Live Die Waifu 10
Added 2025-12-04 04:19:26 +0000 UTCThe time loop fic got kommissioned!
Part 1 of 2.
If you need a refresher, go HERE.
Comments
Edits topaz that shown with -> shone by gems in her -> the gems and while all of you are likely experts ... but -> remove either "while" or "but"
Meudon
2025-12-04 20:05:24 +0000 UTCSo, I'm guessing L and Mel (hey they are alphabet buddies!) will need to be completely broken in some way before they can be rebuild into something the rest of the group can trust. That or you're just going to keep them as the social antagonists for the story while Q would be the physical antagonist.
Steven Stiring
2025-12-04 15:20:23 +0000 UTC"Captain Mel" should be Captain Mal.
William H
2025-12-04 11:27:13 +0000 UTC"First movie advantage" should be first move advantage
William H
2025-12-04 11:14:12 +0000 UTCAlways amusing to see a Lee variant operating without fucks to give.
GAMB42
2025-12-04 05:09:10 +0000 UTCThis story is so interesting, but that could be because I love cultivation systems on the Swords & Sorcery scale. Mostly. The focus on the character's interactions because everything else around them is much the same every loop Great update!
Arri
2025-12-04 04:56:19 +0000 UTCRecently read this fic can't wait for more of it, still also looking forward to getting back to the usual cycle. I know we have another 2 commissions to go and I want to read them too I guess I just want more writing and I'm enjoying what I'm reading.
Alice
2025-12-04 04:55:08 +0000 UTC
