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Evan Dorkin
Evan Dorkin

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WIP

Nosing this along as much as possible.

Penciling tight because my hand wavers a bit when I ink. Frustrating. Tight pencils can kill some of the liveliness on the page, especially since my inks tend to stiffen things up some. But it's what I'm used to and what I have to do if I want the finished art to be decent. I'm still never used to how much snappier and interesting the rough sketches are as opposed to the finished piece.

Look how dirty I'm working on that page. A lot of pencil smudging. My cartooning fails health inspections.

So far I like how this is going. Pete's always fun to draw because of his cartoonier design. Keep messing up Bill. Then again, he's always messed up.

WIP

Comments

Thanks, I'm pretty happy with Pete's look here.

Evan Dorkin

Pete looks so good here!! Or "so bad". However the intention was you nailed it hahaha

Padoo Emantsalon

Obvs I can’t see the version in your head you’re comparing it to, but I think it looks really good!!

Tim Kocher


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