I did a big revision after reading a particular comment criticizing Chaeyeon.... at first I merely made her agree to marry Seunghyun because she wanted to help paying her parents' debt and because she's "dying anyway". A reader criticized that Chaeyeon is so boring, like the typical goody-two-shoes that would selflessly sacrifice herself. But now I made her more active in her choice to be a mother. She wanted to understand Jihyo's happiness. She wanted a sense of purpose. She did it for herself. I hope this comes out better... Chaeyeon is a deceased character so there's not screentime to build her character, and she is indeed a goody-two-shoes, but I hope she doesn't come out like a Mary Sue at least >___<
EP 98 is almost finished, just 10 more pages to color, I hope to finish today. See you soon <3
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