. I curtsy.

Hilde Marciniak

Boring analysis of candy corn ingredients. Regular candy corn contains gelatin, which is a meat byproduct and thus not vegetarian. Vegetarians do not eat meat or meat by products. Vegans do not eat products from live animals, such as milk. Thus, in threatening vegan candy corn, Soren was targeting the least average candy corn, and presumably the worst tasting to eaters of carnivorous candy corn. However I strongly suspect Soren was making up the whole thing. All candy corn tastes horrible, so why bother.

Jill E Merrill

It was great. I have an old Folkways record of Jean Ritchie talking about her life. It reminded me of that, even though Ritchie was quite a bit younger than this lady at the time of recording.

Christopher Helton

Mmmmm, sweet sweet Neccos….

Soren Narnia

is vegan candy corn the standard? because up until now i have always hated candy corn and anyone associated with it. but.,...is there... Are you saying there is a rare meaty candy corn version out there? could it be? i bet sorren likes that civil war quarry candy known as necco wafers. probably loves them, that..druid!

colin frasier

Thank god I’m not a curious person!

Soren Narnia

Ok, I just watched a horror movie with quite possibly the worst of all shower scenes: Jack Frost. Dirty shower snow man monster. That’s all I’ll say. YouTube search at your own peril for those curious.

Mike M.

Ohhh! That’s a good one

Lori K.

I think there’s not one, but TWO scenes of people behind the shower curtain in the first series of American Horror Story…

David

Probably best for us that you haven't...

Rebecca R

Swarming rats is something I’ve never seen, thank god…

Soren Narnia

The birds reminded me of a semi-repressed childhood memory; coming accross a group of swarming rats on a "charachter building" "gentle stroll" some mank november in the arse-end of nowhere . The footpath took us through some farm out buildings (where I guess they had found a food source) . We backed away without incident. The sight of them all moving like one entity is now swirling round my brain again. Otherwise thanks for another great story

Rebecca R

Hi Jill! I was just making a wee joke… riffing on the barely-there connection of two guys working with kids in a classroom setting, wocka wocka. But now that Soren has confirmed it as canon I can’t figure out where the joke ends or begins!

Connor Salanger

I'm asking Connor, not Soren!

Jill E Merrill

Huh? How did you figure out the connection? I'm baffled.

Jill E Merrill

The chills I got from, “Anders, my hand won’t come free.”

Molly S

If you hadn't had Anders admit right away to making up the phenomenon of a "helmsman's front," I'm sure I would have googled it, exactly as I googled "Circle of Frontier Guardians" after listening to "gifters," only to find no mention of its existence. But that's what I love about your stories. They are complete worlds unto themselves. Thanks for another beautiful haunting.

Jeanette DeMain

🙏 Screw your courage to the sticking-place, And we'll not fail.

buddhapugz

Wow Soren! This one is so sad and haunting yet there’s a tranquility to it as well. The imagery of the birds and the dark triangle over the schoolhouse is so sharp. Beautiful story as always.

Neha Lal

Well here on Patreon you ARE the zeitgeist!

Lori K.

Ha, I lost the Zeitgeist sometime around 2003 and never found it again!

Soren Narnia

Jill, I think Soren is trying to tell you to get down with the zeitgeist in his own subtle way

Lori K.

CAVEMAN 1: Dude, you gotta check out the new thing, it’s called fire CAVEMAN 2: Look, I’m just not into following the zeitgeist, okay?

Soren Narnia

That’s okay, Jill…by their very nature, zeitgeists come and go ;)

Lori K.

Here's the full recording; her witch stories are at the very beginning: https://www.loc.gov/item/afc1982009_afs21526/

Soren Narnia

The voice in the beginning of the episode had the dialect and even sounded slightly like my late great grandmother. It brought me to tears and I never expected to be so emotional at one of your episodes. You are an exceptional story teller.

Kayley Grissom

Lori K: I forgot to put your name on my reply so that Patreon will tell you about it. Maybe. I'm too old to understand the zeitgeist of social media posting.

Jill E Merrill

Thank you! I have a fangirl fangirl! ;-)

Jill E Merrill

Wow. The lengths you go to for KPH! Can you post the entire recording, including the witch story?

Jill E Merrill

Nailed it!

Soren Narnia

Was not expecting a huge KPH lore reveal in this story! So Anders Mather is the one who gives out vegan candy corn and tells stories about blueberries… BIG

Connor Salanger

Speaking of which, I think Macbeth may be the creepiest, spookiest play of all time. I’d like to do a straight horror adaptation of it sometime!

Soren Narnia

Jill, your analyses are always compelling and interesting. Oh, to have such a fan.

Lori K.

I’d love to hear that story!

Lori K.

That voice in the beginning is a fragment from a real interview with a woman remembering growing up in rural America, taken from the Library of Congress history archives. She goes on in that recording to tell a witch story!

Soren Narnia

Storks, not stories.

Jill E Merrill

What amazing little parts make this story so ineffable and beautiful. I love the repetition of three: three sides to the triangle in the sky, three sides to the wooden top to the wagon keeping the three dead children from falling out, the narrator wondering about the personal meaning of three, and the three never conceived children. And again, the three sides of the triangle in the sky. I also love the birds. The doves, in their strange yet unthreatening circles, terrified me far more than Hitchcock's birds. The stories were just pleasantly weird. A non-omen of children not to come. I really loved this story. For it's subtlety, it's sadness, it's hopelessness. Quietly beautiful, so well thought out that every phrase seemed to blend in. Except maybe the woman who began the story, who I can't claim to understand but somehow played the town against the principal perfectly. What an addition to the Narnia annals.

Jill E Merrill

So beautiful and haunting. 💜

Lisa

Once again masterfully weaving the terrifying and tragic! This ghostly, wintery world is a sad and lonely one, and self-made. Especially for the ghosts! Beautiful and poignant. Good luck to the contest writers!

Mike M.

It may be the only one that truly does!

Soren Narnia

Yep, I believe I know exactly the one you have in mind…

Soren Narnia

This year, instead of fall, it’s this terrific dread-inducing KPH tale that is the harbinger of winter! Thanks, Soren. As for the shower scene I propose a role reversal, with the terror creeping in from outside the curtain. And, it’s probably a moment that paved the way for every shower scene that followed it!

Lori K.

Suitably creepy as we head into the fall. I’ll have to re-listen to take it all in.

Ryan Fahey

Hmm, does the tub scene in The Shining count?

Frequentj

🙏"When shall we three meet again? In thunder, lightning, or in rain? When the hurly-burly's done, When the battle's lost and won."

buddhapugz

So good

Laura Forgeson

Lights off, candle lit, door closed…here we go

Lori K.

Ah yes, yes….

Soren Narnia

This is the right answer.

Henry Linehan

https://youtu.be/yz50BJZRDo8?feature=shared

Nichole Hamilton

Schwing

Dougal

Yes!! 🖤🖤

Amy Fernandez

The best notification to get

Charles Pickering


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