The Baby of the Family - Part Twenty-Two
Added 2020-11-11 23:57:24 +0000 UTCThis is the final update of the original commission. In case you haven't seen the post on my Patreon there will be more to come but there will be a break whilst I write it.
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Scott's family go on a vacation and he has to manage his situation whilst away from home. As usual for Scott things don't go too well when they go for a family day out. Stay tuned for more of Scott's adventures to come in the future!
Comments
Loved it and can't wait for more. The only critcism I have were the long loopholes inbetween chapters, but I get that it was to be a different style and to leave things to the imagination. A few paragraphs of some instances at home after the beach and before the Canada trip perhaps was skipped for trope purposes, but these types of stories could do with some tropey stuff thrown about. Another outing to the mall buying baby stuff, introduction to more baby things and how his behaviour has changed, how things are progressing with the teacher, Lyra showing up to see him to tease him? Ideas for when it returns I suppose!
2020-11-13 18:08:09 +0000 UTCpoor Scott Elliot is a bully, i hope his mother punishes him too. I love how everyone has just accepted that Scott is now the baby. but mum needs keep an eye on that older brother. can't wait for more.
Jocelyn Shanks
2020-11-13 09:23:32 +0000 UTCElliot is turning into Scott from the beginning of this story. This kind of made me sad at the end. No redemption, no actual help, or even epiphany. I wouldnt be surprised if the Mom just wanted another baby because he was about to leave the house.
2020-11-13 06:37:10 +0000 UTCPoor scott elliot is a bully, i like though that everyone just accepts that hie's now the babby
Jocelyn Shanks
2020-11-13 02:26:08 +0000 UTCThanks for a great story love the end when Scott come to terms with fact he’s only a baby. And in the future I hope to see how life has gone for the baby
2020-11-12 21:12:02 +0000 UTCyes!
2020-11-12 16:32:53 +0000 UTCMaybe Elliott should get punished, he’s such a meanie to Scott
2020-11-12 11:23:04 +0000 UTCGreat story really enjoyed it. Thought everything was tied together well at the end. Great job another classic
2020-11-12 09:22:06 +0000 UTCGreat finish!
2020-11-12 02:01:12 +0000 UTCGood finish
Pierry Louys
2020-11-12 01:31:18 +0000 UTC
