I'm digging how the thicker outlines are looking. Especially now that I got a better understanding on when to use them, like with body parts being in front of the body, like an arm or hand. Or thickness depending on distance between characters. It really makes everyone "pop" out more. In Lune news, I scrapped and rewrote the chapter that's due to hit Honeyfeed Friday, as a friend mentioned it was boring and nothing happened in it. I'm behind on writing, but I guess this turned out okay, as the rewrite would've meant I'd have to throw away the ideas I was going with for the next chapter. Even so, man, I'm pacing real slowly compared to where I wanna be. I have a feeling I'm gonna have to rush the ending and write it all within a few days with little feedback, and post them in a bulk post right before the contest ends. Here's hoping it doesn't come to that!